Smitar's OS SERIES: TRYST IN THE CARDS #6OS 9(1~8)Link to#7 Pg1 (11/1)

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dumas

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Posted: 10 years ago

#461

AWESOME START SO DID ASR JUST PASS OUT .

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Raila1014

@Raila1014

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Posted: 10 years ago

#462

Aww, you are back at it so quickly!! Many, many thanks for keeping the Arshi craze going with your new stories. I love this business wali Kushi, she even has a web site. Wow, what a modern girl! ASR will be so proud of her once he get out of his stupor. So bitwa did not eat all day? Is his sugar low or did he just passed out from the pehla pyaar ke effect? If is sugar is low, he could not have fainted in a better place that a sweet shop and one that is owned by his dream girl.

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Param

@pup03

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Posted: 10 years ago

#463

Congrats for the new story it was awesome start.. loved it.. looking forward to read more about The Diabetic and The Halwai.. 😃

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pinkly

@pinkly

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Posted: 10 years ago

#464

Smita, I am so excited read another awesome story. I enjoyed reading both chapters. Very nice start. Khushi is so sweet, she was praying for Arnav so much :-). Oh, Arnav fainted. Looks like Khushi is going to feed him a fresh Jalebi :-). Do update the next chapters soon...