T1 | ArHi FF: Second Chances. Link to Thread Two, Page 147 - Page 13

Originally posted by: sman

I am too overwhelmed after reading the update..will comment more later..

Hats off Meera..

superb concept 👍🏼

great start loved it

Nice update. Loved arnav and meera's bonding.

It was a very touching chapter and I am truly enjoying your writing style. I found lots of hope in this chapter, the little girl bonding with someone new, the mother in law welcoming some appearance of living and emotions in her widowed daughter in law, and definitely some kind of interest in arnav and Kushi. There were heartbreaking moments in there but these 3 are survivors, they are sad about the path but determined to be there for each other as they move on. I love how you described that little scene when they were cleaning up as if he belongs already. Is that not hope? I am determined to always look for the silver lining. You have piqued my interest as to exactly what happened 10 years ago so I will be waiting patiently for next update . . .

"ten years, ten months and eight days." if she remembers that, she did miss him or at least thought of him often. Something serious must have happened for them not to be together. It also seems like both Akash and Lavanya are still good friends with Khushi and are trying to protect her. Lunch is going to be interesting - will it reveal a little more about their past relationship?

The fluidity in your writing is very mesmerizing. I wish this was already complete :=)

Originally posted by: Raila1014

It was a very touching chapter and I am truly enjoying your writing style. I found lots of hope in this chapter, the little girl bonding with someone new, the mother in law welcoming some appearance of living and emotions in her widowed daughter in law, and definitely some kind of interest in arnav and Kushi. There were heartbreaking moments in there but these 3 are survivors, they are sad about the path but determined to be there for each other as they move on. I love how you described that little scene when they were cleaning up as if he belongs already. Is that not hope? I am determined to always look for the silver lining. You have piqued my interest as to exactly what happened 10 years ago so I will be waiting patiently for next update . . .

You are here! I was about to recommend you this one 😊

very beautiful story
waiting to unfold it
and a different kushi
different arnav
indeed a different plot

That was a great update... Looks like Arnav had a failed marriage..

very well scripted. Khushi, arnav, manorama - very nice wonder what drove arnav and khushi for so long away. did they consciously part their ways?