Arhi SS: Tewari & Sons, No. 23, Chandni Chowk (THREAD I)

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anu1017

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Posted: 10 years ago

#701

Awesome update!!! Totally loved it Radhika!!! The mystery continues, cannot wait for the next update!!!

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Arilip

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Posted: 10 years ago

#702

Not liking Arnav in this one...

What's wrong with Arnav's mom ,the girl saved her husband !!!!!!!

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ILoveFF

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Posted: 10 years ago

#703

I hope all goes well for Khushi

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733619

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Posted: 10 years ago

#704

Interesting update. Very well written.

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Asma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#705

Seconding the idea of a Raizada genocide. Wait. Is Akash a Raizada? No, he isn't? Okay then. Seconding the idea of a Raizada genocide 😆

But one can't blame Arnav. He has always been like that. Uske dimaag mein ek baat chap gaya toh, bas chap gaya. Hope somebody plans to kidnap Arnav, because that is the only way he is going to get past this.

While the Thursday at Raizada House was the focus, I saw how you sneakily threw in that bit about Khushi meeting Mr Tewari. I think I need to reread this a couple of times to get all the threads and social commentary that you make through the update.

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rvas

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Posted: 10 years ago

#706

Felt really sad for khushi but I love the way you have written her, resilient but caring, she comes across as a person who is genuine but knows that life is not easy and soldiers on despite the circumstances...having said that boy does she have bad situations one after the other randomly following her..love this story...can't wait to read more

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cineraria

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Posted: 10 years ago

#707

Haila I saw the update. Dropping my Roomaal here, although this is no DTC bus (and DTC buses don't even encourage roomaal drops for reserving a seat, but anyway)

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xxSassyxx

@xxSassyxx

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Posted: 10 years ago

#708

Just stumbled across your story. Really well written with many layers, and fully rounded characters - thoroughly enjoying it.

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Tiramisu_coffee

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Posted: 10 years ago

#709

You are making such an ameer-gareeb, mundane story so very interesting! It's not Balaji type filmy dialogues that scar you for your whole life; it is small frowns, careless gestures, utter helplessness of being stuck in a situation you can't seem to get out of, makes your life miserable... Can't wait for the light at the end of the tunnel ...

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kritash

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Posted: 10 years ago

#710

poor kushi, why she have to suffer like this.
really it is better for her to be as far as these raizada's.
but no one can avoid their fate it seems in kushi's case.

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