Arhi SS: Tewari & Sons, No. 23, Chandni Chowk (THREAD I)

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amus5

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Posted: 11 years ago

#221

truly a scarred two years...and good that she finally made it with flying colours...

thanx for the update...pls continue soon 😃

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ntmrjn

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Posted: 11 years ago

#222

Its high time to comment in this story..i love to read when there is new concept along with arhi.
When their past deals with what they were..arnav too silent but yet true whenever he spoke..khushi just seems dealing with being herself when everything is just not for her.
At present,khushi does have lot of problem.her shop is on mortgage is it? Arnav seems to want to talk with her but there seems lot to know.

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#223

well written update..good going..👍🏼

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IronButterfly

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Posted: 11 years ago

#224

LOVING it.

Keep it coming =)

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Asma

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Posted: 11 years ago

#225

Woah! That is a lot to take in. Will come back after a re-read later. BTW, this image is now stuck in my head. Sorry about the godawful editing though 😆

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pinkrose1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#226

hi nice concept...

its really so interesting...

update soon...

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MDTharun

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Posted: 11 years ago

#227

Khushi is given many names by her fellow classmates , but ''Champion'' & ''Dhanno" rocks😉 . Like we guessed Aman is not so rude but annoying . I feel motive behind his pranks was always to distract khushi from sports (may be trying to help Lavanya ) . Arnav behaved differently with khushi when he is alone & not caring when they are in school . Did Arnav to feel ashamed to befriend kushi because she was not from his class ? Everyone in the school have made khushi feel inferior , except Akash , not a surprise khushi is not interested in recognising Arnav .

Aman attempted suicide ,it was a surprise owing to his sunny nature . Arnav was holding khushi responsible for not attending calls on that particular day . So there is more to the story here .

Arnav - khushi have landed in same college , let us wait for the story to unfold its twist .

loving it⭐️

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Mina420

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Posted: 11 years ago

#228

Wow, you protraited Aman really well. It is true, you know that people who sometimes behave so irrationally only do that to hide their own state of mind.
I wonder what made Khushi ignore Arnav when she saw him so many years later. Agreed, they parted on bitter terms but that does not really mean she should ignore him.
I guess while everyone's life moved on, Khushi stayed back. Considering that Khushi is the little boy's bua, I wonder if Shyam returned. Where are her parents and what has her life turned into? I guess even with a completed degree she could have gotten a decent job but maybe something came in between.
Next update will back to present. I hope to see more of how Khushi's past looks like and maybe Arnav and Khushi meeting. With this story, I feel that you will come up with unexpected but new ideas and I am waiting to know that they are. Please update soon.

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CheshireBilli

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Posted: 11 years ago

#229

It is rare that fanfiction makes you relook at a section of your life and evaluate it all over again.

This chapter brought back so many memories of my own middle school/high school days, and not all were the nicest.

What can I say except you have a talent for making all the characters seem so real and easily imaginable.

Yes, what Arnav, Payal and the others did was nasty and uncalled for. But at 15, you do a lot of things you heartily wish you hadn't done when you're older.

And Arnav perhaps even felt justified. He wasn't correct, but with his best friend attempting suicide, maybe he needed a scapegoat which he found in Khushi. I mean, adolescent boys really aren't the most mature/bravest. Khushi was the easy target because she stood out and brought conflict into his previously comfortable world of privilege and blind class consciousness.

Poor Khushi. Man, I'd be scarred for life by what she goes through in thees two years.

Fickle friends aside, being interrogated by the cops for a classmate's attempted suicide? Therapy for years.

So Lavanya and Khushi were never really as thick as Arnav and Payal think they were, after all. Okay theory time. Lavanya seems to be fine with Khushi as long as she isn't directly competing with her. And she likes imagining romantic interest where none probably exists. MAYBE Lavanya liked a guy in college (Arnav?) who payed more attention to Khushi and Lavanya perceived it as a slight while Khushi was all 'IDGAF, you rich kids are nuts.'

It ties Lavanya's animosity, Arnav's discomfort, and Khushi's indifference together neatly. So it's probably not the right answer. *sigh*

Khushi may have had a hard life of it, but I get the impression that she's come out stronger and more emotionally stable than the others.

I hope Aman comes back some time. I'd like to see what he's made of his life. And it would be an interesting facet to the Arnav-Khushi equation.

P.S. This comment is also signed by a friend who is on an IF-vrat, but loves your story-- LooneyLuna.

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motichoorladoo

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Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#230

While they say that, what doesn't kill you makes you stronger I am not sure this elite school education was worth it for Khushi. Sure there must have been a buttload of character building, but at what cost? She was truly the round peg in a square hole. What little of present day Khushi that you have revealed does not suggest that she made much of her life. but I hope there is more to her than a Rapunzel Complex where a prince finally rescues her. So far your writing and characterisations have been top-notch, so I don't expect that you will make the characters one-dimensional as the story progresses. No pressure, just that you have set the bar high for yourself 😛

Colleges are more egalitarian spaces than school. Or at any rate there is a safe space for all kinds of people. Hope Khushi found hers.

Can't wait for the next chapter, when hero and heroine shall meet and rabba vey will be in the air 😆