Karna FF-Time Travelling in Mahabharata !!! (Completed) - Page 51

Originally posted by: frankie123

Every thing was so nice loved it di 😳

Originally posted by: Radhikerani

Simply brilliant!! Loved it.

Originally posted by: Bella02pie

Great chapter Hemangi😊

Eagerly waiting for the next chapter😆

Originally posted by: Sonatia

Res
my phone's battery is low so vil unres later bt soon.

Originally posted by: shipreeta

Ohh Just love this update. Each time your updates take me back in time. How tough would it be for Swarnali? Had I been in her place I would just have showered my anger onto Pitamah in front of everybody

Originally posted by: Texie-Shady

Oh I have been so late here ! I m really sorry di , u know how irritating the exams are 🤢

But I read all the missed chaps and loved it !

Yippe Swarnali married to Karn but I got the wedding card very late u know 😭 so could not come to join the wedding anyways here I m , uninvited guest 😆😆
Karnalis always welcome...ok for u belated marriage reception 😃

Now coming to this update , oh naughty Swarnali thinking ways to carry on their marriage relations ☺️
Swarnali brain was always running with some thoughts... but now its mainly naughty thoughts 😉 😆

And I love the dialogue of Karn , What has honey and moon got to do in our visit to Hastinapur dear wife?"oh my poor innocent arya ! 😉
😆 😆

Oh Dury and Dushy teasing Swarnali and Karn 😆
Yes...& dont forget preggy Bhanumati too 😆

Plus I love the way u described Shakuni mama , pot- bellied ! Oh god I m still laughing 🤣
pot-bellied, limping & occasional aankh maaring... yeah dont forget black teeth too 😆

I love this word ! I m gonna use it in my FF also 😆 hope u don mind that 😉
Ok...exclusive copyright for 'pot-bellied' to u only 😉 😆

And the way u described the guest room ! Oh I m having a urge to go there and spend a night ! I m jealous of Swarnali for getting such a room ad such a company with her for night 😆

Ahaa... jealous 😆

I loved the meeting of Pitama and Ved Vyas with Swarnali !

Now excited for the next part .
I will post the next part soon

Love

Sam 😃

Originally posted by: .Sanskruti

Brilliant update👏
loved the description of Kuru palace nd Pitamah⭐️
DKBU teasing ws so cutee😳
waiting eagerly for Vyasas reply⭐️

Originally posted by: dhivyakrish31

wow hemu ladoo finally u made us to meet all our hastinapur elders including ved vyas..
Yeah... I thought of include tidbits of every imp character in MB...that is why this is 3 part series of meeting the legends. & Vyasa wrote this magnonimous epic & he was an imp character too so I included him too 😊

it was so natural ..the way u described hastinapur palaces was so nice..u r best in handling words..
Thank u Dhivii darling 😃

then the convo between two friends and their wives in the garden was so natural ..I really loved it.so u made banu to deliver in the presence of swarna..karn craving for a daughter is also so cute..it's natural na..we got to see only sons and sons everywhere in mb..really a daughter wud be a princess or goddess for them.
actually I was thinking how to start with Bhanu's delivery part & then Karn's desire for siring a daughter...so I thought of a fun naughty banter betwn the friends

each and every intro of elders was well written..good intro mixed with swarna's thoughts.perceptions..questions and eagerness.especially when seeing drithrastra no one can fail to notice his extremely strong physique..and while noticing ghandari swarna's mind was filled with questions about her hundered children..it was so nice.then the meeting with bheeshma and vyasa was so natural too..i never expected such a question from swarna..according to mb in that time the persons who the parentage of karna was only four including krishna..now swarna as a person from our time she too know it..now she locked up bheeshma by a very very straight question that too in the rights of angaraj's wife.each and every karnali has this question in her mind..let's see what our pitamah has got to say..
thank u dhivii...meeting all the Kuru royals in person made Swarna think and all the questions pop up in her mind... of their respective actions & of course...Karn now being her husband...she would obviously try & question all those people who knew who he was... but still shoved him to life of misery & destruction 😭

so nice dear..still there r some others to meet na..i ll be waiting..
Yup other imp. characters will meet in the next part 😊
btw I sent u req in fb..y u din't accept it ??😭
Oh...I was not active in FB for few days...but I check it...did not get any request from u...but I have sent from my side too...do accept it 😛