Arhi SS: Tewari & Sons, No. 23, Chandni Chowk (THREAD I) - Page 24

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Posted: 10 years ago
This story is so so good, I'm simply eating it up. I find myself bursting into a soft chuckle at random, even dark parts because of the underlying sense of unintentional humor. The characters are well etched and defined there's such clarity, yet intentions and behavior is hidden from us. I'm so intrigued, but this is such a simple, amazingly engaging read that I don't mind the mystery at all.
This hits home because of all the highschool memories and the fact that I was always an outcast. I can relate so much to Khushi... I went to this elitist school and the disparity between the children of socialites and rich CEOs and me.

About Aman's suicide, I had one...acquaintance in the 11th grade. She'd fallen in love with her tution teacher who was 23 and was determined to spend her life with him...not knowing he had lured many such girls for money. She used to gift him Iphones and shirts...it was disturbing. I think I was quite desperate for acceptance and she sort of emotionally leeched off me (because she was never a friend to me) and I often let her. I know it seems selfish, but so was she. Eventually, the police were involved and she attempted suicide due to the shock of his betrayal. Finally, after a couple of years of therapy, she was better. Last I heard, she was studying fashion in London.

I don't know why I shared this...but it's always felt like I've viewed my highschool life like an outsider...never really part of anything.


Oooh the nostalgia is so strong. Can't believe I debated reading this for over a week.

Sorry for the incoherency and grammatical errors, it's 2 am here
Edited by Vibranthues - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
i just came across this...n OMG this is such a fantastic story...very very interesting...
loved everything about this story... oh wow n Aman trying to commit suicide...tht was a shocker...and all his friends were not even concerned... instead playing pranks ...how insensitive of them...
even arnav was irrational... may be he was angry with khushi...but this is no way to react...
glad aman came bk n had ice cream with khushi...wonder wat happened then :)
but i dont understand Arnav... when alone he is very nice and cares for khushi and when with everyone else...ignores her... is he ashamed of being friends with her?
La...she is one another character...she seems to be friends with khushi but as long as she does not come in her way of winning in sports...
eagerly waiting for next
Edited by luvbug - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Brilliantly written ...

Could visualise the frustration Khushi went through having a delinquent person sitting
next to her in school ... it is really important to sit next to someone who you can at least
get along with ... and her fears came true after all ... Aman did bring her down academically
and in sports too by his immature antics ...

Peer pressure can be really damaging ... hated the way she was blamed for his attempted
suicide ... but in a way Arnav was absolutely right ... had she answered the phone at that
moment maybe the depression would have gone by without causing damage ... but who
knows what is going to happen next ... 😕

Now waiting to read what actually transpired between A and K in college to have made her
act in this weird manner when she saw him at the mithai shop ... as a total stranger ...

Thanks ... YellowBoots ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Brilliant update.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
I loved it.❤️
I am looking forward to reading more.
Thanks.😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
I loved Aman and Khushi's nok jhok 😳. I feel bad for aman.
So Arnav is angry with khushi coz she didn't receive the call...hmm
Is there more to arnav khushi's past? I know We'll have to wait for that 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
You've got quite an interesting fic here!! I love you're switching back and forth between the present and past- its giving me as a reader a better insight into their relationship. Anyways, keep up the great work and hope to see another update soon!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Your narrative style is simple, unpretentious and yet so effective at conveying the story. So easy to visualize and feel the emotions.

I feel like invoking karma on New-on-ites who pointed to Khushi for Aman's problems. What if Khushi was a weaker person and had done something like Aman did...would they have held themselves responsible for her miserable school life?

I really really want karma to strike Arnav and Payal and Lavanya...but then again...I will wait till I know the whole story. I am surprised that Arnav now is piqued by her...it seems like he had long ago forgotten her existence back after the Aman incident..so now why does he even care?
Edited by Anamika100 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Verry different n intriguing story
Loving it so far
Pls upfate soon
N love love d long updates
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Posted: 10 years ago
Brilliant update
pls cont soon
pm me pls
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Posted: 10 years ago
Looking forward to the new chapter.

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