ArHi SS: One Winter#1. Link for Th 2 on Pg 1 COMPLETED

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neverbefore

@neverbefore

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

I like that you started from Manorama mad Mahinder's perspective...they have a point of view which was never really heard. Can't wait to read the rest :)

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Sj236

@Sj236

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

woowww! I get to follow ur story dis tym! Dats amazing :)
cant wait to read more :)

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Shyamala

@shyamidutt

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Very interesting ! Loved the beginning and loved the way you wrote it. Looking forward to more. Now I have to go check out your previous works :) thank you

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@EchTee

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Good to c u back...

This ss seems to be interestig...

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

This is not a proper comment, but ofcrs this is NOT a res either... Loving it aready... Why have an update has to end... If only I could read on & on... I'm excited for this Saiyu... Nd welcome back writerji... U know how have I missed the writer-you... Love you for this... Details comment will come later, InShaAllah...
Nd thanks for the pm.

Edited by nishu_shorna - 10 years ago

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Uthra

@Viji79

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

I am excited.

I laauuu you.

I dont want to be a cause of scratch. So this is not a res.

Havent read yet, will do soon and come to this thread to comment.

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sk2405

@sk2405

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

What a wonderful and beautiful surprise! It couldn't have been better.

I loved the character sketch especially Manorama. I always believed her character had a lot potential and they could do so much more with it and finally I guess we'll get to see a different angle here. The fierce and protective mother in her is beautiful. The way she retaliated back to Mahinder's casual 'my daughter' was commendable. I think she will go, meet Anjali.

The Gupta's this time are a new and a fresh set again. I can't wait to see the past events unfold and the circumstances under which Anjali and Shyam were forced to take such an extreme step be known. What do I say about Arnav-khushi except for thr appearances can be deceiving.

I wonder if a child Arnav felt his elder brother being snatched away by a certain little girl to cause the animosity between them.

Waiting for the next part.

Update soon. 😊