Karna FF-Time Travelling in Mahabharata !!! (Completed) - Page 52

Originally posted by: vaikartana

Hema hope you are not angry on me for not commenting for so long.I was a bit busy.Now that I have enough free time I will read all the parts and update myself.

Originally posted by: sania_58

wonderful Update Hemu.Loved it.
First of all, main chahti hoon, ki Swara jaldi hi Karna ko Honeymoon ke baare main details information de.😉 😳
Hehe... unknowingly he was taking her in honeymoon but there will be no privacy there 😆

U beautifully described Hastinapur's Palace.
Loved the way Duryodhan welcomed Karna & Swara.They teased Karna.I love these kind of small teasings in ur this fic.
thank u Madhu... I like writing this small teasing parts...it feels goods to read some fun moments in their life apart from politics & warfare

Again, Loved the descriptions of Dhritrastra & Gandhari through Swara eyes.& Swara scientific dimag, yup, its true, koi 100 bacche kaise paida kar lete hai????
Big question...i still could not imagine 101 children developing in specialised cocoons in ghee & other herbs & all instead of mother's womb & the most shocking of all Gandhari was carrying her children for over 2 years 😲

Loved the convo between friends.small teasings, funs, superb part.
Then, the birth of Laxman & Laxmana & Karna's craving for a daughter.
Thank u...I had to think a lot about this plot of birth of the twins & connecting it to Karna's craving for a daughter... but glad it panned out well 😊

woww, Hemu, U amazingly described everything.
then, at last Swara's meeting with Vyasa & Bhisma,again superb.
Yes...Swarna did not leave out Vyasa too 😆

& her questions to then.
Now, I am eagarly waiting for their reaction.
superb, mindblowing, awesome.U rocked Hemu.
beautiful writing.Well done dear.
Waiting for the next update.
Thank u...Yeah.. I will try to update the next part soon 😊

Thanks for sending me the Friend request in FB, mujhe to pata hi nahin tha tu FB main hai.
Hehe... actually I m like a stalker in FB too... my FB friends gives me a sound thrashing for remaining gayab for long time 😆...

Originally posted by: .Sanskruti

I want jealous Karna... completely missing in MB😭
bring ny scene ny location nd make the two talk about Swarnali's x fiance na😳

Originally posted by: Sonatia

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my phone's battery is low so vil unres later bt soon.
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so bhanumati gave birth to a twin daughter and a boy..very cute..i am now imagining how cute laxman and laxmana would look...
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U no i have a plan 4 after 40 cause there is a lot of chances 4 twins even triples...u no i have a frnd they are 5 sisters and one is elder to her and other three are triples...
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Hehe...I was thinking how to bring out from karn that he would love to have a daughter of his own...so why not his best mitr's dury's twin kids ... his daughter lead an indication to Swarna about it...U know I have met a lot of twins in my life...infact my mom & my chotte mamu are twins...& some my friends tease me that I will have twin kids since my mom is a twin...silly notion 😆

The part when everyone was teasing swarna was ameazing...
Yeah... poor Swarna... couldn't defend herself...but it was kind of cute... she was blushing pink 😳 😆
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Specially snores wala part..
U no my mom and dads regular fight used to start with snore.my mom complained and dad used to deny and tell that i was nt snoring bt u were
when everything was okey bt nw...
Snoring wala part...oh god... I have written that part inspired by parents snore wali fighting 😆 I got my separate cosy room when I was 12. But at that time my mom did not have snoring problem... but later when I was doing my grads...dad complained that he can't sleep becoz my mom was snoring right near his ears every night 😆poor dad... & his sleep all gone. But now I dont know may be inspired by mom he also snores while sleeping...😆 😆 Sometimes I feel they are competing each other in snoring 🤣Unfortunately I could not sleep a wink if somebody in the room snores 😆
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So r karn also want a baby grl..bring her pls..i wud love her...
Hhmmm I m thinking of it... but in a different way 😉
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And the last para where swarna was ask vyasa is full of suspence.will they reveal his real cast to him in this story???
I can't say now whether they will reveal it or not
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And dat part was very funny where swarna had probs memorizing the names of kaurava brothers...And the honey and moon wale lines were very funny...
Hehehe... even her sharp scientist wali memory failed her... & yes honey & moon...he he...naughty of Swarnali 😆
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Meeting vid bhsm was very cute specially where she got nstlgic in memory of her own grandfather and called bshm pitamah.
I like bheeshma's character after Karna. Though I couldn't understand his certains actions or his POV in certain matters...but I did like his role of a loving grand father. And swarnali feeling nostalgic & seeing her grandpa in bheeshma somehow makes and emotional connection when bheeshma also acknowledges her greeting as pitamah
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Overall very awesome updt.i think its the longest comnt i ever wrote in any ff.
Yes...dearie...it is the longest comment u have ever made... happy my FF is the first one you made it...😃...now expecting long future comments from u
sry 4 late

Originally posted by: Sonatia

did it..atleast reply me here 4 the typing effort..

Originally posted by: ...Hemangi

Thank u so much Maha for your sweet comments 😃
I tried my best to tell a story from a Kalyugi character & ofcourse the clash of opinions and mindset was part of it. I have always adored KaDu's friendship so I tried to give a new light of understanding & teasing 😉 😆
The romantic updates well I did not originally plan to write two romance updates apart from teasing. And yes bold updates can be written in many different ways...I preferred to use certain twist of words to bring in the passion betn them discovering each other to a new level as the story was set in different era... A raw & bold words would have been regarded if this was a modern day story.
Oh...Yes...rest of the mentioned characters are coming pretty soon 😛
I will update the next part soon 😊