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guy3

@guy3

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Posted: 10 years ago

#511

Even ur note feels so...poetic. Yes, I trust u completely mirabell. Write the story as u would. No pressure :)

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canapoem

@canapoem

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Posted: 10 years ago

#512

A well-spun tale can transport listeners away from their humdrum lives and return them with an enlarged sense of the world.

MB, my dear, you are an excellent story teller. Your every update, every line you write, transports me to a totally different world where I just see your words, phrases and sentences floating around me.

Even your note took me to that trance. So whether you want to share the past as one bit or as parts, its your decision dear. Whatever crumbs you throw at us, we are eager to catch it and relish it to the maximum.

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deepthi

@deepsdspeed

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#513

thank you for the note..il rather call it a poetry..

yes iam very frustrated to know their past in on go.. im glad u understood it..😉

and again i'l wait to hear it the way u are planning to narrate..how can i miss the magic of your words..vl cherish every sentence and word written by you..

Edited by deepsdspeed - 10 years ago

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headtotoe

@headtotoe

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#514

Mira !!! We may pester you with comments and impatience but you are best at what you are doing.. You do get liberty of the creator !! Tell the tale as you like it to unfold...

I am all ears... Dont get worked by our insistent questions... We are just passionately curious... 😆

Loads of love...

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pinkly

@pinkly

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#515

Hey do not change the pace of the story. Please write just the way you want to write. I am enjoying each and every chapter.

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#516

Oh that was another fantastic update
How is it that Iam in love with all characters of this FF
Maya us Turning out to be another darling - another awesome character
Not to forget our nani

Super awesome update MB - extremely sorry for being late

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Japonica

@Japonica

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#517

Finally got to read the last 3 updates. I loved the way the woman in Khushi is miffed by NK not being attracted to her more womanly attributes, while the Khushi inside the woman cannot forget Arnav!

Both Khushi and Arnav are very fortunate in the people they have around them, with them. They are surrounded by a bunch of the most wonderfully generous people; people who love them dearly, almost selflessly.

And yet Arnav and Khushi are lonely souls, bound to each other across time and space in the events of a past that has clearly had a very deep impact over them. They have loved and lived happy lives with others, yet there is something that keeps them tied to each other.

I wonder how Khushi was when NK was alive. I feel there was a teeny tiny part of her that was hers alone.

I love Lavanya and Maya, though so apart, yet so alike in their dogged determination to drag out the facts from Khushi and Arnav respectively.

Maya is absolutely delightful in her vibrancy.

Edited by Japonica - 10 years ago

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Jignasha

@Chokri_ASR

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#518

Originally posted by: canapoem
A well-spun tale can transport listeners away from their humdrum lives and return them with an enlarged sense of the world.

MB, my dear, you are an excellent story teller. Your every update, every line you write, transports me to a totally different world where I just see your words, phrases and sentences floating around me.

Even your note took me to that trance. So whether you want to share the past as one bit or as parts, its your decision dear. Whatever crumbs you throw at us, we are eager to catch it and relish it to the maximum.

I am ditto'ing Kavi's comments...

M, you should tell the story as you have envisioned it, and we shall wait... in the meantime, this will be us as we wait update to update for this journey to unravel...😉

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rk2127

@rk2127

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#519

Finally got the time and the solitude I wanted around me to read the update without any interruption. Thats how I feel, your each update and your storytelling hooks me to and makes me feel each and every emotion you wrote so beautifully, that it's demand my undivided attention which I love to give.

When I started reading this update with the hope of learning about Arnav and Khushi's past, I was done with the first para and knew this update was not about there past. I was disappointed but than I realized that so far we only know story from Khushi's point and what happened with her from the last time arshi were together, well almost. We know about her daughter, NK, the kind of relation they had and still have, Manorama, Lavanya and Akash's role in Khushi's life.

But we do not know anything about Arnav, his life as it has been in the past decade, his relation with his son, Maya, and his family and friends. And that is important to know to realize what junction of there life they parted and whether they should welcome that past as it or not depending on there present situation, and the person they are today.

I loved the friendship and easy comrade Arnav and Maya shared. They are separated by divorce but they are more close as friends today than they where before they fell in love. They love each other enough to look for others happiness and enough to understand others silence gestures.

I read your note too, and I'm with you. It your story and I want you to tell it your way. Take you time to tell the story, it's worth each update you write dear.

Edited by rk2127 - 10 years ago