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Jay

@jduke

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#331

MB, Another amazing update 👏👏

Every word in this update is so natural and loved how Mohan extended his hand to Kushi. Looks like Meera and Mohan are great friends in making. A big hug from me to Arnav for the pain and guilt he is going through 🤗🤗 . Don't worry Arnav good days are on cards 😊

Maya character is mystery and over friendly 😉. I am dying to know about Arnav and Maya. Kushi will take her sweet time to respond to Arnav and we will wait for the inevitable.

MB, I have no qualms with the pace of the story and I just love the way it is going forward.

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Kiran

@lovedrops

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Posted: 10 years ago

#332

MB.. wonderful update.

You gave few threads of past in this update those few lines made more curious to know about the past.

Mohan such a cute boy.. Arnav has very strong attachment towards Mohan. But why he is thinking the reason for Mohan's ASD is him. After reading this update I was thinking that Arnav really wanted to take care of Mohan. Something is bothering him. I am feeling like something happened which forced Aranv to get divorced with Maya and keep Mohan with him although he is supposed to be with his mom when he needs mother care.

Really MG I felt like hugging Arnav and tell him everything will be fine .. don't worry Arnav... I wish I do that. He has lot of trauma in him. I hope Khushi will help him get out of it. At this point it looks like they both need eachother to fight their trauma. Khushi is a specialist in ASD... wonderful.. Will Arnav hand over Mohan to her. Is there any chance for Khushi to get settled in India.

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kiran1992

@kiran1992

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#333

Nice update...I was eagerly waiting for the scene where Khushi meets Mohan and I really loved it...Mohan is such a sweet boy.I'm sure Khushi is gonna help him.Finally Khushi met Maya...I really don't know if that kind of relation(Arnav-Maya's) exist in real world...Eagerly waiting for Arnav and Khushi's past and I don't think this story is moving slow ...😊

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#334

I heard sooo much about this story, and was dying to read it... nd finally i did... wow... this is an amazing story... sooo real... emotional and touching... and the way you portrayed them, their thoughts, their feelings... NK was such an admirable person... loving him through Khushi's memories... Meera... such a sweet child... so small, yet sooo understanding... Manorama too, a mother for Khushi... loved Lavanya & Khushi's friendship... also loved the friendship Arnav shares with his ex-wife, Maya... its beautiful to see how amazingly they are together being responsible for their son... this is really admirable... loving Maya, her intro with Khushi... she's a beautiful person... and ArShi... the hesitancy... the reluctance yet the pull... their interactions... those texts... that care... her feelings... and Arnav's determination...wow... also the bond between Arnav and Meera... its heart warming to watch... and Khushi's meeting Mohan... when he put his hand forward to Khushi... beautiful moment... its really adorable... every bit of it is sooo beautifully real... this is brilliant... loving it... looking forward to read more...

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kushiarnav1

@kushiarnav1

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#335

nice chapter...

finally kushi met mohan, hope she will bring change in mohan, because that is her profession..

feel really bad for arnav, and his loneliness...

thanks for the update...

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luvbug

@luvbug

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#336

wow tht was a fantastic chap... the interaction btw meera, mohan and khushi was so cute and then arnav joined the picture..it was perfect...

so arnav finally let her knw his intentions... n khushi is running away...maya is a sweetheart... arnav-maya relationship is very unique and precious ...touch-wood 😊

arnav caring for manorama was heart touching too...

absolutely beautiful chap 😃

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cocoamob

@cocoamob

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#337

I think I just fell in love with Mohan! I can imagine a cute and shy little Arnav :-)

Khushi of course clicked with him right away - brought tears to my eyes.

Slow is fine - you know the little things you describe - Manorama's ankles being swolen, the talk between the older ladies, the children playing, and glimpses of the past, add so much to the story and make it so interesting. I always feel wanting to read more of what's next when I come to the end of the chapter.

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hararnav

@hararnav

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#338

glimpses of good times of the past...

Arnav is in Khushi's mind all the time... was he there even when NK was alive?

Manorama's fears are true... she loves khushi and want her to find her happiness once again and at the same time she is worried abt what might happen to her if khushi n meera goes to a new home... they r her only family.

and havin a kid with autism i can say u did a great job in ur research:-)

i still didn't get why Arnav didn't share Khushi abt Mohan's problem during their previous meets... not that it is wrong, but for a person like Arnav I wonder why he has kept away that info..

Loved the way Khushi comforted him.

True that even Khushi has feelings for him , but why is he suddenly so demanding in getting Khushi back in his life? Would he have done the same if he met Khushi wen her husband was still alive or when he is still in relation with Maya? Why now?? and to understand that guess i need to wait for more glimpses of their past:-)

and Maya is quiet opposite to Arnav,,,, in few min she has told her history with arnav and also abt mohans problem.

loved the way khushi is always seeking Arnavs presence

Edited by hararnav - 10 years ago