Tormenting Mr. Gangster #2||CHap 44 Pg104 [SanDhir] - Page 8

another great piece of work by you...sanyu is so much attracted to d bad boy n he is just loving especially wen the bathing scene cums n thise stealing glances are really fun to read..tottally excited for sanyu's brilliant idea..thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: daringdarlo

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FINALLY...finally I am first...
😭 😭 .. Happy tears...couldn't stop myself...
2nd thread , first chap...

Congratzzz 👏

Coming to the update...

I have a question..
From where do both of you get these Shakespearean genes????
This is a masterpiece...
The dialogues, the situation description, the emotional part... Everything is so flawless... So beautifully penned...
Each emotion hits the exact place it is supposed to...

Thank youuu dear muaaah !...but you know what the real questions is ? ...how the hell do you guys like it so much when i am myself never satisfied with it ... i always think it could have been better... yet you guys still love it... thx a lot !

Particularly I love the dialogues... Sanyukta's words!!! So witty... But that does not compromise with the feeling intended... Moreover it intensifies it...

Yup, that's already settled, this Sanyukta is the best 😉

Finally u have revealed her past...
Those bas****s raped her bestie 😭
The deserve something more than a painful death...
The way sanyukta revealed her past gave me Goosebumps 😭

Yeah finally, once again, i know the revealing could have been better, according to me at least ^^... more worked on but... this is all we could come up with in the short span of time...

N then came Randhir 's caring part...
Loved him 😳

Love him too lolzzz... i think we're gonna have an issue here 😆

Entry of the panda was the ultimate lol moment of the part...
I just couldn't control myself 😆 😆 😆
Sanyukta giving promotion to the panda ...
2nd lol moment of the part.. 😆 😆

Yeaaah i was thinking about something chipku type you know, and the koala's picture popped in my mind 😆

Then came the bathing part...
M blushing 😳
It was HAWT n sexy...
M still blushing...

hiiihihihi 😉 what did Sanyu say ? a bare randhir is hot, but a wet bare randhir is hotter 😆😉

Now now now.. Sanyukta has come up with a evil plan yet again!!! Waiting to know wats going in her mind!!!

To tell you the truth i still don't know myself... we had an idea at the beginning but i dropped it as it didn't really fit with the context...so am still thinking about it lolzzz

This story gives humour, emotional stuff, action all in the right proportion that I have fallen in love with it...

Thankkksss 😊

Plz don't apologise for the delay as we totally understand masterpieces take time...
N moreover the length of the part partly makes up for it... Not that I don't want longer n regular updates but still... I know both of u r busy...


Thanks for understanding and mentionning the length cause yeah it really takes a hell of time to write that much lolzzz ...even when we are two writing it... i could not imagine doing it alone, shukar hai Seerat is with me !

Both of deserve a standing ovation 👏 👏 👏
I m totally in love with this...

Thankkks again and again Shivangi deaire 😳

Love n respect to both of you
Shivangi

Ps- when is the next update coming????

well good question...can't say the exact day and give you false hope, as everytime something comes in between...but probably next week end...

Originally posted by: simaj

Yay yay yay yay...

Spectacular update gals

ekdam mast

so glad that sanyukta is now accepting

randhir slowly...and also finally she talked about her past with him

ooohh and she trusts him at least that's what her action meant

oh and they slept in each other's arms awww😳

they are adorable🤗

And again they will work together...😆 randhir is so scared of her idea😉 he will obviously be on alert now😉 now that they have kind of accepted each other😳

it's always worth a wait to your ff gals.

you won't believe, I just opened my eye from my deep sleep searched for my phone on my bed (still lying on bed) and read TMG ... was the first thing I did... it already made my day

Thank you so much👏

awesome guyss!!!!!! KOALA seriously!! LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL! ROFL 🤣 This update was a pure package, it was emotional at the beginning, funny in the middle, hot and cute at the end. Its picture perfect!! I loved the sponge bathing scene where randhir brings an another shirt for sanyu respecting her wishes. That was cute and the sleeping part was just adorable. Can't wait for the sanyu's plan and i want to know about randhir's past as well. awesome guys! keep up the great job!! :):):):):):):):):):)👏⭐️ and plsss update soon😃

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Umm... Sorry for delay..
Waiting for the update like hell..
And it was completely worth if it ..
And length if the update was like cherry in the cake...

Coming to the chappy...
U don't know what to say...
Everyone is showering you with so much love and praise... And so I m...
I dunno how you guys manage to write such amazing
stuff... Inspite of your busy schedule...
Every chappy And update depits nothing buts perfection...
Talking about this one...
It was emotional.. Humorous .. Romantic . .. Hawt..
In short every masala in one pack...

Loved the bathroom wala part...
It was so cute and hawt...

Now I am wondwring about sanyukta's new shopping plan...
Have to wait for next chapter
...
BBtw when will you update next part...
I know you both are busy...
So.. Update when you have time...
But plzz. .. DDon't take too long...
Plzzz *puppy face*

Love
Richa^_^

Hey! I read all the chapters in one go! This story is so addictive and both of you are such amazing writers! I love everything! your writing style, sanyukta's imaginative theories and just everything about this story! i'm so glad i came across it! 😊 👏 ⭐️

Originally posted by: samridhigoodiez

Res..
Res kaha update kaha. Bohot na insafi h ye..

Kia har waqt nainsafi nainsafi karti reti hai han ? ye corrupted world hai bacha, yahan insaf ka nam na lena warna yahan hi thok dalungi...lolzzz 😆

Awww amazing update..
It was funny .
Sexy.. Sensuous.. Emotional.. What not??

Thanksss 😊

Randhir is so naughty..
Nsanyukta is embarrassed awww..

Their bathing together was too cute..
Enjoyed a lot..

Love u.

Yeah kash k muje b aisa hot sexy dude mil jayeee...lolz just kidding...or not lolzzz 😉 😆

Originally posted by: don girls

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Awesome update

Thank youuu 😳

Love they way that they both interact with each other

Love the long sandhir scene

Me too me too !

Super cute and romantic
Nice
Can't wait to see what the plan is

Haven't decided yet lolzz still thinking about it... we have to meet your expectations guys !

Update soon

Originally posted by: rajpreeto

Wow a long Sandhir centered update and I absolutely loved it.

Fabulous update

Hey yaaa 😊

Thanksss

Nice to see Sanyu sharing her past with her devil . Bath scene was hawt and cute
They both slept in each others arms..Awwie that part was very cute.

Yeahhh the cuddling scene was my favorite as well, like for once there was no sexual intentions, just plain cute cuddling 😳

Waiting to see what is Sanyu's plan that she took them all for shopping.

Haye yaaar we too thinking kia karegi karegi...still not decided lolzz

Originally posted by: newmoon18

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Finally u updated
Cnt tell u how eagerly we were wtng
We were dying for an update

Lolzz sorry 😳

Bt its okay
N don't be sorry for late
Studies comes first

Too late i already said sorry lolzzz yeaaah and my profession career is taking an unxpected turn... am excited...i never ever thought that i will reach this stage at this age...am on cloud nine...but first i have three month to prove myself...am excited !!!!! 😳

Now coming to the update
Do I need to tell u it was mind blowing as alwz

Really I m speechless
The way u describes every scene is fab
U portrays everything with sheer perfection

Thanksss a ton dearie, i personnally find a lot of mistakes and unsteadiness but still you guys love it so much, thanks 😊

I can envision it


I so loved it

So rd had a task
He killed the betrayer

Yeaah... he had to.

Sanyu shocked to know
She knows he's a gangster
Bt still sumtyms his activities hurts her

Yeaah she always knew it but it kind of went in the background of her mind... and with her own growing emotions she does not know where to fit...hence her agressive beahvior.


Rd was hurt by her behaviour
He can tolerate anything bt disgust for him in her eyes is unbearable for him

Yeaaah, he saw her care, he interacted with her like he never did with anyone, she has shown him care...and he felt good... now he can't tolerate her looking that way... her hating him is not option for him.

Sandhir again fighting

Bt rd words gave him reality check

Really its true
This is human tendency when it comes to u everything is fair
Bt for other u start talking abut morals

Yeaaah !!!!

Sanyu sharing her painful past with rd

Those b****** raped her friend 😡

Rd consoling

They both were sharing a different understanding

Hmmm for once, no teasing, no scremas, no sexual intentions...just plain understanding 😊

Bt crap bad timing sahil disteubed them
Sang I was annoyed
N to add fuel to her he brought that panda with him

Lol sahil did so much for them... maaf kardo lol


Congo shongo to panda promotion Jo mil gya use
Panda se koala
😆

Wese I like koala
They r damn cute 😃

Lolzz nooo ?!!!! i find them super ugly yaar.... 😆

Sachi rd is too much
Few mins back they both were discussing sum thing important n now he's back to his arrogant n flirting mode

Yeah like the atmosphear totally changed... apni okat pe a gaya 😆

Teasing sanyu
Bt this tym she cnt bear that torture
So she decided to go away

Bt panda srrry sorry koala khud hi apne per par khuladi maar bhetha
Her one sly smile made sanyu forget everything
She thrown her out of the room

Hmm how dare she...and randhir even returned the smile...like hell she was gonna leave them alone after that... 😆

Now its gangster turn


The bathroom scene was so cute n sexy
Sandhir fighting with water awww

Yeaaah first time they shared a joyful moment together... they laughed together... it's a astep in their relationship 😳

Then rd teasing her

Sanyu was so nervous to see rd so close
Bt what he did made HSR speechless

Their eyes speaks volume

hmmm

Sanyu going bt rd is not in mood to let her go
Both sleeping in each others arms peacefully
Now tym for serious matter

Everybody discussing abut raghav

Yeaah they have to take care of him now, but first they have to find where he is hidding.


Sanyu ko idea aya
Rd scared of mind blowing ideas

Lolz and he had every reason to be, knowing our Sanyu... 😆

Shopping jakar kya krne wali h


Really super excited
Cnt wait


Update soon
Wtng


All the best for ur exams
Yeah Seerat all the bst lolzzz 😉

Love u didu
Muuuaaahhh
Keep smiling