Arhi SS: Tewari & Sons, No. 23, Chandni Chowk (THREAD I) - Page 72

Fabulous update. I love the way this story is shaping up. You write so well ... even your descriptions of a place, a petha are so interesting to read. 🤗 I really feel bad for khushi, poor thing is always ill treated yet she never thinks ill of anyone. Love her character and her ethics. I hope that Arnav realizes how wrong he was to think the worst of her and really repents !! When you get a chance please update and if possible please accept my buddy request. That would really make my day !! :)

awesome. ..loved it. ..arnavs character is complicated though. ...
looking forward to read more...
continue soon...

Awesome update..

Kushi just lands herself in troubles..without any reason!

i hate this HP & Poonam...

This HP is the most annoying one i have read about.

I read this when I was sleepy and I am commenting now when I am again very sleepy...

I was hoping we will get the whole truth of the Raizada fiasco in this update. Par woh nahi huwa This was only the teaser, the real heartbreak is yet to come.

Poonam Raizada wasnt home. She couldn't have flown to her house after Khushi followed Anand Raizada to the bedroom. That means HP contacted his annadaata as soon as Khushi took a seat in the house. Poonam might be sick who thinks Khushi is following her husband at work and home with illicit designs. But HP is sicker if he can look at a middle class teen girl, think the worst of her and warn his m'lady back home 🤢

In the only conversation between ArHi in the present, Khushi had told Arnav that she doesnt know how Arnav views the past but she never thought of them as friends then and cannot do so even now. Well how could she? He too thought that for a little internship, for a little money she could trap his father. Did Arnav forget that this girl is so shy that she didnt enter his house all alone with him? Or this pricked his ego too? A girl who cannot comfortably accept his compliments when she dresses differently, can actually go all the way for his dad, be alone in the house with him and enter his bedroom too. Wait! He really thought Khushi wore the saree for his father in that way. Yuck! Forget Khushi. She is a stranger, an outsider. Par Anand Raizada toh family hain na? How could Poonam and Arnav think so low of their husband and father respectively. If I were Anand mujhe bohot bura lagta...

Chalo this answers one question: Arnav's guilt. If he had been present for tea, he could have looked after his father or vouched for Khushi's innocence.

Also, I had mentioned Arnav had a soft corner for Khushi. This issue would have taken care of it. In case of Khushi, if the Aman case started it, I am sure the end of this fisaco could have completely taken care of Khushi's 'feelings' too

When life was actually looking up for Khushi... 😭 She not only wanted to fix the toilets for her parents, she also wanted to fix their lives. She worked hard at the internship, hoping for a steady job in the future. She studied hard and did sports harder... Then why her? Where is justice over here? 😭 See the hidden melancholy in your updates 💔

From looking forward to a comfortable corporate life Khushi has been relagated to salvaging a mithai shop all alone. Kya ho gaya bacchi ke saath 😭 Arnav better redeem himself and may Poonam Raizada move to Antarctica! 😡

I like how you mention Anjali's life in the background when you write the notes. Garima is also acting weirdly. This has to do with the T&S mystery, isnt it?

--- Other things:

I love sweets. I can eat any mithai (and fruit) but not petha. It is bleh... I didnt fantasize about mithai in this update

I am sure you are related to the academia. How else could you give such accurate picture of the halat of libraries during exams and the boys girls ratio in Arts, particularly in Literature/ English? I was an Arts student who studied Eco for 2 years in Junior College and Literature for two years in degree. I have seen all this happening right in front of my eyes! 👍🏼

U know this is height of misunderstanding.
poor khusi.

Awesome story...

Originally posted by: Rasgulla_sp

I read this when I was sleepy and I am commenting now when I am again very sleepy...

I was hoping we will get the whole truth of the Raizada fiasco in this update. Par woh nahi huwa This was only the teaser, the real heartbreak is yet to come.

Poonam Raizada wasnt home. She couldn't have flown to her house after Khushi followed Anand Raizada to the bedroom. That means HP contacted his annadaata as soon as Khushi took a seat in the house. Poonam might be sick who thinks Khushi is following her husband at work and home with illicit designs. But HP is sicker if he can look at a middle class teen girl, think the worst of her and warn his m'lady back home 🤢

In the only conversation between ArHi in the present, Khushi had told Arnav that she doesnt know how Arnav views the past but she never thought of them as friends then and cannot do so even now. Well how could she? He too thought that for a little internship, for a little money she could trap his father. Did Arnav forget that this girl is so shy that she didnt enter his house all alone with him? Or this pricked his ego too? A girl who cannot comfortably accept his compliments when she dresses differently, can actually go all the way for his dad, be alone in the house with him and enter his bedroom too. Wait! He really thought Khushi wore the saree for his father in that way. Yuck! Forget Khushi. She is a stranger, an outsider. Par Anand Raizada toh family hain na? How could Poonam and Arnav think so low of their husband and father respectively. If I were Anand mujhe bohot bura lagta...

Chalo this answers one question: Arnav's guilt. If he had been present for tea, he could have looked after his father or vouched for Khushi's innocence.

Also, I had mentioned Arnav had a soft corner for Khushi. This issue would have taken care of it. In case of Khushi, if the Aman case started it, I am sure the end of this fisaco could have completely taken care of Khushi's 'feelings' too

When life was actually looking up for Khushi... 😭 She not only wanted to fix the toilets for her parents, she also wanted to fix their lives. She worked hard at the internship, hoping for a steady job in the future. She studied hard and did sports harder... Then why her? Where is justice over here? 😭 See the hidden melancholy in your updates 💔

From looking forward to a comfortable corporate life Khushi has been relagated to salvaging a mithai shop all alone. Kya ho gaya bacchi ke saath 😭 Arnav better redeem himself and may Poonam Raizada move to Antarctica! 😡

I like how you mention Anjali's life in the background when you write the notes. Garima is also acting weirdly. This has to do with the T&S mystery, isnt it?

--- Other things:

I love sweets. I can eat any mithai (and fruit) but not petha. It is bleh... I didnt fantasized about mithai in this update

I am sure you are related to the academia. How else could you give such accurate picture of the halat of libraries during exams and the boys girls ratio in Arts, particularly in Literature/ English? I was an Arts student who studied Eco for 2 years in Junior College and Literature for two years in degree. I have seen all this happening right in front of my eyes! 👍🏼

Saiyyu, I wait to read your comments as much as I wait for Radhika to update it.

If I were Anand mujhe bohot bura lagta...poor Anand..he doesn't even know she was fired and of course he won't know what Poonam did to Kushi..he isn't much active in business any more.
In the present , we hardly know what is Anand upto other than golf with friends..he might be devastated to know Kushi ended up with nothing just bcos she saved his life :-( I don't think he has any umeed from his wife but he will be disappointed with his son..