Arshi SS: Chiron CHAPTER 3 | UPDATED May 9| pg 25 - Page 8

Originally posted by: amus5

I was thinking that you could go in person to drop off Inspector Bhushan's daughter's kundali...it would save time and energy as mama would not spare you from a hundred and one quiz about 'What are you gonna do about your kundali ' 😉 😆

Originally posted by: Arshi67

Amu excellent idea 👏

It's not for nothing you're Sherlock!

Yashi need any help with drooling? 😆

Originally posted by: tomriddle

Ruch my darling. Come here you 🤗

No I am very much capable of drowning jyotishacharya in the river of my drool. 😆 But of course I won't mind you along. Specially you, always welcome meri jaan.

Also I posted pictures of jyotishiji on page 10.

Originally posted by: tomriddle

I would but the stupid Aman of the story said something about sending apna Banda. First I am a bandi. Second I'll need to get employed at whatever Ashram to do that. So much trouble. 😭

^^^Oh perfect perfect Sherlock. Of course there have to be bandis in ashram or whom did my baby create that racket with. 😆

Originally posted by: tomriddle

^^^Oh perfect perfect Sherlock. Of course there have to be bandis in ashram or whom did my baby create that racket with. 😆

Aman storywala must have used banda as a general term. Ok done. I'll pull a Yashi Bond.

But right now I need to pull my socks for a class. Gotta go. Had a fabulous time today. And Sherlock your dazzling ideas 👏

Apparently today is the day of finding extraordinary pieces of fiction that make me want to go back in time and erase the day I decided to try my hand at writing. Why did I when I could have spent my time savoring such brilliant pieces of story telling? I am here and reading. And hopefully learning :)

Ria behen! Whattey novel concept. Arnav the Jyotish?! And Khushi the lawyer?! And they fall in love with each other? I can't even...imagine imagining such a unique story. But tussi mahan ho. Your writing is just amazing! And it helps that Arnav is a hot guy wearing jeans and a Polo t-shirt, of course ;)

Can I say that I applaud your bravery and imagination in creating such unique characters? If it were possible to be any more intrigued by this story than I already was because of the prologue, then know that now, I am maha maha maha intrigued!

I love lists, so I am going to make one!

1. So the whole setup reminds me of this sentence from the Harry Potter books--

"The consequences of our actions are always so complicated, so diverse, that predicting the future is a very difficult business indeed". Like I said before, I can't wait to see why Arnav is a jyotish, what he does as a jyotish, and if he really has superpowers. 😆

2. "The time frame in which an extended period of lull transmutes to tumult is imperceptibly fugacious."

You completely blew me over with that sentence! It is just so...poetic and poignant, in some way.

3. "A few stolen moments in the mind's eye often stretch till infinity; I had my infinity there, in the cramped environs of the high court's parking, through the widening gap between the two khakhi shirts still hovering over most of my window."

*Gasp* That explains why the members of the Raizada family never realized that Arnav and Khushi were having eye sex every time they had one of their eye locks! For the Raizadas, it was only a moment. But for A and K, that moment stretched till infinity. Ria Behen, trust you to come up with a scientific explanation for all the discrepancies in the show! 😆

3. "I had to mail the developers of the game that we needed a new version, mine had been depleted of new moves. Winning against the computer could not excite anymore"

So why exactly is V.Anand's chatti aulaad working as a jyotish?

4. "Shakespeare couldn't have been more wrong when he had given the world that wretched What's there in the name.' Trust an astrologer, there's a lot in it"

LOLOL.

5. "It was inherent in us to categorize, sectionalize and label a person with attributes congruous with widely accepted stereotypes."

Guilty as charged. I totally imagined Arnav to be a pot-bellied jyotish. Kaan pakadke maafi to all the jyotish-es in the world. Hmm...I think time for a buzzfeed article about the 10 stereotypes that every jyotish hates?

6. "I had once asked Him"

Uhh...God? The CEO of Jyotish and Co.? Who is this Him?

7. Kostin. Why doesn't Khushi have a nose ring?

8. Is the bracelet around her hand some superstitious thing that some Jyotish gave her? 😆

9. Khushi is such a boss, yo. That "No" was totally Amitabh Bachchan in K3G. "Keh diya na, bas keh diya". 😆😆😆

10. Arnav was wearing a sky blue polo t-shirt. HAHAHAHA.

😆

Can't wait for the next update! :D

Well Aman the great😆 I just saw this and the name and I stopped,

I randomly stumbled upon this story this morning and I'm very glad I did.

This is very interesting Ria! Different backdrop and very different characterizations. I love it!!

Though I know very little about it, I have always been fascinated by Greek mythology.
The title intrigued me and the prologue just drew me in. I loved what you wrote in prologue. It is just so captivating!!

It was initially a little hard to imagine Arnav as a jyothishi. 😆
"ethnically dressed, mostly in bi-colors, often pot-bellied men with serene expressions and a vertical vermillion strike across forehead" - Thats exactly how I imagined along with a number of rudraksh malas and bead necklaces and bracelets. 😆

But I decided he'll be a more sophisticated one and your description gave a clearer picture.
That makes me wonder how/why he got into this profession.

You have a very different Khushi too.. Jaya Badhuri in Kora Kagaz types. 😆

Two very novel characters in a more novel setting. This should be interesting!

Do you pm? Would love to know when you update this next.