T1 | ArHi FF: Second Chances. Link to Thread Two, Page 147 - Page 51

Originally posted by: Mirabell

I have been humbled by your responses, your words, your expressions, your metaphors.

I believed that words were inefficient, and I believe I have said so once.

But I take my words back.. Words are not inefficient, not insufficient..

Words.. your words...

In your hands, they have become verses with layers where cadence is their soul and imagery their music.

In your hands, the have become metaphors where poetry is the rule and play is their essence.

And they have brought me here to say thank you... I am completely and utterly overwhelmed with this love, support and your response to my story.

I hear you, I hear your frustration with Arnav-Khushi's past. And I hear your fingers tapping in impatience. Yes, I hear you.

I was going to let the story do its talking.. But I am here...

Because your words have impelled me here..

Yes, they have a past.. but will you please allow me to tell you their past in layers?.. In phases? In parts?

Will you please trust me to tell this story in a way that I want to, in a way that I think will work?

Hellooo hiii! Thank god I stumbled across this beautiful story! Read all the parts at a go and boy im sooo hooked,cooked & booked by it. Meera is an adorable kid! She seems very matured for her age. Khushi's bond with her MIL and the friendship shared between La,Akash and her seems to give her strength in these stormy situations. There obviously is some interesting past between Arnav and as Maya pointed out , 'The Khushi'. Maya's and Arnav's bond really surprised me considering their divorce and all. Neverthless loving them and mohan comes across as a reserved kid. Can't wait to read more. ..do update soon!

Mira u have been doing an amazing job till now so please write the story as u envisioned and reveal the past at ure own pace!!!

write the way u have planned dear...its ur brain child u have all the right to treat it the way u like it...would love to read it :)

its ur baby.. write what is in ur store..

Take your time hun to tell us the past I'm sure its worth it just don't change the story it's amazing the way it's going

Love the simplicity with which you have described everything...
Love the way Arnav keeps checking for message from Khushi...
A message that never comes...
waiting impatiently for the next update where the past unfolds...

Of course, it's your story and you should write it the way you want. We thank you for making the effort and for you writing such an interesting story. I'm happy to let you ravel the layers the way you have planned it. Kept it coming, wish you the best.

Lovely as always :) I like maya almost as much as I like Lav! So mean of u to stop the story here. Please continue soon