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Srilatha

@Srilathalolla

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#111

one incident has changed the fate of a family. Everyone is still suffering and the person who is a victim is been phrased as a culprit and the victim herself is holding her as a culprit irony. Loved the update

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amus5

@amus5

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#112

what started with Anjali's disappearance has been a cataclysmic wave in the lives of all those connected with her even today😭

thanx for the update...pls continue soon 😊

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MEsw

@MEsw

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#113

I read chapter -4 didn't understand a thing and thought I am missing something.

Searched and found cheater-3 was two parts...and read it.. Such a lousy reader...😆😆

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ranogill

@ranogill

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#114

it happens...in case of child abduction some families comes close ...some break, some goes deep into depression, some do not loose hope...arnav's mum come into different category ...she did not loose hope to find her daughter, but she develop deep hatred for khushi which she already had for her...hatred and prejudice ...and same hate she has put her in sons mind...nobody care that khushi was a mere child herself...but one thing i know some day she can come close to loose her sons if they try to learn other side of story...awesome

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luvbug

@luvbug

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#115

omg wat an update... feel for the family... everyone is so distressed ... oh arti ...u need to let go whats gone and embrace what is left... feel for arnav and akash... akash is a mystery... was he the same persone who was analyzing khushi on the train?? or was it aman?? his plea to dadi was heart touching... n arnav i dont even knw wat i feel... i like chacha n chachi...

wonder whats happening with khushi...

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Greyasr

@Greyasr

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#116

Wow Sandhya

Somehow i did not get ur pm for chapter 3 so got to read 3 and 4 tonight simply simply simply spellbound

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deepa

@deeswarna

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#117

im speechless sandhya. it was one very well written update but im shocked at the anger for khushi, not only from arnav but almost every raizada members. i understand arti grief and pain, the loss of a child is not something that one get over but still all these years later, so much bitterness it unbeliveable.

i think they blame khushi for everything that happened all these years ago and if only they knew that khushi is still living in the past with its fear and bitter memories.

i just feel bad for arnav and akash, looks they have not been able to enjoy their childhood and adolescence. maybe for arti losing her daughter meant everything and in her grief she even forgot that she has 2 children that still needed nurturing, needed her love and care.

the relationship between the members of the raizada clan seemed to be weird and very much broken. they seem to be living their own life away from the warmth and comfort a family brings.

i dont think arnav will be forgetting those eyes that has mesmerised him. his mind knows that he can never think as khushi other more than the raizada enemy who stole away their happiness but his heart is still being attracted to him. looks like its going to be a battle between his heart and mind.

i like manorama's character, she seems like a woman who will not be scared to say wat is right or wrong. and bond between her and pratap is one of understanding, friendship and love.

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Barunz4ever

@Barunz4ever

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#118

Brilliant update!!!

I have loved your Arshi fan fic dawn noon n dusk... It was one of the most brilliant piece of fiction I have read on our beloved Arshi ... N I felt none of the works could compete this one..

But with each amazing update of HOT and as it is getting more n more intersting... I feel we are in for a masterpiece again !!!!

This is just a start but you have built the storyline n the plot so wonderfully , making us look forward anxiously to unfold this mystery with you... N with the introduction of every new character and the past related to them , the story is getting more n more inquisitive ... And a perfect title to describe the present state of Arnav n his Miserable family , who have failed to move on with the time and are almost stuck up in the dreadful past of their lives...

Thanks for pm

Edited by Barunz4ever - 10 years ago

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Diya Ganguly

@Careless_Artist

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#119

AWESOME UPDATE... Aarti as a mother was most effected from Anjali-missing case.. And she blamed Khushi for Anjali's missing no doubt... Her feelings to believe on Anjali's existence in the forest was natural.. But her accusations on Arnav or her words towards Dadi was not acceptable... Aakash is a totally shattered person I think and his relationship with his mother wasn't good at all ... Arnav love him very much'm. And don't want his home's atmosphere become more sad.. Like . Arnav's this quality a lot.. Especially in the last part when he got hurt form bottle was a heart shattering moment for me... Waiting for Khushi's point of view after meeting her past face to face...