Just an UMBRELLA- Epilogue- Satin--Pg 135 - Page 2

Originally posted by: Numera89

sounds good!!! lol umbrellas lol ok we trust there must be some WIERD purpose for the name lol its hilarious thought! yeah i started watching kaa daily instead of all together on the weekends lol that way i can c iqbal every day!!! sounds good i hope angad's evil- sucha turn on LMAO!

Ofcourse there is a wierd purpose to it its my ff 😆😆. Well yes in a way he is evil, but that will be a mystery to be reavealed😛. And there will be no charecter intro there is no point for it and in my opinion its a boring start to an FF😛

start the fan fic soon sounds realy cool

muni, u know why i always read ur ff? coz its different and ur ffs r my favs. i never get bored reading them. this one really made me think! umbrella?? 😕 but its gonna be interesting 😉 i bet that! continue soon

Intro:

Angad got down from a beautiful black Mercedes, it was a rainy day a clear indication that something horrible had happened yesterday. Poor girl angad though, he was thinking about his brother's wife, if she only knew angad's truth, she would probably never marry him. But if she knew his truth she would be dead just like his brother.

He went into a very old building, it was odd seeing such a rich man step down from the new Mercedes Benz, and into an old deserted building. But there was no one around to witness this. He opened the door it did not look anything like the old building outside it was lavishly decorated, with lamps giving yellow faded lights which gave the appearance of the room being lit by thousands of candles.

Angad sat down on the sofa, his one foot crossed over the other, a wine glass held delicately in the palm of his hands. Finally the person he had been waiting for entered his eyes lowered. An instant fire of anger lit angad's face as he looked upon the face of the man, who was responsible for his brother's death.

"I am sorry boss, I tried I really tried" the short chubby man said his voice quavering

Angad smiled, with pain slightly visible in his eyes, "I am sorry David "tried" doesn't work in our business. You were suppose to be with him, you were suppose to protect him at all costs."

"I tried but there was a traitor, within our mist, I did not know I tried."

"Like I said "tried" doesn't work in our business, my brother is dead and now u must suffer the same consequence." Angad clapped his hands twice, it was the death sentence, and everyone knew it was. Two men came out of the door from which david had entered before and dragged him away.

"I already knew about the traitor David, now what remains to be seen is who was it." Angad pulled out his umbrella, before opening the door to go outside, but to his surprise the sky was clear, and the sun was shinning. He smiled, thinking that it was not right to suppose before u know, he went to sit in his black Mercedes. It was his wedding today, a step necessary to assure that another murder was not committed in his near family.

hmmmmmmm.. this is veryyyyyyyyyy different!! thank god!! im tired of reading the same stuff. even tho they are soooooo nicely written i neeeded something new.. when i read ur fanfics name i thought HAHAHA. must be crazy!! i think i get it. i read ur intro.. but im still kinda lost.. u no the murder stuff.. well continue sooooon!!!!

great part can't wait to read more

thys is different....anad can kill people by clapping hands 😆

nywayz otz confusing but itll b cleared im sure of dat!!!! 😃

hhmmm kool........you alwasys write these different things......you know they are all soo ummm.cant describe.......i really loved "only wish"(i am confused...you wrote that roght too right?? 😳 😆 ) , "kahin na kahin." and i really love triangles........these are all different from eachother....and all are superb......when i read the name...i was like what is she upto now...but after reading all your fanfics and the first part of this ff...i can tell it is gonna be really interesting.....so pls pls pls continue soon.........eagerly waiting for your next part.....

Originally posted by: MUNNIBABA2006

hhmmm kool........you alwasys write these different things......you know they are all soo ummm.cant describe.......i really loved "only wish"(i am confused...you wrote that roght too right?? 😳 😆 ) , "kahin na kahin." and i really love triangles........these are all different from eachother....and all are superb......when i read the name...i was like what is she upto now...but after reading all your fanfics and the first part of this ff...i can tell it is gonna be really interesting.....so pls pls pls continue soon.........eagerly waiting for your next part.....

lol thanks😳 i am crazy so i guess my ff are too😛. yes i wrote Only Wish.

Originally posted by: sahr_8

thys is different....anad can kill people by clapping hands 😆

nywayz otz confusing but itll b cleared im sure of dat!!!! 😃

Yes i knew u guys were going to be confused.😛 The purpose of the intro was just to introduce the general story line and not the details.😛 Yup clap clap ur dead. If i had that power hmm... i could do soo much. Kill all the evil people that i hate😆😆 and then everyone would be afraid of me😆😆😆...