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Posted: 10 years ago

Finally finally the most awaited evening is here.
Plz update soon.
And not expected from swayam. Such an amazing scene that to In a classroom. 😲
Thanks for the PM. Update soon

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pinks2014

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Posted: 10 years ago

You are an awesome writer...you penned down their emotions so well..makes it easier to connect to the characters. Loved it. Waiting for the next part.

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rosy kohli

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Posted: 10 years ago

Mona i m so happy after reading tis

i cant express my happiness first i

had to read all 7 chaps to get here

Even thou i know u r expecting me

to write a comment here

I want to first say how

How much u av improved gal

Itna accha change i just loved it

the scene was so subtle n

way u described it was fantastic

Dekha jaye toh it was such a cute moment

But as a writer u gav lyf to the scene

i felt

Itna sarey emotions sumthing

Just connected inside me

Sharon was dead on

Her character is my fav till date Becoz

She is soft tender n yet fierce n courageous

At the same tym

The class room sence was superb

I loved it i can say now

Tat u r cuming in tat list

My fav writers list chitra becoz

U hav shown remarkable improvement

Jee khush kar ditah

Do update soon

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Chitra.

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ujwalv
update plz😛

Will do it soon :)

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ujwal

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ..MiStLeToE..
Will do it soon :)

ok..thanks..

waiting😊

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athi_vrushan

@athi_vrushan

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Posted: 10 years ago

OMG

wat an update

was it really the swayam

or was it someone else?

mr.naughty &ms.blushy

iloved it

swayam eyeing her to

not accept simmis plan

he wants to spend

tym wid his sharon

he apologised to her

4 being judgemental abt her

waiting to read next part

update soon

thnx 4 d pm

and pm me the next tym u update

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Piyu

@piyu_swaron

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Posted: 10 years ago

unres on pg 16

sorry for late chitra😔

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Piyu

@piyu_swaron

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Posted: 10 years ago

what an update

Swayam is so not in his senses..

he slept on sharon's shoulder nd she was gettting so much affected😳

now looking forward for their date

update soon

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sanchiswaron

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Posted: 10 years ago

Tomorrow when :o I can't wait 😭

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Chitra.

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sanchiswaron
Tomorrow when :o I can't wait😭

By evening or night :)

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