SwaRon SS: You are my 'It'Boy!FINALE UP on Pg29] - Page 15

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Mansi98 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
evening chali gayi
night ho gai
still no update
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Mansi98


evening chali gayi
night ho gai
still no update

Writing it Darlzzz :)
Mansi98 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
kk
bt jaldi m waiting
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sharon was standing in her balcony thinking about Swayam. His behavior has so much changed last two weeks. . . She didn't really know what relationship she shared with him but whatever it was. . . She felt beautiful being in it . . . being with him. She blushed thinking about how close they have been during the whole day. She felt excited thinking of spending the whole evening with him.
Her doorbell rang and she ran towards the door in her stilltoes and holding the door she exhaled a deep breath and opened it and there he was standing with his ever so charismatic smile in a white T-Shirt and Classic Blue Denims.
"Hi"
"Hey . . . Please Come In"
Swayam came inside her home and looked at her from head to toe. . . She went conscious under his gaze and said "Swayam stop it! Stop staring me like that"
Swayam came out of the trance and mumbled Sorry embarrassed with himself.
"Shall we leave?" Sharon asked smiling.
"No. . . Well you are not ready yet"
Sharon looked at him confused and looked at herself.
"Sharon do you have anything more casual? I mean you look beautiful in this. . . But the place where we are going will do with something casual. . . Wear the dress you hate in your wardrobe".
"What?"
"Yeah . . . Come on . . . Go now!"
Swayam pushed a confused Sharon towards her room.
Fifteen minutes later Sharon came out in a hoodie complimented by a faded ripped jean. .and her hairs tied in a pony. Swayam couldn't take his eyes off her. . . How can she look so beautiful in casuals?"
"Sharon you hate this?"
"Totally. . . I don't know why you want me to wear this? I am looking horrible" Sharon pouted seeing herself.
"Really?" He held her hand and dragged her towards the mirror and stood behind her.
"Look at the girl . . . you think she is horrible? Can't you see the carefree, shy, simple girl in her? I believe this girl loves to sit in front of TV and watch The Notebook' kind of movie munching popcorn and crying on an emotional scene. . . Damn! She is so cute! How can you not like her Sharon?" Swayam ended with a pout.
Sharon looked at him turning her head sideways stunned and shocked with the way he sees her. . . Even she hasn't seen herself like this in years. She passed a smile to him and he returned the smile twinkling his eyes.
"Now come on shall we leave?" Swayam asked happily.
"Just a minute" Sharon said and threw her sandal to side which she had been wearing and changed to snickers.
"Now ready" Sharon said and Swayam smiled they both walked out the home.
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"So what's the plan?" Sharon asked sitting in Swayam's car.
"Well. . . Tell me things you have always wanted to do but haven't yet"
"What?"
"Yes Sharon. . . Come on"
"Umm. . . I want to see fireflies . . . they have always fascinated me since I was a child. . . But lately I haven't seen them for like years now. . .
"Wow. . . That's such an awesome idea. Let's go. I know a place where you can find loads of them."
Living in the hustle bustle of Mumbai she has almost forgot the things she loved to see, do. . . She was beaming happily sitting beside Swayam in the car with her legs folded sipping coke. Omg! This night was going to be eventful.
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Swayam took her hands in his and led her to the calmest lush greens in the interiors of the city. . .There was nothing there except for the serene beauty and calmness. They both sat there in silence as winds kissed both of them. . . Swayam looked at Sharon who was looking angelic as her hair locks danced in air to the tunes of wind. Just after a few minutes something started flying in air with a tinge of light making Sharon excited and within seconds the whole place filled with fireflies lighting the dark night. . . Sharon jumped in excitement seeing the small creatures glowing like a bulb. She ran and carefully caught one of them in her palms and came to Swayam running.
"Swayam. . . See!! Omg! It's so beautiful. . .Look Na Swayam" Sharon opened her hand slightly and made him see passing the small lil thing in his hands. He felt happiness gushing inside him seeing her beaming with enthusiasm. She ran towards their direction in happiness. He clicked a picture of her when she was jumping in middle of fireflies and joined her in her excitement.
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"Sharon next wish?" Swayam said sitting in the car when Sharon finally decided to leave the place.
"Umm. . ." Sharon was just going to say but stopped in between.
"Come on Sharon.. . . Just say" swayam said reassuring her through his eyes that he isn't here to judge her for her crazy wishes.
"I want to drink Vodka. . . I haven't tasted alcohol all my life." Sharon said biting her lower lip.
"What? Are you serious?" Swayam said shocked. Now that was actually a shocker for Swayam that she hasn't alcohol. But he smiled and replied "Me too"
"Lets go then" Swayam said charged with energy and the smile on Sharon's lips grew wider. She put on the music system and played the craziest party songs and danced sitting beside him and Swayam laughed seeing her crazy antics and joined her in between.
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Swayam parked his car three blocks away from the bar and they both walked down the distance to the bar.
"Sharon Lets go" Swayam said standing at the opposite foot of the bar
"No Swayam I am scared."Sharon said pouting looking at the bar.
"What? Sharon We are here for you and because of you" Swayam said not believing her.
"But swayam. . . This is crazy. . . Is it a decent bar??"
"Hey Sharon. . . If you are with me my highest priority will be YOU and nothing else. . . Absolutely Nothing" Swayam said looking in her eyes as the feelings for him stirred inside her hearing him. She smiled widely and said "Lets go"
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"Swayam cutie. . ." Sharon pulled Swayam's cheeks totally drunk trying to gain his attention.
"Deepika. . . Come out of the poster na pleaseee" Swayam requested who was busy in impessing Deepika Padukone who was standing with a Coke in her hand in a Hoarding.
"What? No Deepika. . . Only Sharon" Sharon got angry and started hitting him with her hands.
"Ouch Sharon. . ." Swayam ran for his life.
"Say I love you Sharon. . . Say!" Sharon held her collar and pouted.
"Just like I told you. . . I love You Swayam!" Sharon let go off his collar and turned saying I love You! I love You! I love you Swayam."
She turned to see him who was standing there watching her blankly. She stared at him for a second and then ran to him saying "Cutie" and he just started crying fakely hugging Sharon.
Sharon got scared seeing him like that though she was highly intoxicated still she couldn't see him like that.
"What happened Cutie?"
"Sharon Deepika is not talking to me" Swayam cried in disappointment pointing towards the poster.
Sharon pushed him in anger and walked top the other end of the road and sat on a bench totally miffed with her Santa of the Night and started wailing. She stopped a person who was going by that road and said "Look at that guy. . . He doesn't love me. . . He loves Deepika." The person gave both of them a confused look and left and a Swayam scraed to get beaten up by people like the Majnu ran up to her and said "No Sharon you are beautiful more than Deepika. . .You are gorgeous, lovely."Sharon clapped hearing him and emptied the half empty bottle in her hands which she had been holding all this while and kept her head in Swayam's lap.
"You are the most amazing person I have ever met. . . Simple,Kind,childish. . .TYou have so many shades and how should I tell you I love all of them" Swayam said dreamigly and looked at Sharon who has already passed out in his lap long ago.
Swayam looked at her lovingly and kissed her forehead taking her in his arms to the car and they slept for the rest of the night.
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Okay! I am extremely sorry to people who expected something romantic and didn't like this. . . Sorry! Do comment your views about this. . . I just wanted to do something different.


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Posted: 10 years ago
res
unres
yee
me 1st
woho
finally u updated
my wait is over
coming 2 d update
it was awesome as usual
sharon thinking about d change in der relationship
n spending time with him in evening
swayam came n complimented her
even in dat phase which she hate d most
its true love gives u new eyes 2 see d world n d partner
den both going 2 complete her wishes
vaise fireflies is my personal wish n vodka also
n den both had vodka
i was literary rofling at deepika part
he wants 2 talk 2 deepika n she wants him 2 give all his attention to her
she stopped a person
bt thank god dat person disnt beat dem
d last scene was damm cuet she sleeping in his lap
n den he giving her forhead peck
diii
update d next part supersoon
Love
Mansi

PS-I knw thoda bada n boring tha comment bt mera dil kiya to likh diya
Edited by Mansi98 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
I have already read the update twice 😛
everytime u update it feels its the nest chap of SS :( but again next time you break your own record _/\_ this was one such
whole concept of an evening together was beautiful in itself
and doing out of the box things which Sharon wanted to experience that was so romantic, though he still hadnt come with his feelings for her but he do love her, as he said i love all the things about u ^_^
awww since i'm imagining wonder what what -_-
want update soon 😭

thanks alot di
Edited by sanchiswaron - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
I don't know about others but I am actually glad that you didn't make it a romantic date, it would not have been this good for this situation as this update shows how swayam discovers the real sharon and makes her to meet her real self after many years of her being in her shell of being a dazzling the last line said by swayam about the real sharon shows that he is discovering her and bringing her back and has started loving her...now waiting them to wake up in swayam's car sleping with their heads on each other's shoulders...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome.as usual

Yup sharon must be looking stunning in casuals..

Omg
Sharon's wishes
Fireflies...vodka
Like seeiously

Greay

Thanks 4 d pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wonderful update it was amazing:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesum update. ..
They both r amazing...sharon's changed look then swayam's pagalpan for deepika haha...soo funny loved it
Thankz for PM
Update soon

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