T1 | ArHi FF: Second Chances. Link to Thread Two, Page 147 - Page 92

Mirabell, what a beautiful chapter...all the way from the title to the last thought that foretells how things can turn out...well thought out and beautifully executed with the lyrical perfection one has come to expect from your writing!

Arnav, Khushi, Maya...what a dreamy picture they make.And add Moham to the mix for a fab family scenario. Love Sumitra Raizada and the perceptive insight she has into her grandson's every thought. Wonderful, because this is so typical of relationships between grandparent and grand kids. They have an innate ability to understand without being told what the grandkids are going though. I see this daily with my mother and my two sons! So yeah, thank you for that lovely nugget. Buaji and Manorama complement Khushi's family portrait really nicely.

Their first meeting...ooh...we are all breathless waiting for this little scene to unfold. Khushi's natural anxieties...should she just shake hands or hug him...Meera has no such qualms. Delectable sequence and could so easily picture that scene...thank you for that moment in time.

Waiting already for the next snatch of this beautiful story...why do I say snatch? Because it is like an ongoing conversation...between hearts and minds,encompassing relationships, places and emotions.

Best,

I will sound like an idiot in saying this (glad I can't get chappals thrown my way in the virtual world, hehe) but the trepidation in both of them at seeing each other again seems like first time love even with a marriage and kid behind them. I like it. I like that with out being pushy, he lets her know his stance.

What stood out for me in this update though is Meera. How she accepted this stranger and is finding a way to get some of her questions answered about death. I love how children have non inhibitions and can express themselves better than adults. The way to Kushi will be through Meera and Manorama. Kushi will not accept anything else. Arnav by being himself and not trying to replace anyone, is making it very easy for both Manorama and Meera to accept him in their lives. He became the man by taking care of them once they landed. If I am not mistaken, both Bua and Manorama would like to see Kushi happy again and he is bringing some sparks to her eyes. The last scene was indeed very touching, who can resist falling in love with that little girl? Can't wait to see Meera's interaction with Mohan. I have a feeling her music will soothe him.

You write effortlessly and it is such a pleasure following every word, sentence and paragraph to see how well they are connected. Poetry in motion. Bas.

As, the story is getting interesting day by day and eagerly waiting for the meeting between Mohan and Meera.

Love u for this beautiful story...🤗

Loving the easines and warmth around Arnav n Meera ... Meera indeed is wiser than her age...no wonder she is so charming !!! A great bond beginning to start between Arnav n Meera which unintentionally will make things easier for Arnav Khushi in future... N that's the wish seen in elders eyes too... Khushi is just feeling like a young teenager who has fallen in love for the first time n tries hard to mask her emotions in fear of being caught!!! Aww she must have really loved Arnav too much , to feel that kind of emotions resurfacing for him again... just loving Arnav n his meaningful hidden messages😉... Hopes Khushi decodes them soon n accepts the unexpected reality ...

Thanks for the mail!!!

Thank you