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bhavis

@bhavis

Stunner

Posted: 10 years ago

#891

Meera A river runs through it is the story that most of us relive with every update of yours.😃 It brings the smile back and also takes us back in time machine. I can feel each and every emotion of Khushi and can also visualize the stage with everyone singing. Reminds me of our Civil Day prep😃

I can so very much feel Khushi's jealousy coupled with her insecurity. Your Arjun and Diya are like the best pal in the group. AV asking Khushi to sing with her .

The song that you selected👏 and that reminded me of two songs that we used to play it back to back in every college concert:

Julie Julie, johny ka dil tumpe aya julie and other one was O lal dupate wali tera naam to bata😲 making all Julie's go red and the girls with red dupatta want to kill all those majnus😆

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happypeace

@happypeace

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#892

The update was beautiful meera di!

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kclovearshi

@kclovearshi

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#893

You know you weave an enchanting dream like state with your story; simple words yet beautiful, heartfelt emotions portrayed/felt..

Khushi's one way love (for now, I really hope it's not) is so endearing, does AV Sir have any clue? Gosh, he is such an enigma and what will Khushi do once he graduates?!

You make Khushi's insecurities feel so real with her monologues; her thoughts on Divya Sahay were so cute😉

All those songs are so apt, now what we gonna do after Arohan? 😳

Aww he asked her to sing with him, reminds me of a kannada proverb for what Khushi might be feeling; "patient wanted milk & rice, the doctor prescribed milk & rice" 😆

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Kiran

@lovedrops

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#894

Meera. Finally I caught up with all the chapters. I really love your work. I read all of your stories. When I found out you started new story I felt so happy to read your work again. River runs through it. What an unique name you have given Of course your all stories have the unique names. But I wonder beacuse of the title you gave the names with river names or becasue you gave them the river names you kept the title river runs through it. I love the title. And AV Sir.. He is so hot. And with that guitar he looks awesome in my imagination. I really want to know the feelings AV Sir. I wonder he fell for her when she sang the pyar hua song.. He might have left to control his feelings becasue he is after the gold medal. Hehehe I know its just my crazy imagination. Oh where you have stopped. its hard to wait.. He asked her to sing with him.. how her acidity will increase and how her dhak dhaks will take a toll on her. Please update soon Meera.

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Hot_Chocolate

@Hot_Chocolate

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#895

and Thursday finally makes an appearance

I wonder if I am getting lucky today??

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meera30

@meera30

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#896

Note:

Chapter Nine coming up really late night India time. I apologize in advance if it ends up being Friday morning in India when I actually end up posting :)

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Kiran

@lovedrops

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#897

Originally posted by: meera30
Note:

Chapter Nine coming up really late night India time. I apologize in advance if it ends up being Friday morning in India when I actually end up posting :)

No problem meera. For the stories from good writers.. Readers always will be desperate. Every second of delay increases our anxiety. But no problem.. You know why.. Reading an amazing update after the wait gives so much happiness. Take your time meera. I know you will come with an outstanding update which makes us forget about the wait. 😛

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sban

@sban

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#898

no problem Meera.. take your time.. as it is Careless Whispers has taken my heart away today (and last time).. not sure i could survive 2 updates in the same day :)