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Posted: 10 years ago
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Do u want me to cry more????????????????
I have so much in stock...
Update dedo other wise ur thread will get flooded with my tears 😭
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Koi humko jawab ni deta...
Dhoka Hua h humare sath..
New thread banaya.. Meko bola baad me banayege.. Pehle hi bana Diya..
Fir update b ni Diya.
Ye duniyaa.. Ye duniya pittal di.. Ye duniya pittal di...
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Originally posted by: samridhigoodiez

Koi humko jawab ni deta...
Dhoka Hua h humare sath..
New thread banaya.. Meko bola baad me banayege.. Pehle hi bana Diya..
Fir update b ni Diya.
Ye duniyaa.. Ye duniya pittal di.. Ye duniya pittal di...

LOL!! this is very awkward but couldn't stop myself after reading your reply. You are soo funny LOL!!!😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I know we're extremely late but it's due to me... I've been busy with my exam... I hope we won't make you suffer more Sorry guys... Love you for being there... Thank u so much... I hope you like it... It's pretty long... HAppy reading


CHAPTER-30a


The creases on his forehead increased with her words.

"Where did you go?" she repeated.

Randhir thought for a split second...Nah he couldn't tell her ! He reluctantly motioned his eyes to meet back hers...

"There were... some unfinished business... to take care of" he said slowly.

Her gaze scrutinized him thoroughly, she was sure he was hiding something,

"What kind of business?" she asked crossing her arms across her chest. There was definitely something fishy, she could feel it. Besides, obviously it was no mundane business we were talking about here... Textile manufacturing, diapers retailing, bananas distribution...that was what common people referred as business. What Mr.Gangster referred as business, was with no doubt , darker and more dangerous ! Weapon dealings, throats cuttings, dead bodies disposal, that was the kind of business we were talking about when it came to the devil !

She wasn't going to leave it, was she ? thought Randhir. ...And why was she insisting anyway ? She knew what kind of business he did then why asking the obvious ? he thought frustrated.

"I took care of the betrayer ." he finally said with confidence, the dangerous aura she had witnessed around him long ago, resurfacing.

The words echoed in her mind... I took care of the betrayer ! Sharp...distant...cold.

"Did you do... what I think you did ? she whispered, looking at him with big shocked eyes.

Randhir's jaw clenched seeing that one emotion in her eyes. Disgust. She was disgusted... by him. That made him furious. It's not like he could not see disgust in her eyes, more like he could not tolerate it ! The whole world could judge him, fear him, insult him... but her ? NO, she had no right to do so. She had seen a lot of him...she knew him like no one else...she knew what he did from the very beginning... she was not ignorant ! She knew everything !!! ...And there she was, acting ignorant and disgusted, as if she didn't know what he did... as if she didn't know he killed.

May be in between...everything... she had forgot...But it was her own stupidity if she had overlooked that fact... he had warned her, he had warned to stay away from him. He told her countless times he was a monster, she had witnessed him killing someone for crying out loud... And her reaction at Sameer's place, she didn't seem bothered about the dead bodies that time...Then what now ?!!, Randhir thought in frustration.

Yes, it was her own foolishness that she somehow forgot he was a killer...And it was high time to give her a reality check, he concluded. He was a killer !

"I am sure, I did worse than whatever you are thinking" he said his eyes boring into hers.

Her eyes widened as she held the back rack for support. He had just killed a person. She could not help but imagine atrocious pictures...skin being pierced by his hands... organic tissue being shredded with his hands... blood soaking running down his hands...those same hands that had held her moments ago... those same hands that caressed her moment ago... the same filthy hands ! ...a hand went to her mouth.

Suddenly she felt sick to be near him...

"Why did you do it...?" her words were a mere whisper but held authority.

"It was required..." was all he said.

His words just added more fuel to her anger...

"Who the hell you think you are?" she spoke louder, "Why do you think you're capable enough of taking law in your own hands...? Haan?" she was witty and angry. She was angry at him for ...being him...she was angry at herself for allowing herself to be touched by him...a lot of emotions were engulfing her at the same moment...sadness...hatred... fear... disappointment...disgust... she didn't know what to think anymore

...all she wanted to do was take out her anger on him for putting her in this position.

He was no one to decide the life or death of a human being. No human being had the right alone to decide of the life or death of another human being.

"I did what was required." he repeated calmly, crossing his hands behind his back.

"Required ?! Who are you to decide what is required and what is not ?!" she scoffed, raising her voice again.

"I am not in a habit of explaining myself" he said sharply. She was really getting on his nerves, playing all saint and disgusted.

"And I am not liking your tone, don't forget who you are talking to !" he added as a warning.

Sanyukta scoffed. "Are we back to that ?! " she asked bewildered. Was he really bringing back the "don't-forget-who-I-am" threat ?!

They both stared at each other in a tense atmosphere, trying to comprehend the other.

"Nothing justifies taking the life of someone" Sanyukta finally broke the silence.

"Oh yeah, I didn't hear you complaining the other day at Sameer's place" he taunted her back. She had acted like dead bodies were the most common thing in the world !

Sanyukta fell at a loss of words for a moment.

"...That...that was different... that was self-defense" she said weakly.

"Different how ?! You just said yourself, nothing justifies killing someone, yet you are justifying a murder" he retorted, trapping her in her own words.

"When it is time to save one's own life everything is fair and morally acceptable... how very convenient ! " came his angry words, showing her the mirror. She had no right to act this way when she herself had taken part in killing not so long ago. ...Not to mention that she knew how much of corrupted persons were Raghav and his man, they deserved it !

Sanyukta was rendered speechless.

He was right...for once he was actually right ! ...and she could not argue with him. At that moment at Sameer's place, she had been so scared for her own life that all that mattered at that moment was to save her life, no matter how...she had not even thought about the guards as human being... she had thought about them as obstacles... obstacles to overcome.

He was right human were selfish creatures... when it came to themselves everything was fair and good but when it came to others the same actions were morally incorrect and despicable.

But on the other hand, law had been instituted for that exact purpose, to judge the guilty one and punish them for their misdeeds, according to agreed terms of the majority. It was not right to take law in your hands.

"Randhir...you cannot judge others and make your own decisions..." she tried calmer, looking at the problem from a different angle.

"Law has been instituted for that purpose only...you can't take law into your hands..."

"Oh please ! we all know how it works... there be might honest people out there but we all know money buys most of it..." he spitted his rage against corruption.

"And when law doesn't do it...it's better to take responsibility in your own hands..." Randhir said darkly, giving her a scornful look.

"It's easier to chant all the law and await for the decision till death... but it's much better to pull the trigger right there and then... so others might learn a lesson" he said angrily.

"But..." started Sanyukta.

"Enough !!!" roared Randhir.

"I didn't need to justify my actions to you..." he declared, pausing for a second. "But for some reasons I still did..." he informed her, intently looking at her.

"I can't afford mistakes, so many lives depend on me... on Parth, on Vidushi, on Sahil, we can't afford ANY mistake ...in your eyes we might be gangsters, lawbreakers, killers and what not... but we know what we are doing... we have a mission..."

"We KNOW that what we are doing is needed !!! ...End of the story !" he concluded. He knew it was not easy to understand what they did, but him and Parth had spent years studying every angle of the problem and this was the only sustainable solution they had come up with.

Sanyukta's eyes brimmed up... She agreed with him... with his words, law was indeed incapable sometime... she had herself been a witness and a victim of law's incapacity... That's how it had started all in fact...this hacking...this Falcon... she had wanted to take revenge on them... she had wanted to destroy the people who had destroyed her peace... she had wanted to torture them for all the pain they have caused her and her best friend... she had wanted to kill them !

And she has taken her revenge, she had made their life miserable... But hadn't been able to kill them, as she had thought it was morally not acceptable to take someone's life. ...Randhir on the other hand has chosen the other option, he had killed. He had killed someone... he had taken a life... he had blood on his hand...yes... but this blood on his hands had surely helped saving many innocents blood, saving many lives... and at the end of the day it was all that mattered ! ...Dirt has been removed and innocents had been saved... and her moral accepted that !

Her eyes looked up at him, he was not looking at her anymore, his gaze was directed toward the night moon canopy in the window.

A lone tear escaped her eye remembering the past incident that shook her life...

"You're right you know..." he heard her say, Randhir turned to find her resting her neck on his chair near the fireplace, her face glowed under the light from the burning wood.

"We were back from shopping..." she started staring into the space, recalling that fateful day.

"When they kidnapped us, me and Arpita..."

"Tara's mom" she clarified, looking at him.

"We never knew the reason...but we were sure it was Karan's college time rival who got this done... Karan and Arpita were college sweethearts and my batch mates... " she smiled a little remembering the good old times.

Randhir could now see tears dripping down her cheeks... something in him told him to go and hold her...to sooth her.

"Kidnappers shut me into a different room than hers..." she whispered, her voice breaking toward the end.

"...and...and the last thing I remember..." she said closing her eyes, as another tear fell down.

"...was her being brutally raped... Her screams still linger in my ears..." she finished weakly, brushing away the tears that were now continuously falling down.

She felt a hand over her shoulder, sliding down toward her hand, squeezing it, reassuring her softly. As his other hand went to her face, brushing away the tears.

"She couldn't bear the incident and died in shock while...The culprit was set free to go, even with enough evidences to prove him guilty... because his dad had enough money..." she counted him the whole story.

"Sometimes law does turn unfair...or rather blind..." she finally agreed with him.

"Someone...indeed needs to clean the mess..." came his words... completing hers.

She turned to look at him, his eyes held assurance, his gestures held affirmation, his touch gave her strength. Randhir bent down to her level on his knees leveling his eyes in front of hers...

"Sanyukta do you trust me?" he demanded. ...It was maybe the first time she was hearing her name from his mouth so softly...his words a mere whisper yet they held enough emotions but her heart was still in a tiff with her brain... She knew there was more to this sentence than just cordial agreement. ...Much more... It held depth... depth and an invisible promise...a promise she didn't know if she was ready to make or not.

"The question is..." she moved her hand to caress his cheek... "Can I trust you?" Her mere touch relaxed him but her words pierced his heart.

Both fell into silence.

***

Before Randhir could say anything, Sahil opened the door stepping in.

Could not have chosen a better moment to enter, thought Sanyukta. Some people really had a timing problem...

...And guess who came in following him ?...the panda ! ...Great ! ...Couldn't she take a hint ?! Sanyukta muttered...I mean I had been pretty clear last time that she was not needed here...Sanyukta thought, scowling at the panda. Clingy little thing...Talking about clinginess, Sanyukta decided to promote the panda to a new rank : the koala. You know that ugly little thing that is always awkwardly hugging trees... Yup, definitely a koala. ...Now if the koala thought that Mr. Gangster was her tree, Sanyukta would be glad to give her the number of her ophthalmologist ! Mr. Gangster was NOT a tree and definitely NOT hers !

"Sir it's time for your bath..." she heard the koala say. Sanyukta rolled her eyes the very instant she heard her words...

"What...?" came the koala's confused reply...

Randhir who by now stood up next to Sanyukta shifted slowly behind her only to whisper in her ear mischievously, "Aren't you going to do it yourself this time?"

She turned back only to give him her death stare as if she would straightway melt him with her laser vision. ...Were they really discussing some important matter just minutes ago ?! ... she wondered. ...Well if that was the case, every traces of it were gone now, gone was the soft and caring side... instead he had adorned back the devil's avatar, arrogant, perverted and devious.

"What...don't you remember last time...?" He shamelessly smirked back at her... How did he do to make her want caress his cheek one minute and strangle him to death the next...she sighed.

"Keep dreaming !" she replied. No ! She was not going to do that again. Being this close to his perfectly sculpted chest without being able to touch it freely was pure torture. Besides...there was still unfinished and unsettled business between them. It was really not the time for close proximity... They always seem to forget everything around them when they invaded each other's personal space... and right now some things really needed to be settled...! Their relationship, as twisted and as confusing as it was, was taking some really unexpected and dangerous turns...!!!

Sahil cleared his throat to bring them back to the present, Sanyukta glared one last time at him and started walking.

"I'm outta here" she declared holding her bag and moving away... Leaving the devil in the clutches of the koala was a tough decision to take...but it was for the greater good !

As she started moving away, she saw the koala's eyes glow in excitement, as it shyly smiled at Randhir to which he smiled back...

Sanyukta stopped in her tracks, her mouth forming an "O"...seriously ?! ...ab yeh sab chalega yahan ? she boiled, imagining him close to her.

"Seriously ?!" she growled aloud, raising an eyebrow at Randhir.

"What darling...you seem a bit...umm...irritated" said Randhir, once again totally amused by the situation.

"Irritated ?...no am absolutely not irritated" she told him, a fake smile plastered on her face.

"Am just this away..." she showed a little space between her thumb and index "from turning into a violent psychopath and skinning you with a trident" she finished angrily.

She turned toward to koala.

"OUT" she yelled as the trembling koala and Sahil moved out.

Sanyukta almost banged the door on her face. Good riddance !!!


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CHAPTER-30b

"You!" she said pointing a finger at Randhir. She was not going to let him take the upper hand again. "You have no idea what you have gotten yourself into !" she warned him in anger.

"I think I do..." he said smirking at her. "I have a pretty good idea actually..." he added eyeing her up.

She glared at him.

"You are kinda cute when you are angry..." he added.

"Oh you think that am cute when am angry ?!" she rephrased his sentence "...well then get ready because am about to turn f*cking gorgeous !" she snapped, showing him she was not at all amused by the situation.

She marched toward him with full confidence and tightly grabbed his wrist, dragging him along with her toward the bathroom, like a tamed animal.

She locked the door and turned toward Randhir facing him, arms crossed over chest.

"You had your fun, now see what am going to do to you" she informed him, she didn't know from where was coming all this confidence, but right now she was feeling like royalty sitting on her throne, determined and unstoppable. ...She knew she had always been meant to rule... fate had just made a little mistake by swapping hers' and Queen Elizabeth's fate. She wondered how life would have been if she was at Queen Elizabeth's place and if queen Elizabeth was at her place... well if queen Elizabeth was at her place, she would have probably been kidnapped and enduring the devil presence at the moment... she wondered how she would have dealt with that...the next moment a very unpleasant picture flashed in her mind... she pictured an old and wrinkled queen Elizabeth dressed in a pink fluffy coat, an extravagant hat on top of her head... kissing the devil...Eww eww ewww, she quickly snapped out of it. ...There was a huge age issue here...unless the devil was into weird stuff... Ewww. ...It seems like fate had done its work good after all. ...whatever ! she decided to put an end to her royalty dreams and concentrate on the task ahead. Bathing the beast.

"Take off your shirt ! " she ordered crossing her arms across her chest, to which he rolled his eyes.

"If I could do it by myself I wouldn't have requested for a nurse" he taunted her.

No she won't do it this time... it seemed that lately that's all she was doing : unbuttoning the devil's shirt. If she checked the agenda she was sure the task would appear more than once in the past few days.

"Riiight !...It didn't seem to bother you much when you went to take care of some business earlier... " she replied sarcastically, if he had the energy to kill someone, he could very well remove his damn shirt alone !

He sighed... She was again angry at him... But he knew his way out with her... He then slowly undid his buttons... one by one. Eyes not leaving hers.

Sanyukta stared at him. How one did to have such a delectable, enticing, perfectly chiseled chest. It was like every inch of his skin was whispering at her, urging her to come and touch, enchanting her "one touch...only...one soft touch" the velvety voice was alluring her.

"Thinking of something naughty ?" came his voice, breaking her out of her trance.

"Actually I was thinking how will you react at what am going to do..." she quickly made up an answer.

She scrunched her nose and bent down to fill a mug full of water, she then smirked and splashed it at him without so much as a warning, soaking him.

"What the hell woman !! " came his loud groan, water dripping from him.

A bare perfectly chest was yummy, but a bare wet perfectly sculpted chest was even better, she giggled at her thought.

"Do you find that funny ?" he scowled at her.

She was now openly laughing. "You are sooo wet... thinking of something naughty ?!" she mimicked his words, relishing her revenge.

Randhir took this opportunity to snatch the mug out of her hands. The moment her eyes met up his, he threw the water at her, soaking her as well.

Sanyukta shrieked in shock while Randhir burst out laughing.

Sanyukta stilled in shock, hearing him laugh like that ...in a carefree manner. It was the first time she was seeing him actually enjoying something...unknown to her a smile made its way on her face. In her trance, she didn't realized the next water jet that came in her direction, sobering her instantly.

"You ?!!!!" she screamed..."...You.are.dead !!!!" she said pouncing on him. She literally threw herself on him...! Alert...UFO detected... I repeat : Unidentified Flying Object detected !

Under the sudden impact, Randhir lost balance and they both fell on the floor. Sanyukta landing right on top of him. Randhir winced in pain.

. "Owww... Did it hurt?" she immediately asked in concern, taking a pause between her attacks.

"You realize we have wet rug beneath..." she heard him say, she realized the furry rug from whose hem she tipped was right under them pulling them to safety.

"Besides darling...this is only a small scratch" he said smirking. Of course...!

"Cool ! ...Because I was not done with you anyway ! " she declared getting up from the lying position and straddling him. Upon finding a comfortable position, which actually meant "avoiding any contact with his package", she resumed her attacks. She kept on throwing water at him while he attempted to dodge as much as he could. ...And let me tell you, dodging water was not an easy task!

"You bloody gangster... take that ! ...Always irritating me ! ...Jerk !" she rumbled on insults.

"Sanyukta...stop...stop..." he tried.

Finally getting fed up, Randhir swiftly grabbed Sanyukta's wrists in his hands, making her stop abruptly. Silence fell on the bathroom, making them both look into each other's eyes. Why did they always ended up in these kind of situations and positions...no matter what they did, it always ended that way...!

And then Randhir did the most unexpected thing. He laughed...again. Ladies and gentleman, the devil actually laughed... ! ...The act in itself was as much astonishing as when you saw a child walking for the first time ...and you said in the most soft and alluring voice : "Look... he walked !" brushing away a fake a non-existent tear ...right now Sanyukta was taking the exact same tone in her head : "Look... he laughed!" mentally brushing away the non-existent tear.

They both ended up laughing at their insane antics. That was too much ! ...They were even sharing their crazy laughs now...who would have thought... It was like some third vulnerable person entered the conversation and the two enemies immediately teamed up and started gossiping about the intruder. She was the last one to stop with her laughter as it receded to giggles and finally dying when she realized him looking at her, precisely above her abdomen. ...Right at her chest. The forbidden area had turned translucent due to the water on her cotton white shirt, showing off her black lacy bra. Sanyukta flushed and quickly got up, jerking her hands out of his.

Sensing her desire to leave the place, Randhir also quickly got up.

"Wait..." she felt a tug at her wrist.

"What?" she asked still not facing him.

"Where do you think you are going ?" he asked her calmly.

No reply.

"If I recall well..." she heard his voice dangerously close to her. "...you were here to give me my bath" he finished, his words a mere whisper ...rising goose bumps on her neck where she felt his hot breath, sending chills down her spine.

"I can't do it...like that..." she gestured at herself, still not facing him.

"I don't mind it ..." He turned her round, "It's like you accompany me"

"You should remove your top also...that way we will be even" he said a smile on his lips.

Sanyukta only glared at him.

"Ok ok..." he said, hands up.

"Well I guess the soaking part is done... You should start with this now" Randhir slowly handed her a sponge, guiding her hand slowly over his chest. He held her hands against his abs, making her feel them with her fingertips. He leaned back and sighed as Sanyukta's hand touch the hard and perfectly carved surface of his chest. She refused to look at him while he kept his gaze on her face... that had turned as red as ripened berry now. She slowly followed his guided path.

When she said that that it would be torture, she had pictured herself burning over low heat...but the reality was way much worse... she was burning in the raging flames of a compact wood fired oven, every fiber of her being was set ablaze, ready to combust.

She came out of her thought as she felt him guide her hand lower on his chest...lower... and lower...

Her heartbeat quickened. She froze as he led her fingers to the dangerous area, his V line. She felt electricity shout through her touching him there. His eyes were still fixated on her as he was guiding her to where he wanted her to touch him. Her hand came in contact with his jean. The material was completely drenched in water, making it heavier...which was a not really a good thing at the moment, as it was only dragging the jean down, exposing more of his V line. Sanyukta bit her lip in nervousness and excitement.

"Enjoying yourself ?" came the devil's voice, to which Sanyukta instantly opened her eyes. Randhir smirked at her and removed his hand from hers, and handed her water to clean him.

She slowly took up the water and cleaned him up. She finished up in silence, still a bit shaken by what had happened minutes ago. She then handed him a towel, before making her way out.

"You are not going out like this !" he ordered from behind her, halting her in her tracks.

Upon turning she realized he was walking upto her, only to corner her right between himself and the wall. She couldn't utter a word, Damn her ever so running tongue was now completely silent! Traitor... She felt his hands approaching her buttons.

"What...what are you doing ?" she stammered. "Stop" she said as her hands placed themselves over his to stop him from undoing her top's button.

"Sanyukta...do you trust me?" came his suave words almost numbing her and widening her eyes in response. He had used the same words he had used earlier...

And so did she. "Can I trust you?" she inquired back.

His eyes read hers, this hazel orbs met his deep chocolate ones. Something crossed between them, his honesty, her insecurity, his trespassing, her barricades...there was always this invisible pull, this invisible language, this invisible promise... Her hands slowly slipped away from his, letting him have it his way...giving him her response through her actions... Trusting him.

He slowly opened her buttons on by one, unlatching then from the holes. Eyes never darting down, still fixated on her eyes. He removed her shirt, she gazed back reading his eyes passing emotions even unknown to him.

Randhir blinked and move away, stepping out of the bathroom leaving her with eyes shut, trying to calm her sense... trying to comprehend what was that...the thing between them...

But before she could properly fill her blank thoughts with adjectives he returned back with one of his shirt.

"Put this on..." he handed her over with his black one, leaving her alone again.

***

She comes out in his shirt only to see him changed into his tracks and tee. She bundles her wet clothes and walks away towards his room's exit.

"Falcon..." came his words... he turned up from the couch.

"I guess I have a name ! " she retorted back. The tigress was back !

"Where to ?" he asked her.

"Obviously not here..." came her retort. She had to get out of here. She had been exposed too long to his handsomeness, it was beginning to poison her, slowly making her addicted.

"You're staying here with me tonight..." came his reply to which she twitched her nose and widened eyes.

"Pardon ?!" she asked raising her eyebrow. "What makes you think I will obey you?"

"Am not in the mood to argue woman, come here" he told her tired. It had been indeed a long eventful day !

Upon seeing no movement, Randhir went to her, carried her on his arms and threw her on the bed.

"Heyyy..." she whined.

Randhir quickly climbed behind her, the front of his body coming in direct contact with the back of hers. He sensually slipped one hand down her arm, finding her hand. He laced their fingers together, his chin resting on the crook of her neck, as a satisfied sigh escaped him. Sanyukta tensed a bit...but slowly relaxed. Her mind focused on their entwined fingers...and the meaning of it. Lost in her thoughts she drifted into sleep.

***

The gangsters and Sanyukta were gathered at the table having breakfast. Randhir and Sanyukta were stealing glances at each other when they thought the other was not looking. This morning, Sanyukta had woken up earlier than Randhir, she had carefully sneaked out of his room...she was in no mood for an awkward wake up in the arms of a teasing devil...so she chose the easy escape, she fled while he was still sleeping.

"It is even more difficult now" said Vidushi, drawing attention on her. "Police is providing Raghav with strong security" she stated a bit defeated.

"Yes it will be more difficult to approach him" added Sahil.

"That is if we find out where he is...what don't even know where he is hiding" said Parth further.

Randhir listening quietly to their interaction.

"Actually I do have an idea..." started Sanyukta, directing all eyes on her.

"I did some research and...it happens that he is staying in some hotel" she informed them.

"Some hotel" repeated Parth..."..how very informative..." he taunted her.

"Well if you have some brain... you can lessen the scope" she scowled back at him. They had never gone along...

"How so high and mighty Falcon ?" he retorted.

"Well for starters, someone like Raghav is surely not living in a rusted and smelly place...knowing his taste for luxury...we can pretty much bet that he is staying in a luxurious hotel" she enlightened them.

"How many luxurious hotels are there ?" asked Randhir to Sahil.

"About 5 or 6" Sanyukta informed him stepping in.

"How we will find him, we can't go in every hotel openly asking for him" inquired Vidushi.

"No surely not" dismissed Sanyukta explaining that it will only draw unwanted attention.

Everyone fell into silence.

Sanyukta's eyes glowed in excitement. "I have an idea !" she said enthusiastically.

"What ?" asked Randhir and Sahil at the same time.

"You'll see !" she smiled mischievously at them.

"Is it one your twisted idea again ?" he asked her sternly. He was familiar with her wonderful ideas by now...and seeing her this enthusiastic he could not help but stay on alert.

"Trust me!" she told him. "You are talking to the great Falcon after all !" she winked.

"Okeeey...but what do we need to do ?" demanded Vidushi.

"Hmmm...shopping !" she said exited.

They all look at her puzzled, what was this new drama.

"Trust me guys I know what am doing" she tried reassuring them upon seeing their skeptical faces.

"Ok..." said Randhir reluctantly. "But if it's another one of your stupid idea...you'll be in A LOT of trouble...mark my words" he warned her.

"Let's go shopping then !" announced Randhir.

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Res
Unres..

FINALLY...finally I am first...
😭 😭 .. Happy tears...couldn't stop myself...
2nd thread , first chap...

Coming to the update...

I have a question..
From where do both of you get these Shakespearean genes????
This is a masterpiece...
The dialogues, the situation description, the emotional part... Everything is so flawless... So beautifully penned...
Each emotion hits the exact place it is supposed to...

Particularly I love the dialogues... Sanyukta's words!!! So witty... But that does not compromise with the feeling intended... Moreover it intensifies it...

Finally u have revealed her past...
Those bas****s raped her bestie 😭
The deserve something more than a painful death...
The way sanyukta revealed her past gave me Goosebumps 😭

N then came Randhir 's caring part...
Loved him 😳

Entry of the panda was the ultimate lol moment of the part...
I just couldn't control myself 😆 😆 😆
Sanyukta giving promotion to the panda ...
2nd lol moment of the part.. 😆 😆

Then came the bathing part...
M blushing 😳
It was HAWT n sexy...
M still blushing...

Now now now.. Sanyukta has come up with a evil plan yet again!!! Waiting to know wats going in her mind!!!

This story gives humour, emotional stuff, action all in the right proportion that I have fallen in love with it...

Plz don't apologise for the delay as we totally understand masterpieces take time...
N moreover the length of the part partly makes up for it... Not that I don't want longer n regular updates but still... I know both of u r busy...

Both of deserve a standing ovation 👏 👏 👏
I m totally in love with this...

Love n respect to both of you
Shivangi

Ps- when is the next update coming????
Edited by daringdarlo - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yay yay yay yay...
Spectacular update gals
ekdam mast
so glad that sanyukta is now accepting
randhir slowly...and also finally she talked about her past with him
ooohh and she trusts him at least that's what her action meant
oh and they slept in each other's arms awww😳
they are adorable🤗
And again they will work together...😆 randhir is so scared of her idea😉 he will obviously be on alert now😉 now that they have kind of accepted each other😳
it's always worth a wait to your ff gals.
you won't believe, I just opened my eye from my deep sleep searched for my phone on my bed (still lying on bed) and read TMG ... was the first thing I did... it already made my day
Thank you so much👏

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Posted: 10 years ago
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The update was worth the wait... U guys rocked it... Fabulous writting.. loved it..
Edited by TheKanwalKaur - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
Res..
Res kaha update kaha. Bohot na insafi h ye..

Awww amazing update..
It was funny .
Sexy.. Sensuous.. Emotional.. What not??
Randhir is so naughty..
Nsanyukta is embarrassed awww..
Their bathing together was too cute..
Enjoyed a lot..
Love u.
Edited by samridhigoodiez - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome update
Love they way that they both interact with each other
Love the long sandhir scene
Super cute and romantic
Nice
Can't wait to see what the plan is
Update soon
Edited by don girls - 10 years ago

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