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kanthi_chks

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Posted: 10 years ago

#881

Sorry double post 😊

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anisharoy1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#882

I just looovvveee this story. from song selection to name selection everything is perfect. AV sir or AV ...such a relief from regular ASR . and of course Kaveri is much better than kumari. A not so perfect khusi is more believable than so beautiful sanaya irani. guitar...function. ...collage...specially engineering. I love everything about this story. I have read your other stories and came to an conclusion that you should write more of this kind of stuff. All your stories are great but this one is outstanding.

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xZoyax

@xZoyax

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Posted: 10 years ago

#883

Simply amazing👏

The way she is drawn to him and is confused with her mixed feelings, is quiet natural.Love your description there.I am a bit upset with her for not having confidence about her abilities.and what is this with her looks.She is beautiful inside out but I think only others can see but no one ever told her yet.

Can't wait for them singing together.wow just wow!

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neha2013g

@neha2013g

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Posted: 10 years ago

#884

just awesome.. loved the update..

looking fwd to arhi singing together 😃

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fatima2603

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Posted: 10 years ago

#885

Omg...you dropped a bomb at the end! Arnav wants khushi to.join him??! WHAAAT? I am on cloud 9 for khushi! Cannot wait for the next chapter! I want to see khushis response. And divya seems so lovely...khushis inner monologue about divya was funny and very realistic!

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sunitikapoor

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Posted: 10 years ago

#886

Beautiful update as always...I love that everyone is posting all amazing songs.

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sonal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#887

Awesome update Meeraji...

AV wants khushi to sing along with him wow...

Impatiently waiting to know which song they will sing...

Let it be chedchadWala song...

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ArhiMaria

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Posted: 10 years ago

#888

arnav asking Khushi to sing with him,,,, what more can we ask for? 😃

can't wait for the next chapter!!!!

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Skyfall

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Posted: 10 years ago

#889

Absolutely dreamy update once again! I swear the Khushi in your story reminds me of myself back when I was at college which is why I love your story. I feel I can relate to her so much. I also adore the mystery of Arnav you have created, and I admit I can't wait to see what he thinks of Khushi.

I love the setting of this story as it reminds me of innocent times, innocent love and generally being allowed to have no responsibilities whatsoever.

Seriously can not wait until the next update, hope it is soon :)

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the_breeze

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Posted: 10 years ago

#890

Haeee the after effects of the Ganga kinare meeting with AV Sir have still not worn off our dear Khushi it seems 😉

LOL reading about the preferential treatment meted out to her in her department had me shaking my head and giggling at the silliness of it all...

Ahem! Seeing him everywhere are we now Kaveri ;) Awww the library run-in was so sweet! I LOVE libraries! So I can totally relate to the smell of the old books, the crinkling/rustling of pages, sigh! I could spend hours there!

You know what Meera, I really really HOPE that you will include atleast a small chapter/interlude from Arnav's POV. Fingers crossed...

The line about her being disappointed 43 times in the lsat 33 minutes was just adorable! Ah first love woh bhi college romance! Meera you are making so many of us all nostalgic yaar! Uparse your song selection, takes me right back to my childhood and the 90s! Those were the days man!

Uh oh! Who is this new entrant! A friend or a foe??? So Divya Ma'am is pretty, claps daintily and has a tinkling bells wala voice. Aiyo Khushi, need you be more disparaging of yourself?? To have made such comparisons in minutes. Cmon you can't be that bad. And there is the good girl we know, berating herself for the nasty thoughts about a stranger. Oh ho! Arnav sir making a retort on her bahalf to Arjun! Wah wah! Arjun is as adorable as always! I have dibs on him ha since Arnav isnt gonna be available any time soon 😆

Oh damn! Khushi singing with Arnav!!! How the heck is she gonna not make a nervous mess of herself in front of him! Eeeppp I am suepr excited for this! Can't wait to see how Kaveri Khushi Gupta handles this latest curveball! 😉

Also you mentioned a lot of the questions even I had in mind, so waiting for the adda to open! Will definitely be there with a cup of badam milk (since I don't drink tea) and garam garam Banarsi Kachori! (Damnit I am hungry now) 😃