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ajeetha

@abivicky86

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#201

wah superb update would have love to see this on screen

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#202

Originally posted by: abivicky86
wah superb update would have love to see this on screen

Thats the best compliment I have ever gotten! Thank you!😳

Edited by Kalpana_KaCy - 10 years ago

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Rimi

@Rimi_BS

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#203

i m at first confused seeing ur this update heading...blinked twice...thrice...then saw yes it is there...
coming to update...aisa lag raha tha ki anjali pe bhoot sawar hai...i mean seriously, she is total dumb...its nice to see nani went with arshi as there support system...the parting scene made me emotional...but for the next part its khushi's turn to be betrayed!! Its making me tensed...just hope and pray to u that its not from arnav...
Plz do update soon...

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shiv456

@shiv456

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#204

wonder who it is awesome udpate

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#205

Originally posted by: Arshika_arshi
i m at first confused seeing ur this update heading...blinked twice...thrice...then saw yes it is there...
coming to update...aisa lag raha tha ki anjali pe bhoot sawar hai...i mean seriously, she is total dumb...its nice to see nani went with arshi as there support system...the parting scene made me emotional...but for the next part its khushi's turn to be betrayed!! Its making me tensed...just hope and pray to u that its not from arnav...
Plz do update soon...

Thanks for reviewing!

And did you really feel emotional during that parting scene? Wow! I am really touched to know that! I did not think I was that good! Thanks for telling me! Gave me a boost of confidence!😳

And no! It is not Arnav who will betray her! There won't be any betrayal from him! It will be someone else! It won't be Arnav, Naaniji or Nk! Thats all I wil disclose! Rest will be out next week!

Thanks once again for reviewing! Really enjoyed hearing your point of view!

P.S. What actually surprised you? That I updated or that the title said its only the beginning!😉

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#206

Originally posted by: shiv456
wonder who it is awesome udpate

Whoever it is, it is not Arnav! Pakka promise!

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thinkggreen

@thinkggreen

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#207

Hello,
Wow, Read all the four parts in a go.
Superb story line,Good to see Arnav supporting Kushi for once, but I have a feeling that Kushi will be betrayed by Arnav or may be Lavanya.
Nani's thinking process and her decision to join Arnav was so nice.She truly behaved her Age.
All the characters feelings so well expressed, keep up the good work.
Cant wait to read the next update.

Glad to know that it is not Arnav...Hurray

Edited by thinkggreen - 10 years ago

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#208

Originally posted by: thinkggreen
Hello,
Wow, Read all the four parts in a go.
Superb story line,Good to see Arnav supporting Kushi for once, but I have a feeling that Kushi will be betrayed by Arnav or may be Lavanya.
Nani's thinking process and her decision to join Arnav was so nice.She truly behaved her Age.
All the characters feelings so well expressed, keep up the good work.
Cant wait to read the next update.

Glad to know that it is not Arnav...Hurray

Thank you!😳

And thanks a lot for the review! Really glad you liked this story!

Oh! And Lavanya wont be negative in this story! She will be positive! In my other story DFL, people loved Lavanya and NK's jodi so here also I will use the same pairing!

Edited by Kalpana_KaCy - 10 years ago