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Posted: 18 years ago
awsome part but that so sad! yaar plz dunt kill the baby! plzzzzzzzzz! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
great part
i hope kripa doesn't loose her child again
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Posted: 18 years ago
awwwwwww amazing prt ...plz save the baby
Edited by me_iq - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
nooooooooo dont let kripa's baby die plzzzz let either angad or shiv save her!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
As dev raised the stick to hit kripa…angad shouted loud and shut his eyes. Anger rushed thru his blood. He opened his eyes will his eyes shaded red of blood. Angad got up angry will knocking down both of the guards. Dev was about to hit kripa when angad held the stick from his hand. Dev looked behind him and saw angry angad. Angad pulled the stick off his hand and punched him hard in the stomach. He pulled dev up and kept on punching him more and more on the stomach really angry. The two guards tried to hold from angad when angad turned around and pulled from one of the guards hand and hit hard with his arang at his reset breaking his hand then punched hard on the stomach. The other guard took his gun out when angad grabbed it and turned his hand around tourd the guards head and pushed his finger shooting on his head.

Kripa was shocked and really scared. She shut her eyes and put her hands on her ears trying not to hear the gun shot. There was more gun shot and kripa was scared to open her eyes not knowing who was dying. The gun shot stopped. She felt a figure coming in front of her. She still didn't open her eyes scared a lot. Angad looked at kripa and hugged her tight. His grips where tight and was hurting kripa. Kripa slowly opened her eyes and tried to apart. She pushed him away from her self and looked at his eyes.
A: kripa its me
K: shakes her head)
A: gets close to her but kripa moves back) kripa why are u scared of me?
K: ur not angad….ur not my angad
A: kripa its me
K: crys) I don't see my angad in u anymore….I want my angad back….im scared plez
A: puts his hand on his face trying to calm himself down….he sighs and looks at her with tears in his eyes…kripa runs in his arms and hugs him tight)
K: angad
A: im sorry….I don't know what happen to me…Im sorry
K: I was really scared….im sorry to….
A: lets go…shut ur eyes and don't look until I tell u
Kripa shuts hers eyes will angad puts his arm around her and takes her from there. He didn't want her to see what he has don't…becz he knew the way he killed them she will be horrified if she sees dead people and he didn't want that.

They were walking down the street when few bike riders came there and started to ride around them. They were all wearing black cloths and were from some gangs. There was 6 of them and all of them yelling shouting making faces.

Kripa hugs angad more tight scared will angad looks at them angry hugging kripa protecting her. All of sudden more bike riders came there and stopped in front them facing angad and kripa. One person took their hamlet off and got off it bike…it was a women. She looked at angad and kripa then laughed to herself
W: hello….nice to see u again kripa
Kripa slowly moves her head up from angads chest and looks at the women….she was surprised to see suhana.
S: smiles to kripa) what's wrong…did u forget me
K: gets behind angad scared)
Suhana was surprised to see kripa hiding behind a guy…she start to laugh will her gang looked at her confused
Suhana turned around facing her gang
S: laughing) can u believe this…kripa the person who almost killed me in jail today is scared of me and is hiding behind a guy (everyone in her gang start to laughs) oh my god…I cant believe this…(looks at kripa who was still hiding behind angad and u could just see half of her face) kripa..is it really u?…
A: what do u want
S: and u are
A: no of ur business
S: oh is that so…kripa why are u being such a coward today…come out and face me
K: still doesn't come)
A: stay away from her
S: looks at angad) why are u protecting her…
Few of the guys pulls angad away from kripa. Angad was to strong for them so 8 people were holding him not letting him go.
K: let him go plez
S: more shocked for what she heard) kripa….what the hell is wrong with u
K: looks at her scared)
S: get angry) I want the same kripa as I seen in jail
K: leave us alone
S: only if u finish the fight that u left incomplete
K: I don't want to fight u
S: u have to (moves toward her)
K: moves backward) I said I don't want to fight leave me alone
S: slaps her across the face….she wait thinking that kripa would hit her back but she didn't and it made suhana more mad) I said fight me
K: I don't want to
S: fine…save ur self if u can…(she slaps kripa more but kripa didn't fight back)
A: shouts loud) stop thissssss
S: stops and looks angad angry then back at kripa…she pushes kripa) fight me I said
A: leave her alone I said…
S: rises her hand to hit kripa will kripa puts her hand in front of her face shutting her eyes scared.)
A: his blood start to boil again will anger rushes inside of him. He hits all the 8 people off himself will they fall on the ground. Angad holds from suhana's hand angry. He was about to hurt her when kripa stops him
K: holds from his arm) angad don't…leave her angad
A: she tried to hurt u and ur telling me to leave her
K: angad plez…
A: lets go of suhana will moves kripa behind him and stands facing all the gang angry) I will each of u if u try to hurt her
S: shakes her head) I will see u soon kripa…and next time u better fight me or I will just kill u
They all sit in their bikes and rides away

Angad turns around quickly and looks at kripa
A: kripa are u ok….
K: im ok angad
A: who where they….
K: just and old friend
A: friend…u call them friend….they tried to kill u
K: I know…but I know she didn't really….she just wanted me to fight her
A: for what?
K: smiles to him) I will tell u later jaan…im getting cold…I want to go home
A: puts his arms around her and start to walk)

They reached near a hotel and goes inside. Angad askes for a room the lady askes him for money and he looks thru his pocket. People were kind of staring at them…their cloths were little bit torn and their face hurt as. Angad finally find his card from his pocket and gives it to the lady. The lady gives him the key and both of them leave to their room quickly.


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Posted: 18 years ago
first 1 2 reply....keep the parts comin
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Posted: 18 years ago
it was great continue soon it was good 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
awww that was amazing.....god these ppl doesnt let them live in peace!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
that was fantastic! luved it! do cont soon 😃 i hope the baby is fine 😛 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
amazing parts
cont soon
dont worry suhana next tym kripa will leave u with broken bones

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