T2 | ArHi FF Second Chances | Link to Thread-Three, Pg 140 - Page 60

They just borrowed my womb for nine months - there ... There u got me .. I am completely drowned in emotions that I possibly can't even express fully!!! The way u describe ASD , the way u describe the emotions that a parent of a special child goes thru, the eternal hope that all will be well ... I am spell bound ... And then you start on their history of pure absolutely erotic kiss and I m still trying to wrap my head around the first part here!!! Khushi's character is so attractive and grounded and adventurous .. Depending on the time.. It's just so endearing and mesmerizing to see them reminisce their past in their own way and the slip of tongue , the step forward by him, the feeling of intimacy that he evokes as the past washes over her reluctant mind... It's just beyond awesome!!
I am absolutely in arshi heaven , thank you very much

Loved the flashbacks and the memories of both Arnav and Khushi.

Wow!! That was one hot and sweet update.
Sweet because Mohan throwing his leg around Arnav and cuddling into him put a smile on my face.
Hot because... You know why 😉

I'm not being judgemental here, but I'll tell you this.. I never would have pegged Khushi as such a bold type. It's like we are reading about a different person than the present Khushi. But then we did not get to see what Khushi is really like till now, did we? All we saw is glimpses of a woman trying to keep her emotions in check, hiding behind the wife who is deeply affected by the loss of her husband. When will we get the feisty Khushi back?

I love how you gave both their perspectives to the kiss.
And that dare 😳... Can't wait to know more about their secret encounters.
This peek into the past has left me with as many questions as it gave me answers.

Arnav and Maya.. So it was not as easy as it now looks like to maintain their friendship. Whether they did it for Mohan or for themselves, I have huge respect for them for what they have achieved. Not to forget, Kailash too.
Maya had complications during her pregnancy and delivery? Did that influence the happenings of their life in any way?
I'm as curious to know about Arnav and Maya as I am about Arnav and Khushi.

I love how she calls him by his entire name... I see that it's a habit from the start. 😊

I think it's only natural for someone who had a loving husband and a happy marriage to feel that she is betraying NK's memories by thinking about another man and to feel guilty about feeling the way she did about him. I just hope that she gets over it soon.
And it's sad that she thinks being a widow, she is not entitled to happiness again. I think she needs someone to reassure her that that is not true.
It is Lavanya who made her text him back the first time extending her friendship. I think it will be Manorama now who will make her take that first step towards finding love again and making a life for herself.

I am convinced that Arnav is accompanying them to Mathura. Because Arnav Singh Raizada is not someone who backs off after declaring a war, is he? 😉
I have never look forward to witnessing a war like I am doing now. 😃

What made Khushi break up with Arnav than, If they were this explosive?

Reading this update made me uncomfortable too.. God what is with arnav-khushi they talking over phone can do so many things.. Loved the update.. Awesome..

awesome update
sneak peak of their past wow
so answer for both mother & daughter awaits at the door step

It must be really hard for both Arnav and Maya to be unable to touch their child. I hope one fine day, Mohan could allow his parents to love him through touching and Arnav could touch his son to his heart's content without any hesitation.

Each one of your update is like a seduction of a woman slowly peeling away the layers of clothes in front of her lover - it gets better and better and even the pace is part of the seduction, it makes the reader appreciate the slow glimpses that are being revealed and not rush to the end. So yes, I am thoroughly enjoying the new relationship they are building while reminiscing about where their initial relationship started. Before you took us there, you made sure we are fully cognizant of their current situation, responsibilities and also the situations that have made them what they are today - completely different from the impulsive uni kids they were. I love the glimpses you provided of their impatience and restlessness after the phone conversation. Maybe he is too sure of what he wants and is pushing Kushi too fast, too soon. The fact that he realized that himself was a nice touch to me because one dos not get too many second chances in life, so ruining it because of impatience will be a terrible tragedy. I love the papa in him, seriously that is probably one of the sweetest trait that I like in this Arnav, especially being the dad of a special need child. As humans, we love showing our affections and emotions through touch -I just realized how hard it must be for the parents of autistic kids who have to make sure their child is ready for that touch before they can hug or caress them. This is pure torture as there is nothing I love better than kiss and hug my 2 little girls. I love how you explained Maya's postpartum because people always expect a new mother to be happy and excited after their bundle of joy is out of their womb and they don't realize that being a mother for the first time can be a daunting task. When you add depression and hormones on top of this, it can spiral out of control very easily. I applaud her for knowing that she was not going to be fit to raise the child and I applaud both of them for being able to put their differences aside to make sure that their child is the top priority. Even if she is not his primary caregiver, she is a part of his life and will remain so. It takes a better parent to step aside and let her child get the best help he can get to grow. She is one strong woman for making that choice, fully knowing that society will have a different opinion of her. You know the other thing I love about this update is you showing the 2 sides of their first meeting. That was sweet. I am actually quite surprised that Kushi was the one to take the first step because this is so different from the adult Kushi we see today. Just goes to show you how experiences in life change our personalities. Boy was that a fantastic first kiss or what! Yeah those eyes can slay a dragon on the spot so how is a poor girl going to resist? Besides the eyes, I could so dream about that voice over the phone too. Now you are making me go back to my pehla pehla pyaar and the long phone conversations . . .

beautiful just loving the way this story is moving ahead

You do have a way with words MB...a kind of seduction with words...a riot of emotions...well crafted...I enjoyed the flashback...those midnight chats with no lights..so romantic! sigh! You can hear my dreamy sigh...Oh 5 days of past is highly vibrant and pulse racing ones...