Tewari & Sons, 23, Chandni Chowk (THREAD II)

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rulama

@rulama

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+ 8

Posted: 10 years ago

#491

Wow! What a last line???!!!

While Aman Khushi equation is still lingering in his mind... the query, who is this???

What a jatka! Both Arnav and Khushi seem to be deeply into this jatka business!

But is it from Khushi only??? Since she does not have or remember Arnav's number she is bound to ask so too...

So much has been packed in an update that I don't know what to comment and what not to!

But let me begin on a lighter note...

Radhika... Preetho's family reminded me of Enid Blyton... Ginny and Noddy!😆

Now that Arnav is coming to know all about Khushi's problems, that seem to be of gigantic proportions compared to her shop, should he not think twice before judging??? But that seems to be a far fetched notion! He sees only Khushi taking the gift and not her burnt hand...!!! If he just probed about this his jealousy would take a backseat! Now his chat with Payal seem to add fuel to Khushi's woes! Will Payal not go behind his back and add to miseries in Khushi's life??? As the quote goes, a jealous does a better research than FBI, will Payal though not in love with Arnav, feel being not the focus of his attention and go out of her way to make things uncomfortable to Khushi? The only point of sanity will depend on how Akash will be able to rein in! Here things seem to be dependent on Akash and Aman! Arnav will try, but given his earlier track of record, everything will always be viewed with colour glass until it is proven otherwise...

Anjali and Poonam seem to be like divergent rays who are not destined to meet eye to eye once Anjali has started to form her own thoughts...

How realistically things have been presented!👏

Edited by rulama - 10 years ago

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bkamber

@bkamber

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Posted: 10 years ago

#492

New Chapter coming up!!
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kclovearshi

@kclovearshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#493

~Unres~

I will start with the last sentence "Who is this"

That was a back to square one feeling for Arnav; If I were him, I would be pissed 😆

Although it has nothing to do with this song, it reminded me of it..(the original)

Kanta Laga
kanta Laga, Hai Laga
ha Aaja Ha Raja
(bangle Ke Peeche Teri Beri Ke Neeche
hai Re Piya Aha Re Aha Re Aha Re Piya
kanta Laga, Hai Laga
ha Aaja Ha Raja) -2
bangle Ke Peeche Teri Beri Ke Neeche
hai Re Piya -2

Only because Kanta laga rhymes with Zatka laga 😆

I love this Arnav; he is so fallible; prone to misunderstanding; but there is something endearing about him and I don't know why they both are taking their sweet time testing our patience 😆

But both want approval from each other- that was so cute..

The event in flashback what happened after Khushi fried the phone- the scooping and taking to hospital was romantic, although Mr. Raizada better not be aware of this 😆

But I have to say this, I was shocked by Aman's revelation that he was the one who blamed Khushi; all of a sudden he is not looking hot & sexy to me; and how could Khushi forgive him so easily; but then she has moved on from the past and she has more pressing matters to handle in the present, so it doesn't make any difference to her who started it;

All the boys are still stuck in the past with remorse for all the wrong-doings they were responsible..

It was weird for Arnav to have met Aman in Tewari shop after all these years; Khushi is placing Preetho and Arnav in the same boat and thinking Arnav didn't extend as much as Preetho but how could that be possible, he moved out of country and Khushi doesnt know how much Arnav has tried to keep in contact; I really felt bad for Arnav that his friendship withered this way..

Preetho is one in million- in fact a saving grace for Khushi; she is indirectly responsible for Khushi's resilience 😊 Loved the name Lehar - is that most popular in India right now?

And I too didn't understand some of the proverbs you had used and I read someone's comment what they meant 😊

I love your Anjali, though she is a communist 😆 Thumbs up for her adoption plans- I wish the Bollywood star had followed her lead (and that's why I'm humbled by Angelina Jolie 😉)

Oh about that secret meeting with Sr. and Jr. Raizada - you made it very inconsequential (by not going over when it was happening :) ) But glad Arnav is doing something about Khushi's troubles; and who would be the anonymous helper? do we know? scratches head..

Oh last but not least; Baig sir passed away? that was really sad news; Hope the son is not very young and all these students help the family get thro' the grief..

Arnav's thoughts were understandable given he always postponed meeting him :(

Payal has started to get those vibes that something is not right; I'm waiting who will call off the wedding first and for the other's reaction 😉

Oh can NK stay forever 21, young I mean 😆

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Jay

@jduke

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#494

Cool update. Enjoyed reading Aman and his banter 😉. Green eyed monster is making presence at Arnav's heart seeing Aman - Kushi closeness 😆. I guess last sentence spoke by Kushi.

Edited by jduke - 10 years ago

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MDTharun

@MDTharun

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#495

Preetho - Ginny have become proud parents of a Princess , khushi couldn't help but feel envious seeing her friend who is blessed with normal life unlike her who's life is full of problems . Preetho & Anjali are the nosy women in Tewari & Sons , they just add salt and spice to Arnav - khushi's hectic life .

Suicide Boy no scratch that Aman has lifted 😉khushi in his arms & treated her burnt hand . Seeing the size and luxury khushi couldn't help but feel this is not affordable . Love this khushi , she is the same from the beginning , she always see luxury as money which she cannot afford . So Aman has lied Arnav that khushi is responsible for his suicide attempt & Arnav being short tempered blasted khushi . Both men have made khushi a scapegoat . Looks like later Arnav have found out Aman's lie and their relationship is strained .

Arnav has hired Mr Roy to find solution for khushi's problem , looks like the girl is in deep trouble . Shivam doesn't want Akash to know about problems associated with khushi's Tewari & Sons . Arnav doesn't want to advice or offer any help directly to khushi which will be politely refused .

Aman has brought a new Mobile to khushi which she took after lot of mental debate & this scene was witnessed by ASR himself . Jealousy was pouring out from every cell of Arnav😆 . Both Arnav - khushi doesn't want the other to think anything bad about them . Khushi is single & Arnav is all set to marry Payal ''Iss Pyaar ko kyaa naam doon ''

Payal has started feeling jealous about khushi , well this is not a surprise sooner or later this will become an ugly fight .

Poor Jhalli , have problems in conceiving a baby . Anjali - Jun has decided to adopt a baby girl which is very appreciable .

Baig is no more , Arnav is feeling guilty for not turning up on any meeting with his former coach .

Looks like khushi has not saved Arnav's number in her new mobile , so again the same question ''Who is this ? ''

Edited by MDTharun - 10 years ago

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aquagal

@aquagal

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#496

Res

*Unres*

I would call this chapter as one full of guilt and insecurities.
Aman is guilty for causing mayhem in Khushi's life in the past. Arnav is guilty for what his family has done to Khushi and now doesn't want it to repeat. Also for not keeping in much touch with Baig Sir. Khushi is insecure thinking if Arnav disapproves her, I mean even today after all these years. Payal is insecure how everyone is meeting Khushi these days. So in short for New-On-ites it was an insecurity filled update. 😛
The two people free from all these feelings were Anjali and Preeto and how much I loved these two. I love how you have created all these characters. They all are different, have their own individuality.
Chalo Preeto must be relieved now when she learns about Aman gifting Khushi a new phone. Uske jeejaji ne na sahi but Khushi ke ek ameer dost ne toh usko phone diya😆 Uff Preeto is fun!!!
I wonder how will Arnav help Khushi indirectly. Will he be taking help from Akash or some third person? I have three people in my mind - Akash, Aman and NK. But I doubt if Arnav will take help from Aman as there is still some awkwardness between them. Not to forget it's related to Arnav's family. So Aaksh and NK seem like the good choice.
I'm happy for Anjali is she is going to adopt a baby. As Arnav said it's her and Joon's choice about what they want in their lives, their family.
I can understand Payal's frustration over everything. Her relation with Arnav is nothing like the usually going to married couples.
Ohhh Baig Sir!! He was a nice man. Arnav is feeling guilty thinking about what ifs and if only. I hope he learns and starts talking to people he wants.
First Arnav was worried that Khushi wasn't responding to his messages and now that she has replied she is askign who he is. Arnav ka dil toh poore ka poora toot gaya hoga ab.. Poor guy!! Someone tell him that Khushi has lost both her phone and his phone...

Edited by aquagal - 10 years ago

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Radhika

@YellowBoots

Navigator

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#497

Finally we have an update 😛

My next chapter will also be a present day chapter and I have no idea when I will post it. But I will hopefully post it quicker than it took me to post the current one.

Once again thank you all for being amazing readers.

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ntmrjn

@ntmrjn

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#498

I just love the way so many events are happening..from the preeto's hospital drama to arnav and his annoyance..each events come across so easily that it is reality..
Khushi is the centre of the circle in arnav's life..how everything from start to finish are interlinking with him..
Aman and his joke were really enjoyable.the whole fiasco of getting her to hospital,his car,hospital drama,phone gifting..I got thrilled with so many events that happened..you really give detail of every events and that's what i enjoy the most.
Coming back to arnav,what to say,he is getting affected in many ways by khushi and for khushi..the whole universe is conspiring to bring them together..He got disappointed but was it really becoz khushi accepted aman's gift and be friendly or he couldn't bring the smile in her face and she didn't even contact him.
Seems that now arnav will get angry or know why khushi didn't call..

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Kamala

@Kamala05

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+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#499

Isn't jealousy a symptom of love ? oh Arnav is in trouble, he is falling in love with Khushi and yeh ishq nahi hai aasan , too many hurdles to overcome. Strangely, I love Aman Khushi relationship more than Arnav Khushi equation. Because, as Arnav observed with Arnav Khushi is too conscious , she thinks twice to interact and a kind of awkwardness was in their relationship. I enjoy reading Preeto Khushi interaction, Preeto seems to be a funny girl.
So can we expect a love triangle soon Aman, Arnav- Khushi ?