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MDTharun

@MDTharun

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#911

Khushi is enjoying each moment with her first crush AV Sir & ''Aarohan '' is just the open opportunity for khushi to learn AV Sir more . The songs were very lovely , could imagine Arnav - khushi singing . Arjun is second hero in this story ,he has same fame like Arnav but Arnav obviously has the upper hand . The flashback has so many wonderful moments when we reach the present what will be the scenario ?
Loving every bit of this update

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neha2013g

@neha2013g

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#912

awesome update... beautifully written 👏

i am just worried abt future.. khushi wont be able to take a heartbreak easily...

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Aathira

@chikkus05

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#913

Wow beautiful chapter and full of filmy.loved every bit of it.amazingly written.really wondering what happened in the past.oh di I'm falling in love with this story again and again.u r one of the writer who can bring smile on my face with ur updates.thanks di

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just4this

@just4this

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#914

Meera I might have read so many stories but when I read ur stories they r so refreshing and every small emotion u take into consideration and express it so beautifully ,it just leaves Mark in my mind and heart .

I want to confess that I enjoy my 2nd read the most , where I do justice to the every word u write.

The update was simple mind blowing, romantic and cute.

By reading this update my happy just like khushi.

Thanks for such good story

Thank u

Be blessed

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bhavis

@bhavis

Stunner

Posted: 10 years ago

#915

Pahela pyaar indeed it is. Khushi comparing the two men in her mind and then giving brownie point to Arnav😊

Meera as always selection of song was 👏.

Arnav Khushi convo and speechless Khushi was treat but am wondering how long will this festival last? Or is it that the past was just everything that happened in festival?

This story is nostalgic 😃

Edited by -Bhavi - 10 years ago

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SS88

@SS88

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#916

Oh this was lovely, M. I loved every line and every word. I can't talk enough about how happy this update made me. Waiting for more :)

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Kiran

@lovedrops

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#917

Beautiful update meera. Oh how can I say how much I am loving this Arnav. He sang with Khushi and made her flutter with all the feelings evoking at once in her heart. The attraction she is feeling towards him is making her breathless. Her heart is flushed with the river of emotions when he joined her in the practice. I must say thanks to divya for not being available this year. The confidence she got herself after he asked her to join him is itself showing how much she is in need of his recognition. later all the songs they sung in the form of anthakshari are so fun. You reminded me of my college days where we used to sing and dance in our group meet rooms. Can I ask you a question meera... Did u by any chance had engineering in mechanical engineering.. Just curious you know.

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Mints23

@mints23

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#918

This story not only makes me feel all nostalgic and mushy... it makes me begin humming random songs that seem to have been somewhat hazy with time... This update was dreamy and romantic... with Khushi losing herself to the emotion called love... while the entire college joins her in the madness. For some people it is not the easy way out... their choices and decisions make things tougher in life... but challenges makes the victory more sweeter than ever... just like Khushi could easily have fallen in love with the adorable Arjun and possibly have lived a life full of laughter and fun. But her heart went out the quiet and reticent AV Sir... and I am not too sure if her heart is safe in his hands. With each passing update... my heartbeats escalate in fear of what is going to happen with Khushi's fragile heart... so that in the time leap... as we have seen in the prologue... she is vary to meet with Arnav. Sigh!! Meera... don't leave us with so many questions... 😆

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hotchic.

@hotchic

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#919

Has the love started blooming ?{Arnav's side}😳 or he just admires her or i'm just hallucinating'?🤔

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cineraria

@cineraria

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#920

The river and the sea

Two hearts but one

At first it's a glance, you don't realize when your eyes reach the last words of the poem, having made not much of it save the beauty of the rhyme, the beauty of the images that first come to mind, the beauty of sounds that come to mind.

But when does one realise that it's not something ordinary? That one has found a gem?

It's in the ascent that eyes make to the top and journey down again, and again, and again, and again, you cannot stop yourself. And every time you re-read, the words appear more beautiful, the images more vivid, the sounds more real and the poem becomes a song.

That's exactly what "Journey To The Sea" did to me.

Kaveri Khushi Gupta and Arnav Varun. Good Lord dear author, there's a river and there's the sea. That's her, the hesitant river at first, a dreamy romantic, wishful young girl. She's vulnerable but she's hopeful, fanciful.

It's that girl's journey through life, through years of land and sand (hardships?) life and death (of dreams or hopes?) but the years make her strong and... yet at the end he awaits - The vast, mysterious ocean, one she can't elude. They are destined to meet and become one.

I missed this and I am reading it all again. It's Meera behen's story after all and I can't just swallow it in a go. I have to savor it, revel in it. Fret over it, rejoice with it. Fall in love with it.

At this point, before I shut up, I can't help but share this song that has been playing in my head, that plays whenever I read this poem. Journey to the sea invokes in me uncannily similar emotions as this classic by Mukesh does.

Oh re taal mile nadi ke jal mein,

Nadi mile sagar mein,

Sagar mile kaun se jal mein,

Koi Jaane na...

(Oh yeah, who is this Arnav Varun... koi jaane na)

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9Za8ZtfHXXY[/YOUTUBE]

PS: Sorry for that rambling behen, I just couldn't help it.