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canapoem

@canapoem

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+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#451

Another lovely beginning. Khushi is already feeling sad for this diabetic guy. And the dream, wow!!! I had goose bumps reading it.

Now reading about so many stories with so many sweets in it is making my mouth water.

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xZoyax

@xZoyax

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#452

Simply fantastic.I love this Halwai and her diabetic lover.😊

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sonal

@srain10

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#453

Interesting start...

Diabetic arnav has fallen for meethi khushi...

Thanks for starting another new story so soon ...you are amazing writer...

Eagerly waiting to read how story will unfold...

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Varsha Dutt

@varsha2KD

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#454

Lovely start...

Diabetic Arnav has fallen for Haawaai khushi... how lovely 😊

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BSRaizada

@BSRaizada

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#455

Aww! This is going to be one very very sweet story! Love u smita n rashmi!!

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LyssaPie

@LyssaPie

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#456

Omg this is so exciting
Loving how you described their shop and how awesome Khushi is dealing with her customers
And omg she's getting one the customers to change the date of the wedding haha
And Uh oh handsome diabetic just fainted infront of poor Khushi?