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Mirabell

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Posted: 10 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: AquaSandhya
Congratulation!!!!
And you are here 😃 And I can see people are already lapping up.

Wish you great luck MB.

Thank you Sandhya.. :)

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sudhareddy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#82

Choti thanks for recommending this story

Mira wonderful start to matured love story of Arnav and Khushi.

So Khushi and Arnav met after ten years and they both shared a past.

Nk is Khushi's husband?

Loved the way you wrote emotions of Arnav and Khusi and the awkwardness between them beautifully 👏

Meera is so adorable 😊

waiting to read next part

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janu

@Janu75

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Posted: 10 years ago

#83

Have read your comments on twiggy's story and they were awesome... A writer is always there in you.

Now coming to this story ,I am already in love of the little girl and Mami 😉

Waiting for the next one.

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saschades

@saschades

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Posted: 10 years ago

#84

this is a beautiful start

I love it

thanks Choti for this reco

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Uthra

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Posted: 10 years ago

#85

I am in for the following reasons:

1. Very good story narration. You have a natural ability to narrate.

2. Unique storyline.

3. Tamil Connection.

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Param

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Posted: 10 years ago

#86

Loved the start.. looking forward to read more about the Second Chances. Best wishes and Happy writing 😊

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Anu567

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Posted: 10 years ago

#87

Wow...just wow...you had me at the Intro...and chapter 1 just reinforced the fact that you write astoundingly well...and as a hardcore fan of Meera's Wordsworth, Careless Whispers and so many other stories, all I can say is she is sure to be mighty proud of having inspired such writing. A great beginning,and Iam waiting to see this journey through with you and all the other ArShians on the forum! Update soon...waiting!

👏

Best,

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sman

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Posted: 10 years ago

#88

intehaan ho gayi intezaar ki ;-)

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jisa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#89

loved it..!!
this was just awesome..!!
would like to read more

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Shalma/Suman

@arhi_crazy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#90

Second chances are given rarely and that too not to everyone. AK are lucky to get a second chances. Lets just wait to see how soon they are able to recognise and grasp this second chance.
Loved how you have shown a buried and subtle familiarity between them even in their now awkward, old and almost strange relation. Meera is exuberant child who is good and talkative enough to fill the awkward silences between AK. Manorama looks like a person with a positive and progressive mind. I'm eager to know how she will catalyse AK's awkward and lost friendship to turn it into something beautiful..