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Milsha

@Dandelion.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#131

Loved the relationship between Manorama and Khushi. You know when La asked he met Meera. I started to think whether she is actually his child. Silly like that :P But I know she's NK's child as her behaviour is so similar to her father as khushi said.

When I came to the end of this update I wanted more :D This is such a moving story. Loved it to the core.

Please please reveal why they got separated. And by the looks of it I think they both had a thing for each other before. Or else why so much awkwardness when they meet? And La was so worried about Khushi meeting him again. I am sure something had happened between them in the past.

Update soon!

~Milsha! x

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DDC1

@DDC1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#132

Beautiful ! The relationships are so well written. Kushi doesn't back off a challenge. Why Arnav why!!

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orchids8888

@orchids8888

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Posted: 10 years ago

#133

The update is truly touching... I loved the update...👏

Khushi loves NK but at the same time Khushi does not want Arnav to leave yet... So Arnav is separated from his wife & has a son...

Meera & Manorama are totally loving in this story...⭐️

Waiting for Arshi's lunch date...

Hope so Arnav will tell Khushi the reason of he coming back in Khushi's life after good 10 years...

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roshaan

@roshaan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#134

Very nice update so asr have a son let's see why he came after 10 yrs

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WanieA

@WanieA

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Posted: 10 years ago

#135

every writer has their own style in writing...same goes to u...once one started reading...u cant stop urself n count the days until the next update...hmmm..dont know why..when i read ur story..my heart goes dhak dhak dhak dhak..

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Angels11

@Angels11

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Posted: 10 years ago

#136

OK They ve a PAST with a capital P. But what is it? Were they seeing each other. If so y did they break up? Where does NK fit in? Lots of questions... 😆

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Maria Ahmed

@Maria151994

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Posted: 10 years ago

#137

your ff is quite nice mature written beautifully would love to read further:)

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Param

@pup03

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Posted: 10 years ago

#138

awesome! loved the sweet bonding between Meera-Arnav.. Meera have opened her heart and arms for arnav making even khushi surprise over her daughters behaviour.. Khushi have calculated the time and is repeating on it like a chant in her mind.. really khushi's chant have increased curiosity that why arnav is back after 10 years, 10 months and eight days.. Love to see strong bond between Meera, Manorama & Khushi while Lavanya a close friend and support system to khushi.. Looking forward to know what happened between Arnav-Khushi that lavanya was so worried about ASR being in town and asking for Khushi's address.. i know patience is key and with you in this.. loved the update..

thanks for mail 😊

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Sj236

@Sj236

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Posted: 10 years ago

#139

The name of the chapter was really thoughtful 👏. That moment was really heart breaking where Arnav wanted to tell what he does and it back fires 😒.

The rest of the chapter was really great and those little moments brought a smile such as this one "a play date tomorrow and a play date with you in Delhi."

So Arnav has a son and he is divorced, they actually tried moving ahead in life and now back on the same spot , can't get more ironic than this can it??😉

Will be waiting to read the next chapter "catching up with an old friend".

Heart rending update.