Arhi SS: Tewari & Sons, No. 23, Chandni Chowk (THREAD I)

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CheshireBilli

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Posted: 10 years ago

#261

Uff it's 1.40 AM and I am sleepy but I had to read this because I had to and now I'm just hungry. Uff.

Be back later.

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meera06

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Posted: 10 years ago

#262

Lovely update..

I love how you write everything in detail, be it about the ladoos or the clothes that Khushi was wearing..everything is neatly described...

Now we know about the history of Tewari & sons,I wonder what happened to the Gupta sweets shop.Mahesh liked Garima? ,is that the reason why the shop was passed on to her..

I like Poonam Raizada..I mean she is not that typical vamp which you see in serials..would be interesting to read a conversation between Payal and Poonam..

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meem17

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Posted: 10 years ago

#263

loving it...cant wait to see where it goes

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rvas

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Posted: 10 years ago

#264

Loved the update...khushi seems pragmatic and arnav very confused like he's looking for so ething but has no clue what it is...loving this story

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SS88

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Posted: 10 years ago

#265

Damn, so this is why Khushi is at Tewari &Sons. But was Mr Tewari in love with Garima? Or had brotherly feelings for her and so decided to leave the business to her? That's quite interesting.

I love how cool as a cucumber this Khushi is. She's happily giving away the middle finger to the entire New-On brood. It's as if their interactions matter little to her. But I do think, she is very hurt. And she just wants to forget. What did happen between Lavanya, Arnav and Khushi?

The best dialogue-" I don't know how you see the past, Arnav, but we were never friends. Which is okay. And the truth is, we never will be in the future either. Which is okay too." Burn!!

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Ananya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#266

Aah so THAT is the Tewari story. Nice history. I loove how most of Chandni chowk shops have fascinating stories to tell. This one did too. But why was Garima's name in the will?

And ok I've to say that I quite like Poonam Raizada. I could very well visualize her and she makes a very beautiful and fascinating picture! I would love to read more on her.

Ok wow...khushi's confidence! Arnav thoda smart ass ban raha tha but Khushi ne toh dahi bhalle khila ke uska moo band karwa dia. Bada aaya "we were friends once" bolne wala 😃 you go girl!

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anera

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Posted: 10 years ago

#267

what does arnav want now from khushi

asking for sorry or something
and being friends again?
he shoud ask payal first bcz i dont think she would like it?

and poonam raizada ---i cant say much about her
greedy for money
dont like pyal bcz she self is like payal?

so kushi teaches in colleage?
love the update

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just_juhi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#268

yaar... Ye update padke mujhe boht bhook lagri!! I have a sudden craving for dhai bhalla 😃 Seriously though, your attention to detail is simply wow!! Honestly, my mouth had started watering with your descriptions.

I had to LOL at Arnav's awkwardness leading up to and during the conversation with Khushi. It almost makes him seem like he's one us and not some otherworldly person who's always full of confidence and all that.

Loved the update! And looking forward to more insight into what happened with their supposed "friendship". BTW, do you have a PM list or anything for updates?

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anu1017

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Posted: 10 years ago

#269

Awesome update!!! Totally loved it!!! Cannot wait for the next update!!!!

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Anamika100

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Posted: 10 years ago

#270

These are no ff stereotype characters. Love the depth that the characters have here. Poonam Raizada sounds fascinating and I have no idea why but I just do not like Payal and it is not because she is marrying Arnav but I think her pragmatism disturbs me.

I also like NK and Anjali Di a lot.

Who is Khushi? What is the mystery behind her current life...she was going to college before Arnav came to pick up the order...is she a lecturer?

I am also dying to know what happened between Khushi and Lavanya.

Why does Arnav want closure with her?

Edited by Anamika100 - 10 years ago