Arhi SS: Tewari & Sons, No. 23, Chandni Chowk (THREAD I)

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mika17

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Posted: 10 years ago

#271

Hi love da concept of ur story and how u portray da characters

Could u pm me wn u update

Thnku

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msmarple

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Posted: 10 years ago

#272

Loved the update.

I am now craving for a plate of dahi bhalle myself :-)

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ocean28

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Posted: 10 years ago

#273

I really liked the update and this strong khushi is so attractive. I like angali too, who pretends to come off strong but is vulverable. About arnav I am not too sure. At least he admits that he used to a classist pig. And payal do not like her even a bit. Arnav's mom seems complicated. Cannot wait to read what she thinks of khushi.

Thank you again, looking forward for more.

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zafi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#274

Superb update.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

I loved it.❤️

It was interesting to have Arnavs' moms perspective on her children and everything else.

Khushi is cool. I love her.

I am looking forward to reading more.

Thanks.😃

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sankadevi25

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Posted: 10 years ago

#275

LOVINGGG this SS! I love how complicated the characters are, especially Khushi! What's her story? Alsooo, it seems as though Arnav doesn't know what he wants :D Like when it comes to Payal. ARSHI ALL THE WAY, WOOHOO!

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yoga123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#276

Interesting chapter...Khushi recognized Arnav...Poonam Raizada character is very nice...she understood that some thing has gone wrong with her Son and daughter...would love to see her interaction with khushi...

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_disha_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#277

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just_juhi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#278

Originally posted by: _disha_

Haiii... K3G!! one of my most favourite lines from that movie!!!

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anisharoy1

@anisharoy1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#279

Finally. ... The mystery of Tiwari shop is solved. than this meeting. I have a feeling that arnav's mother will like khushi. .may be AR enterprises belong to her.

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Asma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#280

Don't know why Khushi is playing it cool, but I like her. Between Payal's pragmatism and Khushi's playing it cool, gotta worry about Arnav.

Poonam Raizada is the classic gunda. Like SRK said in the movie Chak De India, is team mein ek hi gunda ho sakta hai aur woh main hoon.. no wonder she does not want to see Payal as her daughter-in-law. But I feel Mrs Raizada will take a liking for Khushi.

Lavanya is back to feeling sorry for Khushi 😆 She clearly likes Khushi when she feels Khushi is in a more disadvantageous position than her. There is a certain dishonesty in her snootiness. I would take Payal over Lavanya.

Akash is just a nice guy and if Arnav wants to make any headway with Khushi, he needs to befriend his cousin methinks.

Both in the show and your story Garima Gupta remains the minor character who is most intrinsically linked to the crux of the premise. Still waiting for the Gupta-Tewari connection to open up. Wonder where Khushi's parents are though? I hope they are around, as they were such wonderful support to their daughter while she was growing up.

I like how you have written all the principal characters and have given them interesting backstories and also their own personalities and quirks.

Googled for Bedmi puri and nagori halwa. Sounds yum!