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saschades

@saschades

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#321

wow. nice update so Mohan has ASD poor baby but m sure Khushi will help him through.

beautiful update

thanks x

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sunitikapoor

@sunitikapoor

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Posted: 10 years ago

#322

I love this Maya in your FF...Arnav and her friendship is so adorable. Maya knows that Arnav is in love with Khushi...Maya could not resist dropping in to meet Khushi...😛I really hope she become the cupid in Arnav and Khushi's life.

I loved it, when Mohan called her Meera's mamma. I knew it she will feel guilty about her feelings for Arnav because she is a widow...but I really want her mother in law to pitch in and tell her what she is doing a right thing...it is not a crime if you are widow. There is no manual for the feelings whether you are single or widow. I know, she has to take care of her mother in law and her daughter.

I love it when they met with Mohan, he is such a cute kid and possessive about his father too. I hope Khushi will help him which she already started after meeting him.

Please don't bother about the slow pace of the story...as me loving it.

Fabulous chapter.

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sman

@sman

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#323

After reading this wonderful update last night, I was literally in tears...Hats off to all the parents who have kids with special needs...god bless...so wonderfully you have depicted Arnav's emotions..Maya is a sweetheart..hope she tells Kushi about Arnav taking her name during accident

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Jignasha

@Chokri_ASR

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#324

Res is res no more... here

Edited by Chokri_ASR - 10 years ago

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#325

finally he confessed that he is not going to let her go this time.. loved it..

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headtotoe

@headtotoe

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Posted: 10 years ago

#326

Mira i just love your story !!! Its not slow but very captivating.. I just love the way you weave your words to show the emotions. They work miracles !!

Finally Khushi met Mohan and is privy of his condition. It was so endearing to see Mohan respond to Meera and Khushi.Arnav's reluctance to tell Khushi about him is understandable.Any parent would rather accept and acknowledge that his kid is a little less than normal.

The Khushi meets The Maya finally and must say you envisioned the scene mighty well.The ease of Maya and ambivalence of Khushi well placed and emoted.

Cant wait to read further... Continue soon !!!

Edited by headtotoe - 10 years ago

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Mirabell

@Mirabell

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+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#327

Originally posted by: Angels11
I loved this update. Sorry for my rude comment bt the prev chap which i dint like. But tis was genuinely good. Esp i liked Arnav's denial syndrome in a diff context & the interaction bet maya & k.

Oh please, never apologize for being honest about your review. :) I did not take offense to it at all. If you felt like that chapter didn't do justice, then that's how you felt. And I appreciate your candor. :) I look forward to and read every review and comment.

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sanjubanju

@sanjubanju

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Posted: 10 years ago

#328

What a beautiful update!! Loved every emotion stated in this chapter

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Mirabell

@Mirabell

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Posted: 10 years ago

#329

Originally posted by: chotidesi

I can see this coming together. Now make him slam her against a wall and... I will have to wait, won't I? But it'll be worth it. I just know it.

Hm... Now... now... hm... ☢️ will have to be dealt with care no? 😉