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Posted: 10 years ago
I like the title and it's bearers too!
I always thought why you didn't disclose much about mohan...

Meera and mohan will go along together well..but may be I find mohan is possessive..especially when Meera clings on to Arnav ..

Arnav is straight to the point what his intentions are ..and khushi is struggling to digest the thought..

Maya...is really "maya" for me..her free attitude...how does she view herself as a mother when she cannot afford to give much time to her much needed son...she may be cooperating Arnav

Khushi is confused about their easy going and a lot has to be learnt what led to the divorce of this couple


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Posted: 10 years ago
At last , MB, the meeting I was so looking forward to - Meera and Mohan, Maya and Khushi. What a delightful update that was. I knew Mohan could not resist Meera and Khushi could not resist Maya.


Maya and Meera are both so adorable.

Khushi is like a slab of ice beginning to melt gradually and it is very understandable that she is in a state where she does not know what she is anymore- a slab of ice or a puddle of water 😃.

All her certainties are melting away in the face of her own long suppressed feelings arising much against her will and Arnav's obvious determination to revive it all.

Love your story😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Mirabell


I *had* to respond.. I just *had to*.

This is one of the highest compliments one could receive.. you sitting on a commode and reading when you should be bathing and leaving for work. It brought a smile to my face and gratitude in my heart. :) Thank you. ❤️


In that case, MB, let me tell you that I do that a lot too. Not the going to work part though. It is just my escape route from my two year old to read the update. 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
We saw a different Arnav from what we saw till now today. My heart went out for him knowing how much he is hurting from inside. Bottled up and hidden emotions are always much more stronger than the emotions itself.

"I know that. He is fine. He will be fine. I will make sure of it. It's not him. It's..." -- What is it that is bothering him if it is not about Mohan?

So glad that Mohan has warmed up to Khushi, his Meera-mama. Smile
I can already see a bonding between Mohan and Meera.

These snippets of past that you are throwing in between are making me restless, MB.Smile

I don't know how they did it but for Arnav and Maya, it's like the marriage never happened. In any other case, such a relation would have been wierd to me but for with Arnav and Maya, I don't feel it wierd one bit. And I'm really glad that their marriage and it consequences had no influence whatsoever on their friendship.

I already like Maya and with this update, I like her even more.

Please don't worry about the pace, MB. When you are travelling through a scenic place, an express train would not do justice to the journey. You have to travel in a passenger train to truly appreciate it's beauty. And Second Chances is nothing less than an artistic painting of a beautiful landscape.

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Posted: 10 years ago

That which gives the most pleasure should be savoured delicately and not wolfed down indiscriminately. Absorbed slowly, infusing all the senses with its beauty. Swallow it and its gone. So, I'm happy to let it swirl for as long as you deem fit :)

Khushi's feelings of reticence and involuntary yearning so well woven. Manorama's pang of self blended with selflessness. Arnav's heartfelt "finally" welcoming her even while being unable to open up about an integral part of his life. The entire scene in Arnav's study so poignant and moving.

The journey from "No, this can't be" to an unqualified acceptance is what I'm looking forward to.

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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful update
Love how you have portrayed every character
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Posted: 10 years ago
You're such a beautiful story teller... I just wished the update so go on and on...it was gripping n intense... Amazing!!!!
Love the way u r bringing the past..in the story... The way she remembers him n her on the bike while she's in Manoramas arms...and thinks its infedilty...and wonders from whom...

Also the exchange between the two...when she wants to confront Arnav about Mohans Autism...then again when she hugs him to offer solace that was so sweet...!!!

The way you brought the chemistry... After the hug turns into something else...the chemistry so palpable n hot...

Arnavs total acceptance of the way their relationship is headed is good.. But Khushi doesn't seem ready by her response... He's got his work cut out for him

Liked the way Khushi has started to feel a teeny bit jealous of Maya...

Love the pace of the story and the way its going... Great job!!


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Posted: 10 years ago
MB awesome update dear..you took my breath away with the emotions you show between the two leads. I m loving this slow pace. Read the last 4 updates at a time. Loving meera and mohan. They both are so cute. Awww meera brought gift to mohan. Khushi remembering the days spent with arnav a lot nowadays..i would love to know abt that week which they spent..i have only one question but wont ask as i leave the story unveil slowly..i loved arnav standing in the study room near window alone..my heart went for him..he knows khushi still loves him..still has feelings for him..he just made his mind to be with her..he want her back in his life..this time he does not allow her to go just like that..waiting for the next installment.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Fabulous update. Khushi and Arnav's relationship is truly beautiful. I love the fact that even without words they can understand each persons inner most fears and pain. The way khushi dealt with Mohan's condition with Arnav was amazing; understanding the turmoil of a father who has a child with autism. It is great that as a writer you are bringing up this condition in the story because of which so many people will become more aware of it.👏 Loved the way Arnav and khushi bonded with each other. Overall, I loved this chapter. Brilliant writing. ⭐️
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi Mira... Amazing update
"I am addicted just cannot get enough" ... Quoting another reader hope she does not mind but it so aptly expresses my feeling for your story
It is difficult for me to say what I like about this cos there is nothing that I do not like ... Love your characterization , the pace , their connection ' Arnav's openness to accepting his emotions and his firm desire to not let her go, most favourite is bond between Khusi and her mother in law
Whenever there is an interaction between Arnav-Khusi I just love it and their messages always bring a smile to my face...
Look forward to reading next update

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