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saakhi01

@saakhi01

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#181

Nice update... Shyam is making a mountain out of a mole...

Thanks for d pm..

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kshubhangi

@kshubhangi

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#182

very exciting.precap is interesting. will arnav ask anjali to move away? coz to bring out shyam's truth arshi need to be together

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Maham Iqbal

@candyjan

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#183

Wonderful dear

Continue soon

Do pm me plz.

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swtsam

@swtsam

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#184

awesome. ..loved the concept. ..looking forward to read more..
poor khushi...was targeted as she only comitted a big crime...
n arnav dint even flinch. ..when she was slaped thrice...dint even said a word to protect or defend her...thats the only thing that wad lil surprising..
n that evil snake filling anjalis mind against khushi. ...n she got manipulated. ..camt wait to read next update. ...
Please update sooon...waiting eagerly. ...

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Shah Sair Hassan

@ShahSAIR

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#185

haaay ye kya hogaya..

Anjali olways dumb hi rahegi...

Maami ka cunning nature same as olways..

N.K strong headed person and

finaly Nani.. i think sbs pehley usey pata chaleygaa

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Michelle

@-ChildOfChrist-

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#186

Nice update!

Shyam is up to no good and Anjali is being dumb

Lolz Mami ki thinking bhi kya hai!

I like Nani! She's smart!

And NK yaar he's so sweet! He just accepted the fact and moved on.

Hope to see some ArShi in the next update!

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fffan123

@fffan123

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#187

Absolutely fantabulous update. The creep has poisoned the Poojali's mind. Mami reaction was as expected as was Mamas. Loved Nani and NK. Looking forward to next update.

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yoga123

@yoga123

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#188

Wonderful update...thanks for the PM

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piyaarshi

@piyaarshi

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#189

Awsome. It was full of shyam's plotting, anjali's crying, Mami's crazy thoughts but Nk's feelings were the best... Just loved his pov. I guess i fell in love with him. Would love to wait till the next chapter comes. Thanx for the pm.