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orchids8888

@orchids8888

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#551

Thank u for gmail...😃

The update is fabulous...👏

Thank u for this beautiful insight into their past... Khushi was totally outspoken & daring in loving Arnav... It was love at first sight for both Arnav & Khushi... I genuinely want to know the reason of their break up in the past...

Khushi should genuinely think & live in the present... Is she feeling guilty that as a widow she has no right to be happy? ? But its totally incorrect because Khushi has done full justice to NK... Now he is not there; so she can definitely think of Arnav... Its not betraying NK...

Khushi should definitely give a chance to Arnav... Foe her sake... & For Meera & Mohan's bright future... Its difficult to live life all alone without love & companionship... Hope so Khushi soon comes to terms & realises that Arnav's love is true & pure...

Please update quickly...

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maina95131

@maina95131

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#552

Beautiful update. The struggle he faces to feel the closeness to his child. The flashbacks was awesome...she made the 1 st move.

Really love this story...I'm so glad that I gave it a "second chance". Now it's one my favs!!!!

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#553

Omg.. Khushi was so bold.. Loved it..

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sweety421

@sweety421

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#554

Simply wonderful...
I Loved the insight to their past...
They both were soo passionate...
I wonder what made them go apart...
Khushi is having a battle with herself...
But she can't fight the desire...
I hope Arnav and Mohan will both join them fo trip... Waiting to read more...
Superb writing dear...

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Uzii

@Uzii

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#555

Really loved the insight of their past n looking forward to read more abt the war as well which ASR declared so it would be fun as khusi is not herself when she is near him so let the fun begin.

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sakhter90

@sakhter90

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#556

Lovely update! I'm glad khushi has a freind like lavanya.
Looks like both khushi and Arnav could not forget their first time together. And I know khushi cannot forget her first kiss. They were both on fire! Looks like after a decade that fire has been slowly ignited. Loved the flash back. Can't wait till next update

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savvz

@savvz

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#557

wow... this peek into the past was needed... at least to kinda understand their potent reactions to each other...

you write beautifully dear..

and thanks for introducing us to other writers... i am sure i ahve missed couple of them.. :)

waiting for the next update... ;-)

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Anu567

@Anu567

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#558

Mirabell,

So wonderful a chapter...I got this sensation of being suspended in time...the flashback from their earlier meeting in a different time period - both Arnav's and Khushi's point of view was a genius touch. You think this did not show progress? Of course it did...progress in Khushi's moving forward...one baby step at a time...away from NK and his shadowy memories...progress in Arnav's acceptance of Khushi's forming an indelible part of his future...he is not quite sure how...and of Khushi herself understanding the effect Arnav has always had on her and will continue to have. And the kiss...whoohoo...kyaa thaa woh...you blew my socks off. So sensuous. So true blue. Loved the bit where Arnav understands what Meera and her companionship can mean for Mohan...and it was decidedly heartening to see how Arnav and Maya decide to put aside their differences and become each other's support system in raising Mohan...so all sorts of progress...don't even think of apologizing, writer jee...I am now waiting with bated breath for the journey of the two families to Mathura. knowing you, I suspect this will be an epic and life-changing event for all concerned!!

Best,

Edited by Anu567 - 10 years ago

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deepa

@deeswarna

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#559

sorry for the late unres. it was one beautiful update as usual. n i think i can understand wats holding khushi back, i think its the fear of going through wat she went through ten years ago is not letting her go. at that time she had naren to pull out of her grief and to make love again but this time may be she fears if things go back she wont be able to make it out again.

i love the part where arnav with mohan, arnav being a doctor knows how mohan lifestyle and life can be affected but he also knows that science has made so much progress that if mohan gets the adequate help at the right time then for sure he will be leading a normal life like all the kids of his age. for me personally mohan is not different, he is just a special child who needs to be tended with loads of care and happiness. n watever maya went through after the delivery, i wish no woman should ever go through that.

very heart touching update mira and especially the flashbacks of the past.im just wondering if they were so into each other then y their ways got seperated. looking forward to the next update

Edited by deeswarna - 10 years ago

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nitrit95

@nitrit95

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#560

only one word to describe your story BEAUTIFUL no other words thk u for updating sorry that i never commented before its so painful to have a speacial child at home for both parents ive thought in speacial before n trust me no one knows the amt of pain the parents go through