Karna FF-Time Travelling in Mahabharata !!! (Completed)

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sadiasaba68

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Posted: 10 years ago

#491

another awesome update di.. 👏
loved the bond between friends 😃
waiting for the next part... update soon di

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MsChanadlerBong

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Posted: 10 years ago

#492

Oh I have been so late here ! I m really sorry di , u know how irritating the exams are 🤢

But I read all the missed chaps and loved it !

Yippe Swarnali married to Karn but I got the wedding card very late u know 😭 so could not come to join the wedding anyways here I m , uninvited guest 😆😆

Now coming to this update , oh naughty Swarnali thinking ways to carry on their marriage relations ☺️

And I love the dialogue of Karn , What has honey and moon got to do in our visit to Hastinapur dear wife?"oh my poor innocent arya ! 😉

Oh Dury and Dushy teasing Swarnali and Karn 😆

Plus I love the way u described Shakuni mama , pot- bellied ! Oh god I m still laughing 🤣

I love this word ! I m gonna use it in my FF also 😆 hope u don mind that 😉

And the way u described the guest room ! Oh I m having a urge to go there and spend a night ! I m jealous of Swarnali for getting such a room ad such a company with her for night 😆

I loved the meeting of Pitama and Ved Vyas with Swarnali !

Now excited for the next part .

Love

Sam 😃

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Shristi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#493

Every thing was so nice loved it di 😳

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Sphinx.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#494

wow hemu ladoo finally u madeus to meet all our hastinapur elders including ved vyas..it was so natural ..the way u described hastinapur palaces was so nice..u r best in handling words..then the convo between two friends and their wives in the garden was so natural ..I really loved it.so u made banu to deliver in the presence of swarna..karn craving for a daughter is also so cute..it's natural na..we got to see only sons and sons everywhere in mb..really a daughter wud be a princess or goddess for them.

each and every intro of elders was well written..good intro mixed with swarna's thoughts.perceptions..questions and eagerness.especially when seeing drithrastra no one can fail to notice his extremely strong physique..and while noticing ghandari swarna's mind was filled with questions about her hundered children..it was so nice.then the meeting with bheeshma andvyasa was so natural too..i never expected such a question from swarna..according to mb in that time the persons who the parentage of karna was only four including krishna..now swarna as a person from our time she too know it..now she locked up bheeshma by a very very straight question that too in the rights of angaraj's wife.each and every karnali has this question in her mind..let's see what our pitamah has got to say..

so nice dear..still there r some others to meet na..i ll be waiting..btw I sent u req in fb..y u din't accept it ??😭

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Sanskruthi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#495

Brilliant update👏
loved the description of Kuru palace nd Pitamah⭐️
DKBU teasing ws so cutee😳
waiting eagerly for Vyasas reply⭐️

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NONIE

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Posted: 10 years ago

#496

Great chapter Hemangi😊

Eagerly waiting for the next chapter😆

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Posted: 10 years ago

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FlauntPesimism

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Posted: 10 years ago

#498

Ohh Just love this update. Each time your updates take me back in time. How tough would it be for Swarnali? Had I been in her place I would just have showered my anger onto Pitamah in front of everybody