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Posted: 10 years ago
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PART VI
"The family" of Shankar and the aristocratic families of Naksh are in their conversation, mentioned about Shankar's economical status publically. Naksh said them "Shankar is highly educated and intelligent. He owned a Martial Arts Training Centre too." They wonder from where did he get money for it!
This time Swami replied "I have some inherited properties. Shankar is a hard working boy. He got so many scholarships during his studies. He is worked and studied simaltaneously once. Now he is a priest and in free times he is a trainer."

Shankar and Mouli entered and they happend to hear their conversation. Naksh smiled. "What is your problem? He is not a bussiness man like my elder son-in-law? I found Shankar is fond of this Village. He want to stay this village always. So I decided to give a nice gift to him. You all know, the building of my new hospital branch is in making here. It will complete and inaugurate as soon as possible. My Shankar was a psychology student and got Phd too. Hewill be the main doctor of my hospital's psychological department."

"What??? I have already two jobs."

"Hey! Don't you want a job based on your qualification?"

Gauri, Ganga, Sruthi and some others came.

Shankar: "I am very satisfied with my current jobs. I don't want more and I hate dowry"

"Dowry?? Its not a dowry!"

"Then what it is?"

"It is my lovable gift for my son-in-law. My Mouli received my gifts so happily on his engagement day. Now look, who he is! So you should accept my gift. You must!!!!!"

"No!!!!" Shankar replied suddenly.

Naksh: "Then I will break this marriage." Gauri shocked.

Shankar smiled "I never follwed you for this marriage. You followed me. Forced me. Now you are breaking it. Okay. Agreed"

Tears started to flow from Gauri's eyes.

Naksh "Ha ha... Idiot!! Don't you think that you will get a better father-in-law than me?? How?? Idiot!! Think before act."

"Mind your words. You have no rights to call anyone like that. I am a human being, not rich as you. If you think rich people are superior, its your mistake".

"How dare you Shankar?? How dare you to talk me like that?"

Naksh moved towards Gauri. He removed engagement ring from her finger. She tried to resist. But...

Naksh threw it to Shankar and said "Get Lost uncultured fellows!!!"

Shankar smiled "Culture...its revealing" He gave his ring to Naksh. "All is over now. Thank you".

Gauri shocked and started to cry.

Shankar turned to her "Sorry. I know now I am a doing a mistake by giving up this marriage after gave you the promise "ring". Sorry. A marriage wont be happy if it lacks permission of parents. You will get a nice guy."

Shankar then turned to Mouli. He gave the coat to him.

"Shankar, this is my gift"

"No. This is not your gift. This is another GIFT by Mr. Naksh Patel, I know. He gave it to his son-in-law. Now I am not that."

Shankar and group exited the home.

Gauri tried to run behind them.

"Gauri!!!!!!!!!" The roar of Naksh trembled even the building too...

Gauri looked at her father with teary eyes.

"Papa, please call him back"

"Gauri, he is not a suitable person for you. I tried to unite you with him. Its my great mistake. I want to correct it. I will find out a good husband for you. Trust me. I gave my Ganga a beautiful life...Mouli. Likewise I will..."

"You gave a beautiful life to my deedi?? Are you sure?"

"Why not? Mouli is very much greater than that idiot Shankar"

"I don't feel so pa, I don't feel so. Shankar is great. You talked to him impolitely. But he is a gentleman. He agreed this unfavourable marriage for his father's happiness. Jiju married my deedi for money, fame and for business purposes. For him, son-in-law of Naskh is greater than husband of Ganga. Jiju is a nice person. He is loyal. Loyal to his father-in-law. He is a loyal friend, loyal son, loyal jiju. He was a loyal lover. But never be a loyal husband."

Mouli bowed her head with shameness and sadness. Ganga stood strong. Sruthi is confused. Naksh remained silent with firm look.

Gauri informed her mother about Mouli's past. He was in deeply love with a girl. But impressed by the intelligence of Mouli, Naksh forced him to marry Ganga. Mouli obeyed him by thinking about his bright future. Ganga came to know all these from the very first night of their life from Mouli, who never shared it to her before it. Ganga, who shocked by the truth that Mouli can't love any other girl than her lover, she said all to Gauri, who is also helpless.

Sruthi became soo sad by hearing all.

"Papa, are you going to give me such a wonderful life to me??"

Naksh slapped Gauri. "How dare you, Gauri??? I will punish you for this insult in front of these people. None will talk to you day. You should not utter a word till morning."He looked at others and said "Thanks for coming. I must held my daughter's marriage on that same 'only one' muhrut of her life. I will find a suitable son-in-law in all sense."Gauri felt guilt of the revelation of Ganga's truth to everyone. She afraid, if it makes her sister's life more problematic. She pray for Ganga. She thought Shankar can solve this problem. He can make understand her jiju. Mmm.. she still believe, that only one muhrut is coming only for the union of Gauri and Shankar... 😊 Because she knows that her father can't find out a man above Shankar... Shankar loves her. She understood it from his apology. In the love stories what she read she never find any lovers who united so easily. Yes... this is the time for her adventurous 😉 love story. She will become the bride of her Prince by going through some interesting games and difficulties.


Edited by DhwaniNair - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: DhwaniNair

PART VI
"The family" of Shankar and the aristocratic families of Naksh are in their conversation, mentioned about Shankar's economical status publically. Naksh said them "Shankar is highly educated and intelligent. He owned a Martial Arts Training Centre too." They wonder from where did he get money for it!

Wow...so talented and intelligent is Shankar...😉 And here it goes, money and richness.😡
This time Swami replied "I have some inherited properties. Shankar is a hard working boy. He got so many scholarships during his studies. He is worked and studied simaltaneously once. Now he is a priest and in free times he is a trainer."
Wow What a qualification. SO many scholarships👏👏👏I am impressed and moved and gaga over him.❤️He also worked and studied simulteneously !!!!Bravo👏and Hats Off!!
Shankar and Mouli entered and they happend to hear their conversation. Naksh smiled. "What is your problem? He is not a bussiness man like my elder son-in-law? I found Shankar is fond of this Village. He want to stay this village always. So I decided to give a nice gift to him. You all know, the building of my new hospital branch is in making here. It will complete and inaugurate as soon as possible. My Shankar was a psychology student and got Phd too. Hewill be the main doctor of my hospital's psychological department."
He's a psychologist or psychiatrist?? Clear this?? Because Psychiatrist will treat and counsel people, where psychologist will councel and analyst their problems...But I am so happy... SO he is Priest😳Martial Arts Trainer❤️😳and Pshyc Doc
I hope he will spare some time for Gauri too.😲
"What??? I have already two jobs."
Good question.
"Hey! Don't you want a job based on your qualification?"
Good answer.
Gauri, Ganga, Sruthi and some others came.

ANd here comes the baam😭Dhwani...you are a great wirter and could be a good screen play writer. Because you know how to add twists.

Shankar: "I am very satisfied with my current jobs. I don't want more and I hate dowry"

"Dowry?? Its not a dowry!"

"Then what it is?"

"It is my lovable gift for my son-in-law. My Mouli received my gifts so happily on his engagement day. Now look, who he is! So you should accept my gift. You must!!!!!"
LO///: And world famous I, Me and Main. He doesn't want your gifts then leave him na..
"No!!!!" Shankar replied suddenly.

Naksh: "Then I will break this marriage." Gauri shocked.

Shankar smiled "I never follwed you for this marriage. You followed me. Forced me. Now you are breaking it. Okay. Agreed"
Correct point...Naksh Chased Shankar but Shankar never chased Naksh or Gauri.
Tears started to flow from Gauri's eyes.
ANd damage is done.😡😡😡😡😡😡
Naksh "Ha ha... Idiot!! Don't you think that you will get a better father-in-law than me?? How?? Idiot!! Think before act."

"Mind your words. You have no rights to call anyone like that. I am a human being, not rich as you. If you think rich people are superior, its your mistake".

"How dare you Shankar?? How dare you to talk me like that?"
I Hate This MAN😡😡😡😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Naksh moved towards Gauri. He removed engagement ring from her finger. She tried to resist. But...
I WANT REVENGE😡😲😭😭😭😭
Naksh threw it to Shankar and said "Get Lost uncultured fellows!!!"

Shankar smiled "Culture...its revealing" He gave his ring to Naksh. "All is over now. Thank you".
Well said Shankar👏👏👏👏Just for this honest truth Gauri will have to endure so much.
Gauri shocked and started to cry.

Shankar turned to her "Sorry. I know now I am a doing a mistake by giving up this marriage after gave you the promise "ring". Sorry. A marriage wont be happy if it lacks permission of parents. You will get a nice guy."
He cares for her but...still it hurts and pains alot.
Shankar then turned to Mouli. He gave the coat to him.

"Shankar, this is my gift"

"No. This is not your gift. This is another GIFT by Mr. Naksh Patel, I know. He gave it to his son-in-law. Now I am not that."
Again well said and true.👏
Shankar and group exited the home.

Gauri tried to run behind them.

"Gauri!!!!!!!!!" The roar of Naksh trembled even the building too...
And this remind me of Daksh's each time calling her Satii...I miss her😭
Gauri looked at her father with teary eyes.

"Papa, please call him back"

"Gauri, he is not a suitable person for you. I tried to unite you with him. Its my great mistake. I want to correct it. I will find out a good husband for you. Trust me. I gave my Ganga a beautiful life...Mouli. Likewise I will..."

"You gave a beautiful life to my deedi?? Are you sure?"

"Why not? Mouli is very much greater than that idiot Shankar"

"I don't feel so pa, I don't feel so. Shankar is great. You talked to him impolitely. But he is a gentleman. He agreed this unfavourable marriage for his father's happiness. Jiju married my deedi for money, fame and for business purposes. For him, son-in-law of Naskh is greater than husband of Ganga. Jiju is a nice person. He is loyal. Loyal to his father-in-law. He is a loyal friend, loyal son, loyal jiju. He was a loyal lover. But never be a loyal husband."
ANd I am like others stunned to learn the truth😲
Mouli bowed her head with shameness and sadness. Ganga stood strong. Sruthi is confused. Naksh remained silent with firm look.

Gauri informed her mother about Mouli's past. He was in deeply love with a girl. But impressed by the intelligence of Mouli, Naksh forced him to marry Ganga. Mouli obeyed him by thinking about his bright future. Ganga came to know all these from the very first night of their life from Mouli, who never shared it to her before it. Ganga, who shocked by the truth that Mouli can't love any other girl than her lover, she said all to Gauri, who is also helpless.
And I am sad.😭
Sruthi became soo sad by hearing all.

"Papa, are you going to give me such a wonderful life to me??"

Naksh slapped Gauri. "How dare you, Gauri??? I will punish you for this insult in front of these people. None will talk to you day. You should not utter a word till morning."He looked at others and said "Thanks for coming. I must held my daughter's marriage on that same 'only one' muhrut of her life. I will find a suitable son-in-law in all sense."Gauri felt guilt of the revelation of Ganga's truth to everyone. She afraid, if it makes her sister's life more problematic. She pray for Ganga. She thought Shankar can solve this problem. He can make understand her jiju. Mmm.. she still believe, that only one muhrut is coming only for the union of Gauri and Shankar... 😊 Because she knows that her father can't find out a man above Shankar... Shankar loves her. She understood it from his apology. In the love stories what she read she never find any lovers who united so easily. Yes... this is the time for her adventurous 😉 love story. She will become the bride of her Prince by going through some interesting games and difficulties.

He did what??😡Slap Gauri...😡😡😡 Now like Gauri I too know Shankar will come and take her with him. and It's time for a great love story what will be told to their kids when they will ask them to say a story. ANd till then A prediction...on the very same auspicious moment Gauri will be tied to Shankar once more for this life and for her neumeorous next lives.


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Update soon Dhwani...and I am so looking forward to the union of Gauri-Shankar.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you Rimi... and thanks for the double comments on part5 too...sorry for being late.

I mean Psychologist... :)
Twist...!! he he... credits goes to the writers of dkdm whose story inspired me.
Yes that call is very similar to Daksh's call... me too miss sati :)

Me too waiting for the union...but how! don't knw yet now! hey Rimi pls dont expect too much frm me. I am a poor so called writer :(

but glad to knw u r eagerly waiting for the next...

dont knw How much parts and how much months I needed for complete this story!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: DhwaniNair

Thank you Rimi... and thanks for the double comments on part5 too...sorry for being late.
It's okay
I mean Psychologist... :)
wow...then he would be Counselor not Doctor i think.
Twist...!! he he... credits goes to the writers of dkdm whose story inspired me.
Yes that call is very similar to Daksh's call... me too miss sati :)
😭 😭😭😭
Me too waiting for the union...but how! don't knw yet now! hey Rimi pls dont expect too much frm me. I am a poor so called writer :(
You are a great writer because your stories compel your readers to dream. And I am expect an update...that's too if you have time. No pressure.
but glad to knw u r eagerly waiting for the next...
Always😛
dont knw How much parts and how much months I needed for complete this story!!!

Well then I should start my sad story...I have 4 stories incomplete form my previous account and right now two from this account. And I want to finish them and don't know how much time I need to do so. See there's always one who has greater plight than yours. SO CHEER UP sweetheart. And do what you can now...leave the rest to the Almighty.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oh sorry... I found some psychologist with the "Dr" in Name. May be it is bcaz f Phd... Once I just enquire about a psychologist in a hospital when I went for seeing my sis's baby, the nurse said me for seeing "Doctor", I should make an appointment b4 that. i suddenly said.."no, thanks"...
all these "doctor"s confusd me..:)


oh... feeling relaxd a little aftr knwing ur 'incompelte' writings .. ;)
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Originally posted by: DhwaniNair

Oh sorry... I found some psychologist with the "Dr" in Name. May be it is bcaz f Phd... Once I just enquire about a psychologist in a hospital when I went for seeing my sis's baby, the nurse said me for seeing "Doctor", I should make an appointment b4 that. i suddenly said.."no, thanks"...
all these "doctor"s confusd me..:)

Actually people here confused with Doctor and physicians...the person who obtains an MBBS and earns a license to practice is Doctor or physician or surgeon if he does surgery...I mena operations. And persons who holds P. hD degree also refers as Doctor , he could practice with license but he couldn't treat...in Bengali we call these two with Dr. to who treats but it pronounced as Dakter...and Dr. to who doesn't treat as doctor pronounced as doctor.😆and hospitals understand only Dakter no matter whether he holds P.hD or MBBS.
oh... feeling relaxd a little aftr knwing ur 'incompelte' writings .. ;)
That is the reason of mine to telling ...😆

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Really sorry for such late late comment 😭
So we've another excellent writer between us!
I read all the parts and they all are amazing!
Can I just through Mr. Naksh Patel in a deep well!
He's making marriage a business! 😡😡😡
Awww my gentleman Shankar 😳 he's so "drin-nishchayi" 😛
Take a bow Mr. Shankar for teaching Mr. Naksh a good lesson!
Ohhh my gauri 😭 she's sandwiched between these two crazy men!
But I know she'll win him by her love 😳
Oh DDLJ waali feeling aa gayi tere FF se!
Update fast baby!
I'm loving it!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Priyanshi_

Really sorry for such late late comment 😭
So we've another excellent writer between us!
I read all the parts and they all are amazing!
Can I just through Mr. Naksh Patel in a deep well!
He's making marriage a business! 😡😡😡
Awww my gentleman Shankar 😳 he's so "drin-nishchayi" 😛
Take a bow Mr. Shankar for teaching Mr. Naksh a good lesson!
Ohhh my gauri 😭 she's sandwiched between these two crazy men!
But I know she'll win him by her love 😳
Oh DDLJ waali feeling aa gayi tere FF se!
Update fast baby!
I'm loving it!



Thank you Priyu.. U will not believ me..but really I never wtchd DDLJ...only knws it climax after Chennai express!!

I wish to do it fast...but my laziness is the biggest prblm... :)

Thank you again...:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Dhwani
Wow brilliant update
Shankar is well educated boy and he had PHD.goodmatch for Gauri's
But what's thus Naksh trying to buy him off, oof what was he thinking
😡
Bravo Shankar for standing up to him
But Gauri he broke off their engagement oh poor girl
She win him over using her charm and love just like Sati
Shankar needs her in his life
Please bring her back in his life
Update fast and quickly
I cannot wait
Edited by Sadhanamomo - 10 years ago

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