Tewari & Sons, 23, Chandni Chowk (THREAD II)

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SS88

@SS88

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Posted: 10 years ago

#511

What does Payal have to be jealous for? She has a comfortable home , a father who dotes on her, the career of her choice. Just because Arnav is distracted for one day doesn't negate the fact that he is committed to her. At least just as committed as she is to him. Their relationship is not a warm affectionate one and she knows that since the beginning. I actually hope that she confronts Khushi and then she'll realize how good her life is. Khushi's is just one disaster after another. I hope Payal helps her. That would be a nice twist, wouldn't it? I know I have been counting on Akash or Arnav to save the day. But now there seem to be many more options - Aman , Payal. Or maybe Khushi herself.

I have said this before but I will say it again. Your characters are so real and relatable. And such s beautiful story. Keep it up Radhika .

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Minnie

@Illuminatus.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#512

Loved the Chapter.

Aman, Khushi, Arnav equation is interesting.

This chapter was about birth and death. Preeto gives birth to a baby girl who is named Lehar. a name Khushi loves. And, Baig Sir passes away someone whom she sees as a fatherfigure.. who has always supported her.

And then there is Arnav whose twinges for Khushi are becoming more evident and even Khushi is beginning to acknowledge that she wants him to like her, but does not understand why.

Uff! these are the most clueless 27 and 28 year olds I have ever met.

Oh! Aman or Divyesh... OR someone... show us the way that is do-re-mi-farrr away from the awkwardness and show the main characters the correct station even though they are sitting on wrong trains!!

Well, at least there is a new phone, and phones that ring loud enough for someone to hear and listen!! 😆

ps-what am I talking about above???

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Archna

@archnahardik123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#513

Ouch last line. This is going to hurt arnav a lot.

He is already feeling sad and jealous due to Aman and now Khushi didn't even remember his number.

But I am glad that he is not going to let anything happen to her this time and he is even taking advices from lawyer regarding her shop. But boy I am so happy that Aman could bring out jealousy in arnav which not even Akash could manage to do.

Even Payal is feeling jealous of Khushi now. Maybe she was always jealous of her but never admitted. But really what kind of relation arnav and Payal have. They don't love, not even understand each other so well. Don't know why they are marrying.

I liked Aman a lot. He in his own funny way get along so well with Khushi that left arnav thinking about him and Khushi.

Thanks for fantastic update. Loved it.

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Ong18

@Ong18

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Posted: 10 years ago

#514

Simply I love this Chapter! 😃 👏

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anjs

@anjs

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#515

lovely update...poor Arnav doesnt know why Aman n Khushi's friendliness is hurting him...above that Khushi didnt respond to his message n in the end, she didnt even remember that the number belongs to him...he is gonna be might angry with her...

i think Aman nurses some soft corner for Khushi, thats why he is back only to meet her...hope she stays away...i flinch everytime Payal comes into equation...dont like her at all, not even their wedding topic...wish she just vanishes in thin air

i think Arnav might help Khushi, through Divyesh or Aman...hopefully she will know its him, despite that...

m eagerly hoping that someday this story turns into a love story of Arnav n Khushi, which at the moment seems highly impossible...would be disappointed if eventually Arnav marries Payal and him meeting Khushi wud be just a passing thing

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anu1017

@anu1017

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Posted: 10 years ago

#516

Awesome update R!!! Totally loved it!! You always manage to keep some secrets in the update :-) cannot wait for the next update!!!

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ipkknd12

@ipkknd12

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#517

😆 Indeed come a full circle with "Sorry, who is this"... Absolutely loved it.

Loved the fact that Arnav is hurt with Aman & Khushi's easy friendship. Khushi doesn't want him todisapprove of her. Things are headed in the right direction.😊

Eagerly waiting for the next to see Arnav's reaction to the last sentence. Fabulous job Radhikaji.

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Vaiga

@Aashmin

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Posted: 10 years ago

#518

'who is this'... That was a punch... At the right place... I somehow knew dt that fried phone n lost nos will do some magic in their life.. Arnav n kushi' s.. But I didn't expect that to happen this soon.. That too this royally...
For the first time my guess came true.. Aman has some keys...
There are so many stories which deals with arnav n kushi in past n present.. As school mates n colleagues or something else like that.. But what I love about this story is that both are not romantically involved in their past... It's so good to witness the building up of
a new beginning... The killing slow pace is enthralling... keep me waiting for the next update...
I would love more of aman...
U give all ur characters space.. Dvyesh... Baige sir.. Noor mom..
I wonder if we could get c a payal actually falling in love with the right person...
Will be waiting...