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Neha

@Fairystar

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#81

Omg u updated so soon?!? :O

M I dreaming ?? XP

Hahaha...I guess kamchors not suiting u theses days xP

Loved d update!! Understatement, okay!

Chal bye n love ya :)

N I don't guess I will b able to cmnt on ur future updates...me going inactive from now!!

All d best for ur exams...in advance :)

Neha :*

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Anmol

@SexySince1999

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: daringdarlo
Wat a story dear!!!
Rajveer!!!!! That bas***d that hara****r that... Urgh!!!
It feels as if these curses r being insulted!!!!
They are so so so so evil.!!!

N she kissed Randhir!!!

Now that was unexpected...

N they have entered her house!!!!
Wat is going on in their evil minds????

N ya I m sorry I couldn't comment on the last update.
I was hell busy...
Plz don't stop pming me...
N wat's wid this hate pm stuff???
U got hate pms???
I mean Hu does that????
Its so lame...

Update soon...

Thanks Shivangi di 😳

glad ur liking the plot...

Ya that's fine, I can understand...

sure i won't stop PMing u ...and yep I got Hate PMs but that's fine with me..

Next update will be today...:)

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Shivangi garg

@gargpurvi85

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#83

Oooh...

Another fab update..

Do update ASAP..

n I don't wan't Sanyu 2 be portrayed as a coward..

I really want her 2 stand up 4 herself..

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Payal

@--Non--Sane--

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#84

Anuuu...!!!!
Baby You know how much I adore your writings right?

and frankly who doesn't? those who sent you hate PMs are probably madwas...xD

Ka-Mini ...You're such a fine writer, may be one of the best writers in Sadda Haq forum...:D
You don't know what you've been gifted with...<3

I know you give a damn to them, but after I met you yesterday I got to know that you are somewhere affected by them, AND I KNOW THAT FOR SURE...but still you're strong enough, right?
Yep you are. and you have much more lovers than haters.

NEVER STOP WRITING...:***
AND YEAH I KNOW I DON'T COMMENT ON ANY OF YOUR FICS, BUT I SIMPLY ADORE 'EM AND YOU KNOW THAT RIGHT?
I ALWAYS SEND YOU PMs. SO I'M SORRY FOR NOT COMMENTING AND LIKING. SO FROM NOW I'M GONNA DO THIS AS WELL. I CAN'T SEE MY SOUL SISTA SUFFERING ALONE :*

SO LAST TWO PARTS WERE SIMPLY FANTASTIC.

THE WAY YOU'VE DEPICTED EVERY SCENE IS FANTABULOUS.

SO UM, THAT PATHETIC GUY IS SAHIL?? :o
HARD TO IMAGINE.

AND RANDHIR IS KINDA MADWA IN THE STORY RIGHT? xD

WHAT'S GONNA HAPPEN NEXTWA? xD

ACTION?? LIKE AHEM AHEM ACTION? xD

ANYWAY, UPDATE SOONWA BABYWA...🤣

kuch zyada wa wa ho gya ni?
anyway...Update soonish...:D
I will res 1st this time, and of-course tere PMs bhi send karne hai -.-

yar, apni koi aur ID bna le pls? mujhse nhi hota PMs send karne ka kam...,xD

PLEASE????

Love you till eternity, Ka-Mini ...🤣

Payal...:*

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@.Del.ici.ous.

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#85

ress
unresss.
Uff moi kitni late ho gyi re!!
Agle mein agr moi first nhi rhi na..
Toh main teri jaan nikaal dungi aur unress bhi nhi krungi!!

Hmm..
update??
Kuch bolne ki zaroorat hi nhi pdti..
Har baar wahi likhna pdta h tere updates k liye!!
It is cool..fabulous, mazaa aa gya...
Yaar tu hr baar jhakkaas likhti hai..
Aur mereko hr baar cmnt krna pdta h..
Pff..
Socho!!
Kitni mehnat krti hun main!!

Arrey moi keh rhi hun..
Inn sb ldkon ko na main HCl pila pila kr jaan le lungi..
Aur iss Rajveer ki toh H2SO4 pila kr!!!
Thok daal Sanyu in ***** ko..

Ab Party de aur update bhi!!

Edited by roshinicool - 10 years ago

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Anmol

@SexySince1999

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: newmoon18
Really yr dat was quick

I so luved it
U write awsme
The update was superb

Really I hate ppl who thinks dat if a girl is wearing short clothes n is friendly dat means she's unavailable

I mean seriously go get a life
Freaking losers
They r animals in human suite

Bloody cheapos
Their cmmnts on sanyu boiled my anger
Rajvir sahil n yoyo
These three cheapos
I so wanna kill them
Sick mentality

N dat rajvir he thinks he's a stud
Loser kahi
Jhooti repo k lia he's talking shit

Sanyu was so attracted twrds rd
He was gawking at him
She cnt cntrl herself
She kissed him
Rd was so shy
He ran away from their

Rd was so cute
According to synopsis I think rd is mentally retarded
The trio makes fun of him n bullies him

Poor sanyu
The trio in her home
Sanyu is so scared

Nxt part is gonna be scary for us
I m already feeling bad for them

Update soon
Wtng

Luv u
Keep smiling

Thanks a lot Rashi...😃

I'm glad u liked it 😳

sure I'll update today,,,,,😉

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Anmol

@SexySince1999

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: Paravi
Res
I can bet ki awesome hai

UNRES IT -.-

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Anmol

@SexySince1999

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: Mahi2012
Hey dear fab update yaar..
Loved it.

Ughhh!!!!!!!!! Rajveer, yoyo n sahil...😡😡😡
So sahil hd done dat shooting...😡
Hw they 3 were cmnting abt sanyu!!!!!!!😡
Shameless creatures...

M hell surprized!!!
Rd stammered in front of rajveer..😲😲😲

Bt sanyu kissed rd...😳😳😊
Omg!!! she lost her control aftr seeing him...😆😆
Wow! awesome.
Unxpected bt awesome...😊
N rd ran away...🤣

All 3 animals reached 2 sanyu's house!!!😲
Hope rd vl save her...😕

Waiting 4 d nxt update.
Continue soon.

Love,
Mahi ❤️

Thanks a ton Mahi 😳

glad u liked it 😊

Sure I'm gonna update today itself...😉

Love

Anu ⭐️

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Anmol

@SexySince1999

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: Fairystar
Omg u updated so soon?!? :O
M I dreaming ?? XP
Hahaha...I guess kamchors not suiting u theses days xP
Loved d update!! Understatement, okay!
Chal bye n love ya :)

N I don't guess I will b able to cmnt on ur future updates...me going inactive from now!!
All d best for ur exams...in advance :)

Neha :*

Yeah I update so soon 😉

I'm not a lazy lad like before, You left me alone and see What I've become ...xD 😆

^JK, I'm listening this song so typed it in the flow...

Yeah That's fine, Even I'm going inactive soon...so Thanks in advance...xD

All the best to you too, In advance...😉

Love ya

Anu ⭐️

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Anmol

@SexySince1999

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: gargpurvi85
Oooh...
Another fab update..
Do update ASAP..
n I don't wan't Sanyu 2 be portrayed as a coward..
I really want her 2 stand up 4 herself..

Thanks...

yeah, she will stand up for herself, for sure 😳