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It was a lovely insight into Arnav's point of view on fatherhood. A bit about Maya's frame of mind too. Arnav and Maya are obviously extremely mature people who did not let ego and hurt feelings come in the way of the greater good'.

A lovely flashback of the past shared by Arnav and Khushi. Thanks for giving us both their points of view about their first kiss. I enjoyed the honesty behind it. Obviously they shared a rather potent chemistry which leaves me wondering what caused them to part ways.

beautifully written...cant wait to see Dad n Son

Lovely
I wish de journey wl make dem close

way to go

I agree all the writers here are awesome. Superb update

I am still trying to process the update...While my heart goes out to Arnav, the characterization of Khushi has been a big question mark and most intriguing of all or from any FF I have read.

Lovely chapter again Mirabell !! I loved Aranav and Maya's relationship. The need to overlook their own indifference and make a way for the friendship for their son. The promise of a father to a son to make his life worthwhile, has a warmth. And finally a peek into their past. Finally Khushi is no longer fighting her memories and is letting them out into open. i guess its right too. Sooner she acknowledges this, better it will be for her. But one can understand her dilemma. She is in that phase when one ought to think like that..

Originally posted by: ToxicLove

I am still trying to process the update...While my heart goes out to Arnav, the characterization of Khushi has been a big question mark and most intriguing of all or from any FF I have read.

The kiss was beautifully written but I wish I could say I enjoyed it. It made me sad, wondering what could have happened in that week that they had to burn down that scorching chemistry and part ways. What happened to the bold and daring woman that she ended up piling herself with insecurities...

The woman who took such bold step has to be confident with damn the world attitude...So I am having hard time to understand her character that changed in a week time...in the name of insecurities...

Thank you for beautifully playing with words...Will wait for the next...

Originally posted by: Mirabell

Thank you for your interest in my story. 😊 Am glad that my characters are able to question a few basic assumptions that we seem to live with. What is a story without a few of those anyway? 😉 I would rather have my story do the talking and explaining. ❤️