Just an UMBRELLA- Epilogue- Satin--Pg 135 - Page 4

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Posted: 18 years ago
#31
hey intro woz awesome!!!
lookin 4ward 2 readin d nxt parts!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#32
wow muniza the story sound awesom!!
i mean eeeekkkkk ANgad sound like mr bad guy but then ofcourse a HOT mr bad guy lol!!
i cant wait untill u post the fist part!! i relaly want to know the deep down story line!!
continue soon!!!(K)(K)(K)(K)(K)


luts of luv
hina
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Posted: 18 years ago
#33
ok next part coming up in a few moments 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
#34
Hey,
nice intro. I am already fallin in love with this one. u've got one heck of imagination. I love the uniqueness of ur stories. They are all amazing! Good Luck and Bye!
Divjot 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 1

It was his wedding today, a step necessary to assure that another murder was not committed in his near family. Angad ran into the church, his future wife was already there in her white gown, she was beautiful, that was the first thing that he had thought of when he had first seen her.

It was amazing they had only seen each other three times and they were suppose to spent their lives together. He saw her once at Prithvi and her wedding, the second when he went over to his brother's house for dinner and third would be today on their wedding day. Of course this was temporary; it wasn't like he was going to spent the rest of his life with her.

His business allowed him to "have" the hottest smoking gals, he was only marrying her because he needed something from her. After he got it, he was going to get his freedom back…well, it wasn't like he wouldn't be free being married to Kripa, no girl could tie angad khanna down, but marriage was a bondage.

Angad remembered a year ago, when he had seen Prithvi and kripa get married, he couldn't believe it. And now there he was, standing there with his brother's widow, or his future wife, hearing the priest recite some nonsense words.

Angad looked at kripa she was beautiful there was no doubt about it but she no longer had the plump happy face that he had seen when Prithvi had married her. Well she was only marrying her b/c her family had compelled her to, they had been so great full when he had asked to marry her.

"You may kiss the bride." The priest said breaking into, angad's thoughts. Angad had never felt so awkward in his life, as he did looking into kripa's eyes she was as confused as he was. "Kissing the bride" that was the stupidest tradition ever angad thought; who ever made that up should be shot. He was relieved when kripa gave him a small peck on the cheek, he did same, remembering the long kiss that Prithvi and Kripa had shared on their wedding.

They both stood there waiting for everyone to come up and congratulate them, angad didn't have too big of a family, it was just him and his sister now. Angad missed his brother, its not like that they talked much but still it was nice to have a brother. Prithvi was also involved in the "business", kripa of course had no idea. Women after all were dumb and of no use, except for on the bed.

He had tried protecting him, but his enemies had found out and killed him, kripa had been in goa at that time. He had managed to hide everything, not even kripa knew that Prithvi was murdered; she thought he died in an accident. That was the reason that he was marrying kripa, because he knew that they were now going to be after her.

But angad wasn't so kindhearted, all he ever cared about was his own blood, it wasn't really kripa that angad wanted to save. He wanted something from her, he wanted Prithvi's child, he would raise him as his own son, it was his own blood. Kripa would not be needed once the child was born, he didn't really care what happened to her after that.

Eight more months, he told himself and then, he would no longer have to pretend to be nice riotous citizen. It was good to keep a low profile for a while because according to his information there was a traitor in the business. It was either an FBI agent or an enemy from the other gang.

His face tightened when he saw Josh come up to him to shake his and kripa's hand. He was on the most wanted list!! If anyone recognized him then angad would be in so much trouble, it would take forever sorting out the mess. When he shook hands with him angad gripped his hand tightly, so much that it made him wince. Angad gritted his teeth in anger, his voice was low, and sounded deadly, "what are u doing here?"

Josh smile, "come on man I wasn't about to miss ur wedding." He looked at kripa and smiled cheerily, her eyes narrowed slightly, but she smiled back, shaking his hand.

Next part: wedding night.😉

I hope its now clearer as to why I named this FF umberella. U know an umberella protects u from rain in the same way angad is marrying kripa to protect her from bullets.

I know that after reading this part u guys are thinking this is going to be a very serious FF but just wait till u find out kripa's side of the story.😉

Edited by munizaaa - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#36
awesome part 😛 angads mean onli guna keep her 4 eight months
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Posted: 18 years ago
#37
awesome part!!

luved it!!! 👏

bechari kripa! 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: blah_blah

awesome part!!

luved it!!! 👏

bechari kripa! 😭

lol she is not a bechari, if u know my ff's u know i mostly never show women as weak, except for triangles where she gets rapped but that was an exception. she is definetely not a bechari, in this FF.

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Posted: 18 years ago
#39
omg omg i wanna no now./... i hpe thys ff goes fast!!! 😃 lyke i mean it doesnt take that long to reveal da secretssssss 😃 😆 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: munizaaa

Women after all were dumb and of no use, except for on the bed.



Great part Muni! Except the part above But I guess it goes with this FF so its okay. The story is interesting and I think I have an idea of what Kripa's side of the story is going to be like 😉

Looking forward to Kripa's story,
Simply_Smart 😛

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