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Poju

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Posted: 10 years ago

#491

Update soon...😛

Edited by Poju - 10 years ago

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mayapvj

@mayapvj

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Posted: 10 years ago

#492

U r a fantabulous writer...can't believe it is your first ff...you portray the emotions of very character big or small so aptly...meera is a very mature girl for her age...but I know that in real life too, when small kids like her lose a parent, overnight they become mature and responsible. I am sure mohan too willbe like that...waiting to hear khushis story of her past with asr and the bonding between meera and mohan during their delhi trip...thanks

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#493

The story is simply beautiful..I would say you pen it and shape the way you have visualized.. I am sure it would turn out to be wonderful...👍🏼

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rashmi

@anamika00

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Posted: 10 years ago

#494

waiting for the layers to reveal but in your way,you are the boss we are all here...:)

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orchids8888

@orchids8888

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Posted: 10 years ago

#495

Thank u for gmail & thank u for the note...😃

Will definitely wait for u to tell about their past...😛

Just want Arnav & Khushi to be together now as in today because they have faced a lot in the past...

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amus5

@amus5

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Posted: 10 years ago

#496

dear MB,

a note which shows your emotions and thoughts,conflicts and turbulence, happiness and deep felt affection and impact that you feel when you read our comments.All I want to say is that Second Chances is your colours of life in the arshi canvas - the colours that you paint and smear - the product of your strokes ... though our criticism may be a response to it , it should not shake even a wee bit the deftness of your strokes... if all the writers are to be affected by our response and tend to implement them in their writing then creative independence is lost. So go ahead with confidence and pace out the story the way you wish it to be and am sure it must be an interesting one to read...

pls continue soon 😃

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Brishti

@brishti84

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Posted: 10 years ago

#497

Even though I'm dying to find out about their past connection I don't want you to rush that part. I love the emotions you are able to evoke in each chapter and I believe it's due to the layers you present in your writing, peeling each layer carefully to tell your story. So please don't change anything and tell us the story the way you intended. 👍🏼

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meera30

@meera30

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#498

You know what is better than a wonderful, heart warming story - it's an author with a beautiful, good heart

And with Second Chances, we have the best of both

:) Stay blessed always!

Meera

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Kiran

@lovedrops

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#499

Wow brilliant update. I read all the updates. My friend recommended this story. I fell in love with the story instantly.

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sunitikapoor

@sunitikapoor

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Posted: 10 years ago

#500

Please don't change the story line...so, please go ahead with confidence and pace out the story the way you it to be...and I am sure that it will be an interesting one to read. Thanks for your note dear.