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Diya Ganguly

@Careless_Artist

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#971

I just read the last part.. The way Arnav saved Khushi was awesome.. And Wow!!! Arnav apologized to her for his behavior.. Now at least they are in talking terms..

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sarahjac

@sarahjac

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Posted: 11 years ago

#972

Chapter 7

Loved the positive change in Khushi, opening up to people around/striking conversations with family helps one relieve stress. There is no point in keeping all the emotions bottled up, hope she would follow this through for the rest of her stay in Kotagiri and life henceforth.

First part brings positivity from all corners, Akki-Kuku and their no hold barred conversation, he brought his troublesome history with his wife forward and she was open enough to discuss the current situation with her parents...you know space and time doesn't make any difference when your souls are connected, it was so true for Akashi n Khushi,a day spent together without any inhibitions.

Part 2

Ahaan...Arnav's hawk eyes watching the whole exchange between Aakash n Khushi, I can never get tired of reading about a jealous Arnav. Never.

Boy!! what a save from Aarti...

-so he is seeing someone...hmm.. Interesting!

- things are less turbulent between A&K now?

My chronometer is not in order these days, hope you don't mind the delay :)

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Mirabell

@Mirabell

Navigator

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#973

Chapter 3, 4 and 5...

Wow!! I am not able to stop reading it now. The story has gained momentum and has me in its grip.

Wow. .. this is one complicated Raizada you have drawn here. He is holding his family together - his runaway father, his guilt-ridden mother and drunk brother. Oh!! That is one heavy bag he carries.

Wow - why did she not reveal her identity? I am intrigued by your Khushi... well.. ok.. I just wanted to check in and say that I am reading..

Wow.. you are a master story teller Sandhya!

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opsyellow

@opsyellow

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#974

Yet to read few chapter. AD life is very busy right now but will try to read soon.😃

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Mirabell

@Mirabell

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+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#975

Sandhya!

Koi Aapse Seekhe how to come up with a plot that has all the elements of good story telling. :) These last few chapters have been filled with intrigue, suspense, emotion and tension. You had me hooked utterly and completely. The setting is so resplendent, characters so flawed but so beautifully so...

Your Arnav is so different from so many I have read so far. He is warm, self deprecating at time (which is actually working in his favor) and very real. I like him. Knowing my history with your Arnavs, I guess it simply a matter of time before like changes!

I loved that dream you described, I thought that exchange in the police station was reflective of what happens... I could go on and on..

But I have finally gotten myself caught up with your story. I am waiting like the rest for the next update.

You are the queen of writing mystery.. and I hope you will consider publishing it. :)