Arhi SS: Tewari & Sons, No. 23, Chandni Chowk (THREAD I)

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Ananya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#691

A) Goodness I love your writing. Feels like ki padhte hi jao padhte hi jao padhte hi jao.

B) I've always loveeed loved these sports quota jokes, in fiction or otherwise 😆😉

C) Khushi is too bholi and is always at the wrong place at the wrong time. Isme bechari ki Kya galti hai?

D) Arnav ki ma ki!!!!! She is terrifying! And ab toh aunty ji aur dhamal machane wali hai.

E) Arnav must get slapped by Khushi. In the present. Plisss.

F) Preeto 😆😆

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Uzii

@Uzii

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Posted: 10 years ago

#692

A very unique story n the way you are narrating fabulous.

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

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Posted: 10 years ago

#693

Oh oh that was a lovely update
Poor khushi, she has suffered a lot

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sslmay11

@sslmay11

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Posted: 10 years ago

#694

Radhika, its an interesting update. I liked how realistic the incidences were in this story. Be it Khushi's comment about sari with napthelene smell, her father making sweets for her visit... every single detail is relatable. Again as many has said, Khushi's melochony continues. I'm gald she has Preeto.

I don't know what to say about Poonam Raizada or HP or even Arnav. Everyone will react the way they perceive or programmed. It's a long way, for someone to learn from mistakes and try to amend. Glad that Arnav has realized what went wrong and wants to set it right for Khushi. But at this point of story, Felt bad for Khushi being taken for a ride by circumstances and people around her.

Love reading this story and the comments that follows. Brilliant writing. Eagerly looking forward this weekend:)

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CAMoon

@CAMoon

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Posted: 10 years ago

#695

Loved the update. Such a real world feeling for each interaction of the characters.

Mr Anand Raizada is a sweet man, but what poor timing for him and Khushi.

Khushi did get the internship and that is good.

Let's see what next set of difficulties await KhushiGupta567.

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kclovearshi

@kclovearshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#696

What the F Arnav meant by those words? If I'm not mistaken, he bought into his mom's words that Khushi mis-behaved with his dad to get the job? Did he forget the 15 year old Khushi's behavior when she came to his house the first time?

So Poonam Raizada did Khushi's character assasination and Arnav watched it happen?

This is not something that can be forgiven that easily at least not for a mere mortal like me

I hope I'm wrong though! May be he meant she purposely made him (his father) sick but what would Khushi achieve from that? Gosh the Raizadas' thinking is so contrived and to think this originated from HP😕

Edited by kclovearshi - 10 years ago

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meera06

@meera06

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Posted: 10 years ago

#697

Poonam Raizada is a terror..Even HP is scary...

BTW what the hell did Arnav mean?I wonder if Poonam got an all together different picture when she saw Khushi with her husband?waiting for that to be clarified..

You keep us giving us surprises with every update and I love them..

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Jyothi Rockzy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#698

Hey YB,

Ab mien kya kahoon...Khushi ki tho bad luck hi Kharab hai...

Where she good heartedly and caringly helped Arnav's dad and his mom just blindly thought worst of a girl and even worst ..her husband too... How could Arnav even give air to his mothers thoughts and blow it back on Khushi's face.. or did she think Khushi purposefully made her husband sick..?

Mano ya na mano...Khush always had soft corner over Arnav and never thought bad of Arnav inspite of his harsh remarks...always gave benefit of doubt to him.. It shows in the subtle ways she defended Arnav against Preetho's accusations...

Finally Aman's name popped up in Khushi's brain once...but it's in the form of a bit painful and unpleasant one...

But what's more intriguing is...if Khushi has not left college because of that meet then,,,why did she come in contact with Poonam Raizada again and what did she do to make her quit such promising future in college academically and in sports...

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1chilly

@1chilly

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Posted: 10 years ago

#699

One request please!

Arnav and his Ma deserve some punishment for their behaviour.

I wish and hope Khushi gives it to them.

How can they be so creepy?

What sick people!

You made my mouth water with the mention of Angoori petha.

Thankfully you didn't give the recipe, or I would have died a slow death.😆

I think I'll have to settle for some of 'Anandrams' packed mithai next time I visit the Indian market!😉

I love Preeto.

She is the breath of fresh air in this group of people surrounding Khushi.

Love the woman.

You left us with a cliffhanger again.

Now the wait for a new update begins again.

Will be waiting for the weekend.

Regarding your note, you don't really need to thank us, Radhika.

We all love love your story and your steady updates are thanks enough.

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mayurisb80

@mayurisb80

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#700

well its suddenly as if some put a hex on her...she seems to be near Mr.Raizada when disaster strikes and i really dont understand Poonam raizadas problem...Kushi was the reason her husband is alive or is her social status and appearances so very important so important that she seems to hate Kushi and instead of being thankful she makes her life miserable...and Kushi does not complain to anyone of what Mrs Raizada does...i wonder whats in store for her next ..even Arnav was mean though that was because he has not seen the full picture...

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