SwaRon SS: You are my 'It'Boy!FINALE UP on Pg29] - Page 12

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Mansi98 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow
dis was d best update of dis ss
finally he is starting 2 understand d real sharon
n nt d fake 1
nw he knws she is nt dat arrogant 1
i like d part when sharon helped amar
dats so sweet of her
d best part of dis update was dance
it was so blissful
infact it was magical coz of ur writing skills
i like d part when he pecked her unknowingly
something is starting between dem
he also feels fr hope
hope his feelings soon turn in 2 love
update d next part soon
n thanx fr d PM
Love
Mansi
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Posted: 10 years ago
OMG this was extremely beautiful.
The way Sharon took Amar's side. They way you showed that sharon is much more than a dazzler. Her attitude. Way of showing amar the reality. Beautiful. *applause*

And the last but not the least. The SwaRon scene. 👍🏼
The dance *dreamy* please give a confession soon.
Just can't wait.

Thanks for the PM. Update soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
This is really amazing...
U just perfectally put every word, emotions, pain, love at accurate place...
Awesome writting yaar...
Now I am at loss of words...
Thanx fr writting such an amazing story...
It's a delight fr me to read it...
Keep it up...
Thanx fr pm...
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Posted: 10 years ago
sorry mona
iam editing it this late

the chapter was super awesome
as all the other chapters
sharon taking a stand for a weakling was really nice
and added a new shade to sharons character
swayam is amazed to see her like this
and swayams thoughts and perception towards sharon is nice to read
the last part was which i loved the most
the soft music and a soulful dance in eachothers embrace where they are lost in each other
eager to read further so jaldi update kar meri jaan

love
shini
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Posted: 10 years ago
I hav just one word "Beautiful"
m damn speechless...

you r AWESOME!

wow wow...
M really short of words.

lovely. keep writing plz. plz.
update asap.

Love,
Sakshi ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
heya chitra'
really sorry 4 commenting late
was busy
but each and every update was a real treat to read
but this update was somthng out of wat i thot
swayam askd sharon 4 a dance wid him
their convo was well penned
it was much needed in the story
sharons feelings are so pure
swayams concern wen he askd if she was hurt
and one more thing i totally loved this line
"I don't like you Swayam. . .What I feel is much more. . . My love for you doesn't hurt me Swayam.
superb awesome work dear
do update soon
willbe waiting 4 the next chapter
thnx 4 d pm
and pm me the next time u update
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Posted: 10 years ago
The Dance Fest has been memorable in many ways and the most important being the one that it decreased the Dazzlings Weaklings difference. Now seeing a Dazzling guy with a Weakling hanging out was okay. Everyone was sitting in the class . . . The guys talked about some new video game whereas girls were planning a slumber party at Simmi's place. But nothing did interest Swayam . . . He sat at the last bench looking towards the door every now and then for a glimpse of Sharon. . . He had been desperately waiting for Sharon. . . The moment they shared in rehearsal hall that day changed a lot of things between them or to be more precise for him. . . Sharon had come out so openly with what she feels for him, not that she has hid it anyways since she confessed. The thought flashed the memory of that day. . .How she barged in his table threatening Leila to be away from him and confessing her love in haste. He chuckled at her jealousy.
"Where are you Darling?" Swayam mumbled to himself. Wait! What? Darling? Did I just refer to Sharon as Darling? Oh Gosh! Swayam Shekhawat you have officially lost it. It was okay till she invaded your dream world writing her name all over it, being restless to hear her voice, and thinking about her all day wanting to fly to her. . . Seriously it was okay. But Darling??? Too much . . . Talk about the things she was doing to him.
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Sharon entered the class grabbing everyone's attention with the DIVA she was. Swayam noticed a sudden silence in the class and looked up from his cell phone and saw Sharon standing at the door. . . She waved Hi to her friends and then her eyes started a search for someone and landed over to him who was busy giving glares to lustful eyes of guys gawking at her. She waved a hi to him and was going to sit at her usual place beside Reyaansh when he motioned her with his eyes to sit at the empty seat beside him. She looked at him clueless but anyways happily followed his instructions and sat beside him earning coughs and mischievous comments from her gang which deepened the red color on her cheeks. Just then the professor entered saving her from any more embarrassment.
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Swayam was nibbling the cap of his pen looking at his bald economics professor explaining the Keynesian Short run consumption curve. Someone needed to tell him that guys were all for curves just not the consumption curve. He looked at Sharon to share his boredom but she seemed fully engrossed in whatever Hebrew that professor was talking. Swayam kept his head at Sharon's shoulders looking for some comfortable sleep when he felt her go stiff with the contact of their skin as she halted with whatever she was noting down. She looked at him in surprise and he just gave her a When-this-class-is-going-to end-look. She nervously passed a weak smile at him as she let out a heavy breath closing her eyes and Swayam smirked seeing his effect on her. An idea popped in his mind as he nuzzled a bit deeper in the crook of her neck as if trying to sleep breathing too close to her skin infuriating sparks and emotions within her. Sharon was having a hard time controlling herself and to add to the churning in her stomach . . . They were sitting in the midst of an Economics class with at least fifty other students in the same class. Thank god there was no one sitting at the beside row to watch this intimacy. As he nuzzled deeper in her neck sliding his hands around her belly preventing him to lose all her control Sharon closed her eyes taking his name in a soft moan begging him to stop the torture. Just then the bell rang bringing them back to earth as they realized what they were doing in the midst of a class. . . Sharon closed her eyes trying to catch her erratic heartbeat as Swayam tried to analyze what made him do such a thing. He looked at Sharon who looked flushed because of his actions and he smiled enjoying her reactions. She got up to leave the class not able to look at him when the girls stopped her in her way
"Hey Sharon! We are planning a slumber party tonight at my place. . . It's that okay with you?" Simmi said.
Sharon was all excited hearing about All girls party and was going to answer in a yes when her eyes met Swayam's who was still sitting at his seat smiling and shaking his head in a no. She looked at him and was just not able gauge what he was up to.
"Sharon? What happened? Where are you lost? You are coming right?" Simmi asked her again.
She looked at Swayam making his way out of the class room and said "No Simmi . . . I don't think I will be able to make it . . .I have got some work. . .Maybe some other time" Sharon answered with the best smile she could manage under his gaze after whatever happened a few minutes ago.
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Swayam was standing at the terrace and thought about the last few days he had been with Sharon. . . During the whole Dance Fest he actually came to know how wrong he was in judging her. . . But now when he does her real self and Sharon would say I love you. . . Will he still say no? Never ever in his life he has lost his control over himself the way he did today. . . But he wasn't regretting it . . . On the contrary he felt happy when he saw Sharon blushing because of him. The past few days over phone conversations, normal talks he has been feeling a kind of connection with her. . . Something which keeps him restless. . . Something which pushes him to do the kind of craziness he did today. . . Something which wants her to be with him always. . . He just couldn't name this "Something". Attraction? Infatuation? Or is it . . .Love?
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"Hey Sharon" Swayam saw her in an empty classroom reading some novel. Had to be something romantic. She had been trying to avoid him since Economic class.
"Umm. . .Hi. . ." Sharon said surprised to see him there and lowered her eyes. Who would have thought The DIVA can be so shy after an intimate encounter.
"Swayam I need to go. . . I have some work. . ." Sharon said getting up from her seat and walking past him.
He held her wrist and after a moment of stillness pulled her causing her to turn over and bang in his chest as he slid his hands around her waist looking deep in her eyes trying to read the emotions.
"Why are you avoiding me? Do you regret whatever happened? If yes then I am sorry. . . I will keep a check on myself from now on if it hurt you. . . If you felt bad. . ."
"I never said I felt bad" Sharon cut him immediately looking into his eyes.
He smiled looking at her. How she makes him crazy with her innocence. He moved his hands and caressed her cheeks with the back of her knuckles as Sharon gaped with his touch. . . Why didn't he understand that he drove her crazy with this proximity. . . He made her weak on her knees. . . He made her feel like kissing him till the sun sets.
"I will not hurt you Sharon. . . I am sorry to hurt you in the past. . . For being so judgmental . . .For . . ." Sharon kept her finger on his lips.
"Forget it." Sharon said and smiled.
"As you say" He said giving the smile back.
"Why didn't you let me go with girls?" Sharon asked pouting.
"Because we are going to spend the whole evening together!" Swayam declared happily.
"Together???" Sharon said surprised.
"Yup. . .Be ready at 7.I will pick you up." Swayam said loosening his grip on her and fighting back the urge to kiss her right there.
He left leaving behind a happily stunned jumping Sharon not caring where they were heading . . .All she could think of was she saw the look in his eyes for her which she had craved for all these years. "Damn! Evening come fast" She said all excited for the most awaited evening of her life.
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Posted: 10 years ago
res
unres
aww diii
it was such a cuet update
i had a big smile while reading d whole updatr
d swaron scenes were jst so romantic
he sleeping on her shoulder
n she was getting so much affected by his touch
he didnt let her go
coz he wanted 2 spend time with her
jst cant wait fr evening
finally he is knowing d real sharon
finally both r coming close
hope dey come more close in next update
update soon
n i mean really soon
n thanx fr d PM
Love
Mansi
PS-Sorry fr d late unres
Edited by Mansi98 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
omg omg omg what was that ?? hayeee he slept on her shoulder what u did chitra I'm blushing like nothing u know how Sharon was feeling I can feel that n that saying no wow n d last they r going out I'm totally in swaron land now
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Posted: 10 years ago
Omg!!!! I'm speechless
What an update :o
Swayam is so not in his senses :3 that classroom thing was awesome :3 wonder why he did that :v
Head on her shoulder sliding hand on waist :3
And evening together :o
Such a shocking update :o
I want updateee !!!!
U should update this pretty soon :*
Edited by sanchiswaron - 10 years ago

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