Smitar's OS SERIES: TRYST IN THE CARDS #6OS 9(1~8)Link to#7 Pg1 (11/1)

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Spoonai

@Spoonai

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#441

Wow another great story on it's way...
Can't tell how much I'm in love with Arnav n khushi in all ur story, esp. the OS...
Arnav breaking record by changing himself for khushi without any second thought :)
And khushi as always khushi :)

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summaiya

@summaiyasayed

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#442

Cute story

Waiting for next part

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sincereme

@sincereme

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#443

Amazing start... Your every story is so refreshing. .

Its like it is love at first sight for Arnav. . He was completely captivated by khushi. . And then he fainted.. He got it really hard.. Loved it..

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yoga123

@yoga123

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#444

Simply superb...wow Khushi is a renowned mithai shop...Arnav is so lost in Khushi...awesome start...thanks for the PM

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rana5

@rana5

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#445

This one has a superb beginning. I love this up-to-date Khushi. She has a website and seems so confident. I can't wait for more.

Edited by rana5 - 10 years ago

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anu1017

@anu1017

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#446

Awesome start!!! Loved it!!! What the did he really faint lol!!!!

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ranogill

@ranogill

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#447

brilliant start to the story

Edited by ranogill - 10 years ago

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suri2610

@suri2610

Explorer

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#448

Yay.!!! another one... sweet start... bechara Arnav babua... cant have her sweets... And she will pray to Devi Maiyya and make his diabetes go away... so Khushi-like wish... And Arnav babua had to go speechless as soon as he saw her... yeh to hona hi tha!