T2 | ArHi FF Second Chances | Link to Thread-Three, Pg 140 - Page 38

Loved the chapter..there is no one thing in the chapter that I did not like..so listing the things that I like will be an endless task..

Meera with her openness and extrovertness will win over Mohan soon. Kushi has already won his heart in the first few minutes itself..she is already his Meera mama..:)

Manorama and Kushi's relationship is so beautiful..only positive emotions are there in it..i loved it..

And Arnav and Kushi..the way they both understand each other without the help of words ..it wants me to say they are destined for each other..it is just that they let it slip the first time and only realized when they met a second time. Kushi is still hesitant to take a step and is holding her self from letting go and feel what she feels..She needs time and patience from Arnav..The supportive hug she gave and how the awareness seeping through them..you portrayed it brilliantly..also i like how you portrayed Kushi's thoughts on Maya..it makes her uncomfortable to see the easy camaraderie Arnav has with Maya and Maya's openness and inquisitive nature..But I am sure Maya with her innate good naturedness will win over Kushi..

Am eager for more...it is just that however lengthy the chapters it still leaves me with a dissatisfied feeling...and that is entirely your fault..how can i not when u are writing so brilliantly.A Hug For You my dear friend..🤗

Perfect song selection ... 👍🏼 ❤️

Mira ... I lost touch with the story in between ... too much happening in AD ...

but finally seem to have caught up with it ... and the speed of the story is just perfect ... anything else and it would not have the same impact on us 😆

Love the way you are handling emotions here ...

Khushi ... the loss of a husband makes a woman go into such a deep shell from which she never ever wants to come out of ... and God forbid if anything good happens to it her makes her feel so guilty ... it's as though she doesn't deserve anything good coming her way ... in other words her world comes to an end with her husbands passing away ... she's just living for the sake of being alive and her children ...

Arnav ... harbouring this guilt within him that his son is suffering because of him ...

Meera ... an angel specially sent to people who need good things happening in their lives ...

Mohan ... in need of nurturing and plenty of love ...

Am really curious to know why Arnav and Khushi moved away from each other after their romantic tryst ten years back ... Was it because Arnav had to pursue his education and career ?

I still find Arnav and Maya's relationship a little unsettling ... it seems as though they had little or no love between them when they got married that inspite of having a child they separated so easily and still meet as best of friends ... and also how Maya could walk out of the marriage knowing that her little boy had autism and needs her more than ever to be around !

Am so happy that Arnav has made his feelings quite clear to Khushi ... not many people get Second Chances thrown their way ... hope Khushi realises that soon ... life can be really lonely alone ...

Thank you Mira ...

I am loving this FF hands down and there are many reasons for this and one of the most important one is that its a very slow story which does not just indulge in the meeting of a boy and girl and their physical intimacy but it dwells upon the emotional bonding which to me is more important than physical one👍🏼. Your story is like a poem which is just not Arnav and Khushi but have so many other characters that makes it enjoyable. I have said it before and am repeating that the friendship you have shown between each and every character is a welcoming change and is the breath of freshness, its like the spring to the long winter. ⭐️ Your character sketch for all supporting characters is worth a wait and makes me not miss ARSHI at all 😲❤️

PS- I read this update the moment i got internet access and yet waited for more than 30 hours to post a response as i wanted to make it precise and to the point - not an essay but well I failed miserably.🥺

Arnav and Meera's bonding is lovely. Cant wait for her to meet Mohan. That should be interesting.

Khushi's breakdown was sad but perhaps this was the start for her to share her grief with Arnav. Its the first step in the healing process, I think. Arnav's gesture in including Meera in the hug was so sweet.

Good that Manorama witnessed Arnav and Khushi together. She has always seen Khushi with NK and it would be difficult for her to suddenly find Khushi in a romantic relationship with a man who is not her son. Better she first witnessed a platonic hug. It would help her better cope with the development of a relationship between the two of them.