Karna FF-Time Travelling in Mahabharata !!! (Completed) - Page 81

Originally posted by: shipreeta

Why did you have to make her die.😭

A great end and going by the fact that all the son's are alive, I feel that the war did not happen. 😊😊

It was a great journey Hemu. Loved you during this ride. Waiting for your new FF

P.S. Thankyou so much for your credit. Love you for that

Originally posted by: zebali

End was great.
Well written dear.
Amazed me.
Tf pm.

Originally posted by: Nonie12345

Wonderful epilogue Hemangi😊

I am going to miss reading this FF so much😭

Thank u for the sweet compliment😃

Originally posted by: heemasomani

Nice update

Originally posted by: dhivyakrish31

so my dear hemu..you finished a fantastic ff.. i am really gonna miss this..this one will remind a special ff for me always.. the first meet of swarna with karna..her faint in his arms..

then her attachments with radha and shon..

her excellent characteristics.. and her encounters with dushsshan..sakku mama..

the fresh blissful moments of karn with vrish in amidst mango trees.

vrishali's next morning adventure after her first night..😆

then karna's calling her buddy.. their relationship beyond friendship..everything..everything.. i enjoyed as if i were there with swarna and karna at every step of their life.

that's the success of your writing.and sometimes i wonder when reading ur episodes with time machine.. whether you r a banker or a scientist actually..

now i am going to misss that.

😭
OMG u remembered so many things in my FF...yeah...we both shared happy moments while we wrote our FFs😳

coming to the end..i would say its perfect ! its better than separating karna and swarna. u asked me abt this..i myself said she has to go back to her world..but when u changed it and the scene where swarna denied to her father and waited for her husband..when karna found her in the middle of the jungle.. i felt goose bumps and felt its the perfect ending.. now u made a satisfying end. thank god u did not bring karna here.

I wud feel heavy heart!

unforgettable work..always remain special for me!
Thank u so much Dhivii 🤗...You got the essence of the epilogue...why I kept Karna in Background and led his brood of children make a mark in the final part. The epilogue...took place many years after the last chapter...so I imagined many things occured in the intermittent time in both the worlds...Sr Swarnali's passing over is the major one among them.

I remember our good old days when we post chapters more or less at same time. we discussed abt portraying vrishali because both of our heroines were the second queens. my heroine was of the same period with revolutionary thoughts.. ur heroine was from different world..with more or less same type of traits.
Yeah...all true 😳

i am editing again and again.. has lot to say..😆 finally swarna got a baby girl as per her wish.. which she craved for. so daughter for karna😳 swarna had gone but she left her trace ..her blood..her reflection for him.😳
Even Karna wished to father a daughter...if u remember in Hastinapur Chapter after Dury's twins birth...and yes their daughter is the reflection of her mother...in spirit atleast

we enjoyed that!! love u 🤗
Love u too and thanks for staying with me till the end of the journey 🤗

Originally posted by: sania_58

awesome Hemu.

Sad ending as well as unexpected.Feeling sad because Swarnali didnot enjoy her motherhood.
Thank u Madhu 🤗...well I intended for an unexpected ending...but in my original draft too...Swarnali was not present in the end of the story

But I loved the epilogue.

especially reading the next generation.

Loved Junior Swarnali.Daughter of Karna.Its special.
Well she is special... Karna never had a daughter...but in this FF he had a special buddy and a daughter 😳

Its a fantastic story & one of my favourite also.

You are an amazing writer.

A beautiful journey coming to an end.

U know again I re-read the entire story together.

Its wonderful & magical.

Waiting for your other work.
Thank u so much for staying with me till the end of the journey. I am glad that u found my story magical 😛

U mentioned me in your thank U note.I want to thank U for gifting us such a beautiful work.

Yes, we became buddies just Karna & Swara from this story.
🤗

Yes, the nose breaking sequence.

ha ha.what to do, my violent nature.
😆

Thanks dear & loads of Love.

😳

Originally posted by: ...Hemangi

Thank u Shipreeta 😃
Yes...I did not venture further into the war...everyone in Karna's family is living...well, except for the one person who revealed the truth.
Thanks for staying with me in this journey 😳

Originally posted by: yoga123

Awesome story...

Originally posted by: shipreeta

Hi Hemu.

Just thought this, you completed this FF and the scientists have heard the gravitational waves claiming that the time travel is no long a distance dream. Maybe you Swarnali would get real😊😊