Tewari & Sons, 23, Chandni Chowk (THREAD II) - Page 51

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Posted: 10 years ago
Oooh! Loved Aman's entry and loving his character too.. The entry of Arnav at the perfect time.. That was brilliant .. The hurt.. He's jealous already !! And payal is seeing the change in him too. So now that Khushi does not have his number and he gets a message like that, I wonder what he's going to think..I wonder why aakash is missing.. He hasn't tried to contact Khushi in some manner.. Loving the way the story is going..I'm positive Aman has something for Khushi and he has realized it too.. And Arnav obviously hasn't realized yet.. Getting more and more interesting. Awesome update as always.. The problem with that though is it makes it hard to wait for the next one.. Lol..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely chapter!!
Khushi has so much in her plate than what she can digest...
I like the way Preeto talks about Khushi's school friends..She is funny..And she finally delivered the baby much to everyone's relief...
Aman doesn't seem to have changed much.Though I think its much of an appearance.Kind of feel sad when he talks about death in a casual manner...
He comes back to gift Khushi a new phone..but why did Arnav turn up at Khushi's shop?
Arnav is trying to help Khushi in his own way which is nice..i like that he is taking extra efforts to mend his relationship with Khushi,but the question is will Khushi like his interference?
Anjali is going to adopt a baby girl which is sweet..I think Jali and Ju will prove to be great parents...
Lastly Khushi has lost Arnav's number and I hope Arnav does not misunderstand her by thinking that she deleted his number or is ignoring him..

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Posted: 10 years ago
Taste of jelebi due to fried phones... Lol. Awesome chapter.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Interesting Update..Very Well Written...👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
oh...no... more rifts... more misunderstandings..more judgments...more hurt... Now I really wonder how Arnav and Khushi will be able to patch up and be in friendly terms at least... Arnav will have to learn to talk or ask before jumping into conclusions..
But cant believe Payal and Arnav are taking such dumb decision when there is nothing called chemistry between them..
I really want to know what Aman is seriously upto..?
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update...
I loved the last line,who is this? Arnav is already lil jealous of aman and khushi s interaction and gifts.
What he will imagine now?
What is Aman upto? What he wants from khushi,forgiveness ,friendship or some thing else?
I don't understand Arnav and Payal s relation,there is nothing between them.how foolish of them sitting and selecting wedding invitation cards.
Payal will not sit quiet after listening about the attention Arnav giving to khushi .

Update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome chapter! Preeto and khushi's conversations are always fun to read and aman was great to. The end was sad though but i couldn't help but laugh at the 'I'm sorry but who is this' Loll. Looking forward to the next update already!
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Posted: 10 years ago
"I am sorry but who is this?"


And there back to where it started at Tewari and sons. This time though unintentional. Circle of life, how aptly put.

That line was heart breaking, the one of Baig Sir passing away. What came to my mind was a scene with Noor mam and Baig Sir's young son. Such is the power of your story telling that I keep forgetting they are all fictional characters, all I could think was how difficult would life now be for that kid.

" somehow this seemed like the end of an era. Like the last, tenuous connection that he had with that world had somehow snapped."

I remember a time, quite similar in experience it was when one of my favorite teachers in primary school had passed away. Her health had gradually declined over months and we were aware of that. I along with two of my friends had always been very close to her and we'd often go to the primary section to meet her when we were seniors at school. Throughout the time when she was not keeping well, we thought we'd visit her when she gains a bit of health lest she be exhausted when we meet her. We had passed school by then. She was only 30, we didn't expect something drastic would happen, you can never imagine anything like that for people close to you, you keep telling yourself it'll all be good again. When the news came I couldn't quite come at terms with it. There was regret that I should have met her more often. There was that sinking feeling that all that I'll have now would be memories, nothing new would be created, but memories that would remind me of an era that has ended.
How poignantly your lines surmised that state of mind!

Among other things that I loved were Anju and Jun adopting a kid. They are officially my favorite couple.

Haha and all those New-On guys who had once brought sometimes intentional and oftentimes unintentional harm or heartbreak Khushi's way have now made one of the goals of their life to seek retribution.

Awesome update as always behen, now I shut my laptop and demand from my mum some hot Dum Aloor. She'd surely correct me, Dum Aloo.

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Posted: 10 years ago
I read every encounter of Arnav and Khushi with much trepidation. You just know some sort of MU is inevitable. Arnav paraphrasing Bogart was perfect, a doomed romance seems inexorable.

Preeto is such a great friend. And very prescient. Phone ke barey mein socha and there Aman was with one! She most certainly knows how to get her own way. She wanted Khushi with her and she got Khushi with her! That little aside about the TV was so amusing. People who could afford to pay twelve thousand rupees still feeling the need to get full paisa vasool by flicking the sets 😆

I love the way Arnav's being shown. He's vulnerable, he's good hearted, he does use his dimaag as well, he's maybe a tad too sensitive but that's also so endearing. Payal is not for him. She just isn't.

And your last line, kitna sehna padega usse :( hope she tells him about her phone jaldi. Otherwise we're going to have him saying, "Arnav ... naam to yaad rahega".
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: cineraria



Haha and all those New-On guys who had once brought sometimes intentional and oftentimes unintentional harm or heartbreak Khushi's way have now made one of the goals of their life to seek retribution.




Somehow, there's something so alluring about this line. Seeking retribution, redemption whatever. The simple, unpretentious girl who just wants to make something out of her life is sucked into something with so many links that she can't even make sense of it.

Like Preeto said, ""Itne saare ameer ladke tumhaare aage peeche ghoomte rehte hain, lekin ek ka bhi koyi fayda nahin."

It makes me feel bad for Payal, that this middle class girl could elicit such intrigue in all the boys of her social circle, and I absolutely feel for the tentacles of envy entering her heart.

I love this Aman. He's my favourite New Onite.

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